Simon41

Great developing story, really moving. BUT the chapters are just TOO bloody short!!!

Great continuing storey, but the chapters are just TOO SHORT!!

Good story but chapters way too short!! And too infrequent!! I guess that the 'Major' is going to be gay too??

Love the link/update to MardiGras Murders!! I loved that story and long felt it deserved an update!!

Great story, but alas chapters too short and infrequent!!

Question!...... Our of the Blue is a great storey, but what happened to the characters at the end of A Good Place?? E.g. Tony's pregnant sister and Aaron's little brother?? Will we get an update soon??

I've waited so long for a sequel or update on A Good Place (quite a few years) and two come along in quick succession!! Although, maybe Traditions is set after Out of the Blue, and not before!! I guess it's early days, but it would be good to get the 'update' on all the Good Place characters as well as developing the new.... But could you please hurry up the issuing/publishing of chapters, as I'm already hooked. Also long delays between chapters make it difficult to remain connected to the storey!

That was a shot ending. Don't do it again. your problem was having 3 stories on the go at once.... Up until this last part of R toC 27 everything was going well my only concern was that you brought in fantasy money.... Plus I think you got bored!

Does anyone know anything about C James and his background?? Are there any biographical notes?? If he is writing under another pen name..... What is it?? I really enjoyed the longer stories.....they had real excitement and thrill!

Great story.... But what has C James been doing for the last 9 years as no new stories have been published here since 2014?!?!

End of another chapter (4)..... Just too quick!! And another twist to the story. Just can't wait for the next instalment.

Nice Friday morning treat but alas the chapter was only just enough to see one's appetite for much more!!

Great story! Just note that teenagers in the UK do not generally 'fist' one another.... The term used here is 'fist bump'..... The former term is way more sexual (generally means anal fisting) than probably intended.

Sensitivity written sufficient to raise a tear in the reader. Alas the short story was a little too short!! You could have explained how the attackers knew that Mitch was gay.... Also you could have easily extended the part around the attack in self and afterwards. BUT still a great story .... Oh to have such talent! I'm looking forward to you next instalment but hopefully it will be somewhat longer.

Great uplifting and heart warming story! A bit too short as you could have easily filled in Dale's transition.... But bloody great nevertheless.