Simon41

That was a shot ending. Don't do it again. your problem was having 3 stories on the go at once.... Up until this last part of R toC 27 everything was going well my only concern was that you brought in fantasy money.... Plus I think you got bored!

Well I agree....the death of Carlos Hazday is a great shame... Not least as he was only a few years older than me.. Obviously I didn't actually know the man but I loved his writings and characters..... They were my 'friends'!! I was surprised that he published the continuing story outlines as they were no substitute for his writing.... Indeed I was disappointed... But now I understand why.

Is CH dead or is he just taking a break from writing/posting??

This implies that CH is dead?? Or has he stopped writing/posting??

Does anyone know anything about C James and his background?? Are there any biographical notes?? If he is writing under another pen name..... What is it?? I really enjoyed the longer stories.....they had real excitement and thrill!

Great story.... But what has C James been doing for the last 9 years as no new stories have been published here since 2014?!?!

End of another chapter (4)..... Just too quick!! And another twist to the story. Just can't wait for the next instalment.

Nice Friday morning treat but alas the chapter was only just enough to see one's appetite for much more!!

Great story! Just note that teenagers in the UK do not generally 'fist' one another.... The term used here is 'fist bump'..... The former term is way more sexual (generally means anal fisting) than probably intended.

Sensitivity written sufficient to raise a tear in the reader. Alas the short story was a little too short!! You could have explained how the attackers knew that Mitch was gay.... Also you could have easily extended the part around the attack in self and afterwards. BUT still a great story .... Oh to have such talent! I'm looking forward to you next instalment but hopefully it will be somewhat longer.

Great uplifting and heart warming story! A bit too short as you could have easily filled in Dale's transition.... But bloody great nevertheless.

Is the Premium story linked to CJ?? If so how does the general reader gain access?

Ok.... The overall 'problem' is of your own making...if the story wasn't so captivating, then we wouldn't want you to fill in the gaps!! Yes Flying Circus is a great read... But I'm afraid that I'm hooked and would love to read about the gap in between. You have created such wonderful characters..... I just want more. So please carry on writing and it would be really fantastic if you could fill in the gaps.... Plus provide an update on the Squad and their lives/loves. Thanks Simon

Is it your intention to use Flying Circus to fill in all the taps between Mexico/Florida and the 'present day' (ie Flying Circus 2027) or will you be providing us, your avid readers, with a separate novel/ chapters to fill in the gap??

What story is the follow up to Porcubines??