Nahrung

Fletcher did say that he was one of seven children but he didn't say where he was in the line-up.

I live in a Southeast suburb of St. Paul, MN. When he was young, my son asked me why they put two big cities, Minneapolis/St. Paul right next to each other. I explained that, back then, a horse and wagon ride between the two was an all-day adventure. By car, it's only 10 minutes. He got it.

Another good old-west story! Thank you! Would be cool if Fletcher and Augie get honest and figure out a way to make a home together at Gran's place, though I'm guessing that's that's kinda where this is going... Then again, I'm guessing that something will happen with Audie, Rob and Albert to make the plan either really easy or really hard. I'm curious how Augie receives or sends letters without his dad or brother knowing.

Yeah... I had the same problem with 'The Brotherhood'. I really like the story but stories like yours with so much detail, twists and turns, I have to keep back-reading to figure out what's happening. Great story!

Well, Well, Well... more twists, turns, hallucinations, dreams, time travel, flint, no flint, right flint, wrong flint... Honestly, Laura... there's something really wrong and weird about this story. I can't stop reading it but I've stopped enjoying it. It seems to be really STUCK in some kind of a loop!

It's actually awesomedude.ORG. Medellin is on there up to Ch. 23. The last chapter was posted on GA on 3/16/26... '15. Our Own Thanksgiving'.

These three are recognizing the power of bonding, loyalty and unity. Unfortunately, Theo still sees these things as weakness and vulnerability. He doesn't get how becoming ONE will make the three much more powerful than the sum of three individuals. I hope I said that right... You get it... You're a pretty smart group.

Yeah, Connor played at the end-of-the-year Senior dance the year before and I remember him specifically musing about Trent graduating. AND THEN, AT THIS YEAR'S TALENT SHOW: 'As I mentally prepared for the impending performance, the door that led from the hallway to the backstage area opened, and none other than Trent Lomax came walking out -- wearing a frilly pink dress and thick make-up. I would have sworn he had had a sex change when I saw the enormous titties he had, until he reached inside his bra and started pulling out wads of Kleenex. My jaw was hanging open in shock, and I was speechless.' Anyway, GREAT STORY!!! Glad I found it...

Why does Theo believe that his pack are all dead? Where did he get that information from? We know that the witch is a master of lies and deception and it's starting to look like Theo's pack being dead is one of the lies it wants Theo to believe. Why? What advantage does the witch gain by Theo believing that his pack is dead?

Ryan's behavior looks like Asperger's (mild end of the autism spectrum) which usually involves some social detachment. Also, ADD doesn't usually exist on it's own... there's usually some additional disability there also.

Yeah... Toby having recurring little bouts of 'the flu' sounds suspicious for a kid in remission from Leukemia. I'm curious if Connor's rapist was ever identified and/or caught. I'm also curious about if Connor got anything from the sale of the trailer and its contents. Or maybe it was rented, not owned? I read that Maggie did go there and salvaged Connor's 'box' containing his cassette tapes. Didn't Connor have any other belongings, things that were special to him in his room or the trailer? Like, anything from his grandmother after she died? Keepsakes? Inheritance? There just seems to be a disconnect from his previous life that wasn't addressed very well in the story. I was an Adolescent Counselor so I get the progressive desensitization. I worked with kids who were physically and/or sexually abused and helping them learn the difference between 'good touch' and 'bad touch' was a common therapeutic tactic. Unfortunately, Connor's ONLY experience with anal sex was being raped so he doesn't have a 'good touch' frame of reference and has to totally RELEARN that particular experience. At the same time, Connor wasn't conscious during the rape so that adds a different dimension to the therapeutic process. Reading the description of Ryan's ministrations raises a few concerns about how he's doing it. Love the story! I just started reading it a few days ago. Not as much of the fun 'simile' as in 'Swing For The Fences' but a good story!

It just occurred to me that Charlie never asked about the 'data' that the Chelpee have on the Loturi. It seems to me that Charlie should want to know what this information is before he would agree to help the Loturi destroy it. It might be information that would be harmful to the Chelpee or other innocent people... like Earthlings?

In this story, I am constantly struck by the total lack of honesty between these three. None of them want to admit their attraction to Lyn and, of course, Lyn is afraid to admit his attraction to them. So much so that when Brad asks Alex about hitting on Lyn, Alex tells Brad that he doesn't have a chance with Lyn. AND THEN they blame Lyn for it all and create a whole story of how Lyn rejected/avoided the issue with THEM! I'm glad that Alex and Lyn finally got together... they certainly compliment one another. I'm still not sure what to make of Brad... He seems kinda lost.

Because of their different personalities, how they compliment one another and perform two different functions, like two halves of a whole, it seems to me that Vince and Jack are both destined to be Theo's mates. I don't see Theo picking one to the exclusion of the other. The TWO have become that ONE that Theo needs for a mate.

After reading the last Charlie Boon story posted on Story Lovers last year about this time, I emailed Geron Kees and asked when the next story would be and he told me 'sometime in 2025'. So, I patiently waited, checking his Author page on SLH for new posts. Imagine my surprise and delight to find him and Charlie Boon on GA!!! And then I find out that he started posting this story LAST JULY! Six months ago today! Although a bit annoyed and feeling a bit left out, I'm glad I finally found Charlie Boon's new hiding place. Thank you Geron!