Nate OBrien

Jesse looked over to Jake and said,” are you okay? I can’t believe him!! Are you hungry?” “You didn’t have to do that.” remarks Jake. Jesse looked at Jake with such a heart-melting gaze; Jake just looked up and said,” Thanks.” “Not all gay men are like that asshole, some of us take no for an answer. I’m sorry I should have never let you leave.” Jesse blamed himself. “No, its ok, you came to my rescue back there, I really appreciated it.” Looking over at Jake J

Jake has just been wandering the neighborhoods of Marshalltown, Iowa. What is going through his head could only drive him insane or drive him to love.

Sitting on the cushy red comforter on Jesse’s bed, Jake expunged about the terrible event that basically changed the way he lived. “It happened two weeks ago. I thought he was my best friend, but he just took advantage of me. When my parents found out they kicked me out, I would be homeless if it hadn’t been for my Uncle Isaac and Aunt Lea.” Jesse looked up and gave Jake a look of sympathy with his emerald green eyes. He could not believe how Jake could remain sane

It was a long night, Jake stood there at the intersection of 11th and Bromley. It was normally this time at night that made Jake comfortable with his psyche. Wandering he didn’t know if he should tell Jesse, his best friend, what his secret was. A secret full of pain yet detrimental to Jake’s personal character It was because of what had happened that made Jake roam the streets of Marshalltown from his uncle’s house on May Street. He would normally roam from that

I normally read very thoroughly.

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I unfortunately picked smoking back up, but for a better alternative i suggest listening to music loudly or reciting a mantra.

Very good story beginning so far makes me have goosebumps when they fall in love

Very Cool and It seems it could actually go this way. But, The suspense and the tension add to make it a wonderful start. I look forward to reading the upcoming additions to this story Good Job!!

one of my best friends normally sang that on a whim and remembering her makes me smile

Very Nice!! The whole story line has the foreboding preview of whats to come yet it can easily go the other way. I look forward to chapter 2

I love this story. It is believable in that i feel after the first chapter i would have gone through the same thing good Job!!