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loved it, very thought provoking!

Tristan redeemed himself a bit in this chapter. He's still kind of a whiner but I'm glad he's stopped being mean to Scotty.

I'm finding it really hard to like Tristan. The story is good but he comes off as a weak protagonist. He let's Jason treat him like a whore, he whines about no one loving him and then he turns around and treats Scotty the same way. I'm not saying he should take Scotty to bed, I mean he's 13, but Tristan is in a position where he could be a mentor to Scotty and perhaps both of them might gain something from it. Then there is Tristan's reaction to Jesse and his videos. He's basically net-stalking the guy and is to afraid to even comment on what he's seeing. I like this story, I see potential and I think Tristan will come around but until then, I find it hard to sympathize with him. Oh, and he says, "just," to much Sorry if I'm being too critical, trust me when I say I'm a big fan of your work!

Damn it, a cliffhanger! Great chapter, my only complaint is it was to short! I can't wait for the next one, I'm twitchy with anticipation.

Poor Parker. Such a betrayal.

Great chapter but I think Parker needs to be a little more freaked out about what is about to happen to him. I know I would be.

Someone did an interview with Totallyy awhile back. He's awesome so they couldn't resist featuring him again. I haven't read his work yet but it's definitely on my list!

Epic!

Is Parker going to change into a wolf too or will it be something cute and small like his human form? Maybe a Beagle? All joking aside, great chapter, I keeping checking to see if the next one has been posted. Excellent story.

For as disengaged and disapproving as Parker's parents seem to be, he got off pretty easy on that talk with his dad. The "talk," is always going to be awkward and sure, the last thing you want to hear is your dad's advice on being "some punk's bitch," but he didn't scream and yell, didn't kick him out on the street and didn't even say anything negative about Parker being gay. At least his dad wants him to be safe and to make good choices, even if he didn't communicate that in a loving manner.

I'm so Kate it's not even funny. Horoscopes, pssh. Nice little story. You have a good editor

This isn't the kind of story I usually enjoy but I have to say, it's great. I think you've really captured the fear and insecurities that come with being a small, lonely gay boy, without making Parker seem weak. He's adorable.

Wow.