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loved it, very thought provoking!

Tristan redeemed himself a bit in this chapter. He's still kind of a whiner but I'm glad he's stopped being mean to Scotty.

I'm finding it really hard to like Tristan. The story is good but he comes off as a weak protagonist. He let's Jason treat him like a whore, he whines about no one loving him and then he turns around and treats Scotty the same way. I'm not saying he should take Scotty to bed, I mean he's 13, but Tristan is in a position where he could be a mentor to Scotty and perhaps both of them might gain something from it. Then there is Tristan's reaction to Jesse and his videos. He's basically net-stalking the guy and is to afraid to even comment on what he's seeing. I like this story, I see potential and I think Tristan will come around but until then, I find it hard to sympathize with him. Oh, and he says, "just," to much Sorry if I'm being too critical, trust me when I say I'm a big fan of your work!

Damn it, a cliffhanger! Great chapter, my only complaint is it was to short! I can't wait for the next one, I'm twitchy with anticipation.

Poor Parker. Such a betrayal.

Great chapter but I think Parker needs to be a little more freaked out about what is about to happen to him. I know I would be.

Someone did an interview with Totallyy awhile back. He's awesome so they couldn't resist featuring him again. I haven't read his work yet but it's definitely on my list!

Epic!

Is Parker going to change into a wolf too or will it be something cute and small like his human form? Maybe a Beagle? All joking aside, great chapter, I keeping checking to see if the next one has been posted. Excellent story.

For as disengaged and disapproving as Parker's parents seem to be, he got off pretty easy on that talk with his dad. The "talk," is always going to be awkward and sure, the last thing you want to hear is your dad's advice on being "some punk's bitch," but he didn't scream and yell, didn't kick him out on the street and didn't even say anything negative about Parker being gay. At least his dad wants him to be safe and to make good choices, even if he didn't communicate that in a loving manner.

I'm so Kate it's not even funny. Horoscopes, pssh. Nice little story. You have a good editor

This isn't the kind of story I usually enjoy but I have to say, it's great. I think you've really captured the fear and insecurities that come with being a small, lonely gay boy, without making Parker seem weak. He's adorable.

Wow.

Nothing like fried potatoes, eggs and sausage for breakfast on a Saturday morning and I didn't even burn anything!

This was an interesting and thought provoking story. I liked how you took the mundane, a tedious archeological dig, and turned it into a huge can of worms. I also liked the open end, it forces you to think and let the mind have a little fun

I think I lost count of how many different ways you tried to say blond, but still, an interesting read. I feel like I'm missing something, how did Devin end up with Alex, or is that part of the story still to be told?

This guy sounds like Liz Lemon at her high school reunion. Her whole life she thought she was the victim when it turned out she was the bully. Kids are mean though, especially jr. high boys, I think it's because they jut don't know any better, or maybe it's bad parenting...

Oh my God, I got so caught up in thinking about the pranks my brothers pull on me that when I reached the end and found out it was a funeral, soooooooooooo sad. But, a great little story, you totally reeled me in and then dropped a bomb on me, good job.

Very cool! I can't wait to read more.

The last thing I ever thought I would do is write fan fiction, I'm really not that big a fan of anything, but then one day my friend started talking to me about Damian Wayne, the current incarnation of Robin and after a little research, I was hooked. Fan fiction can be really rewarding, I've got a great story about Damian and I'm really happy with the comments I've gotten from readers.

I stumbled into Boarders one night, not knowing that it was release day for Deathly Hollows. Long story short, I kicked a nerd in a Dumbledore costume, got the copy of Plato's Republic that I came for and grabbed a DH without having to wait in line all night. The point being, people love this world and if she writes a quality script, I see no reason why this movie won't be great. I mean, she can't be as big a sellout as Tom Clancy, anyone else read The Sum of All Fears, then see the movie and wonder, "what the actual f$%k?"

That was a great story, I don't have time to write more at the moment, but check it out!

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