Aditus
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I enjoyed your story very much. It made me smile right from the beginning. ...he felt as though someone had sucked all the moisture from his throat, beaten his body with bamboo poles, and then emptied a dumper truck full of bricks onto his head. This is simply perfect. I like how Stanley and Don struggled with the switch. How could he have grown huge, hairy feet overnight? I couldn't wait to learn how you'd manage the back-switch. The part where the cabby offered Stanley the choice between futures felt like bonus chapter. Thank you for this.
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Life is finite, we all know that. When suddenly confronted with this fact though, we're shocked anyway. At least it was so for me. I wish you all the luck! I like your approach: Hone my life back down to the essentials - enjoying each day, eating well, taking time for myself.
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I'm happy, you think so. Thank you, for your comment.
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Good thing I read this in bright sunshine, albeit in the garden... and, there were roses....well done.
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Well, I'm glad you did. I love reading comments to my older stories. It shows me that someone still reads them. Thank you!
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Thank you very much! You made my day. And I'm very glad you had such an amazing advocate.
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Absolutely. Sounds familiar.
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That caused some fireworks in my synapses. Still dizzy. Maybe some coffee. Or tea?
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Thank you, anthology support team!!!!
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Chapter 1 - A Chance Encounter
Aditus commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - A Chance Encounter
So many possibilities to play with: Maybe it was only a dream. O r the dream increased the likelihood they would talk to each other. Or, it was some kind of foreboding. Or.... Very nice. I enjoyed the story. It made me dream....haha. -
Your poems were very inspiring. At first, I looked the bird's German names up, as I wanted to know if I knew them. Warblers are all kinds of Sänger, the Ovenbird is the Pieperwaldsänger. Then I listened to their voices. Now I know your poems characterized them perfectly. Thank you for this.
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Flapdoodle - Word of the Day - Thu Jun 24, 2021
Aditus commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Okay, am I the only one who thinks of roadkill? -
Being himself gave him a boost. Thank you for your comment, headtransplant.
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Exactly! I'm so happy you said this: What a perfect summation.
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Chapter 1 Never Surrender
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Never Surrender
I read this on the phone and couldn't comment. Luckily I had a long sleeved shirt on , sniffling into said sleeves. I’ve tried to omit from my rather short life. Yeah, I totally understand this. No time for hate. Hate doesn't make sense anymore, if ever. Usually I don't read this kind of stories anymore. I don't have the stomach for it. But, as it was you, who wrote it, I gave it a try. You managed to combine sadness, with, pride , love and love. Perfect! Thank you for this. -
Very, funny, couldn't stop grinning. Thank you!
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A classic tale. Thank you for sharing.
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I can't imagine how devastating it is to lose a child due to your mistakes and ignorance. Cathy managed to make something positive out of it, and Jason can accept hug-free help. Thank you for sharing this up-bolstering ; ) flash.
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I loved Luna, so much I named my cat after her.
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It has been a little difficult to follow along the snippets from across the pond at first, but it led to a round of interesting googling, thank you for that. I enjoyed it and the story.
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Very cute story, I enjoyed it a lot.
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Yes, pride comes, from proud. Express your truth. Exactly. When your ready. Thank you, W_L.
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Dale waits for his best friend Avery at the coffee shop, and waits... When he finally arrives, Dale is in for a surprise. The story takes part in the June 2021 Pride Flash Fiction Challenge.
