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Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings, Gary. I loved it. Cliche...who cares.
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Strawberries have always been the epitome of not-winter to me, even in times where we can get any fruit at any time, imported from warmer countries. I'm happy you found things to savor in my poems, enjoyment is a very important part of life IMHO.
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I'm glad you enjoyed these and I could make you laugh.
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Thank you, Val. Did you find lime green tiles ?
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Thank you for reading, northie. I love that you think my thoughts jump rhythmically in contrast of erratically. Avian poem, I like this.
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Week 2 Day 8 Lost... Fingers fly over piano keys easily, detecting small imperfections only by touch, running over hill and dale, wind in hair— STOP! Focusing on sense of lost might help treasure the previously mundane again, but it poisons the mind eventually. The operative word is achievement, Not even regain, only plain achievement. (The sense of being/having lost) Day 9 Today the mind can’t latch on a given theme, focus on a certain mood, an image, or a
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I enjoyed the entire set. April seventh: I can relate. April tenth: I own an assortment of things that let me see people, open the veil between their world and mine, sometimes I even talk to them. April eleventh:Spring indeed! Thank you.
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I loved 'This Poem'. Joy rediscovered became tangible.
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Welcome, Alex.
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Their name pulled me in, duh, now I can't stop to listen to every song I can get my hands on.
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I just love it when people tell me their own stories and thoughts to my poems. Thank you for reading and commenting, Gary.
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I don't know how many pizza poems I already wrote. IDK whether it's the alliteration or pizza is one of my favorite food choices, along with tarte flambée, there might be a theme here. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it, Def.
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Thank you, Val. I found this new recipe.... picture will be send as soon as I tried it. I had the heron in mind when I wrote this. Wow. I'm glad I made you smile.
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Foolproofed Week1 Day 1 See chapter 1 Day2 Bumble bees bumble about gooseberry blossoms. Bzzz... Bluebirds bicker behind the berry bushes Tu-a-wee tu-a-wee... Bleeding heart’s buds bathe in the first warm rays of April’s sun. ... (Praise spring) Day 3 I can’t find my fucking phone. It’s later than I thought. I hate changing the clocks. The European Comission sucks. There’s cat hair on my tongue. The robins accepted the ne
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No one saw the pants yet, thank God, but my cats have many new admirers now.
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Especially with the new phone.....
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#5 is my absolute favorite of this set. It induced many fond memories of shared pictures.
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Chapter 84 The Nature of Nurture
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 84 The Nature of Nurture
If poems like this are the result, keep self-indulging. I don't know why, but I stopped breathing while I read your poem. -
I'm so glad you decided to partake this round of NaPoWriMo. I'm looking forward to the next parts. My favorite is April 3rd, might be because I can relate, never went to class in checkered pajama pants.
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Grazie tante, RafaelDe, thank you very much.
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I like your translation and interpretation, very much. I'm sorry for your loss, AC.
