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Aditus

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    Chapter 4

    Wow, that was fast, thank you. I have to agree, the idea of Ellis being a healer in a more spiritual way also, is beautiful. I hope the will heal each other in the future; and me having a migraine sometimes, I think that the venom could help Ellis with that problem too. Just an idea...
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    Hypnotic

    Ahhh, next chapter. I somehow thought I had to wait longer..., but I'm not complaining. When you first mentioned the Snake Carthera I really wanted to know more about them, they couldn't just all be bad... I mean that bad... and then you topped it by making a human and a snake being mates... great. Can't wait to read more... Thank you for writing another Carthera story.
  3. Okay, finally getting to chapter 90 (!) I think this is a good point to tell you what I think about this story. I'm new here and it was a looong way to go, but I never stopped or got bored, with other words I like it. I now know many things about boats and sailing and it almost was as if I visited all the mentioned countries, well some I actually did. Sometimes it were, at least for my taste, a tad too much details and too technical, but you were always able to hold the suspense so it's all good. I feel with Trevor, I like Joel, Lisa and Shane, and somehow Trev's dad also, I hate Bridget and Co., the side-characters are well elaborated too, I really want to know what happened with Trev's mom, I want to strangle Bridget, lol, I want the end and I want to read more. So, um good story!
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