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  1. flamingo136

    Chapter 9

    Rayne just needs to look into Daniel's eyes for their connection to begin their combined healing.....each needs the other.....love will will....I just know it !!!!!!!! :)Mike
  2. I recall, during my own pre-wedding counselling sessions, the good reverend making a point that you don't marry your mate...that you actually marry the entire family. At the time I thought he was nuts, but as it turns out...he was right. I know exactly how Andy was feeling during the meet the new brother in law dinner....not to mention that he is gay and underage. I'm quite surprised that it turned out as well as it did. I'm still hoping that things proceed smoothly and Andy and Zander are happily joined in marriage...I've got my fingers crossed.........:)Mike
  3. Hey Gary, I remember a time not so long ago when you commented that love scenes were difficult for you to write.....I'm calling bullshit.........That was beyond hot..........Way to go.......think I need a smoke about now....lol................:)Mike
  4. Tim, What a lovely way to start my day.....I envy the quick declarations of love and commitment between Peter and Patrick.....it fills my heart, beautifully..............:)Mike
  5. Parker, I just just pray that Andy doesn't get overwhelmed by all the demons that still torture his fragile spirit and do what he knows all too well...run. I admit that when noticing the chapter title, I did feel that might be a possibility; you didn't relieve my concerns through his diary "confessions"....not to mention the unknown arrival of Zander's older sibs. He is so close in achieving happiness and security with Zander and his family...but I feel very unsettled that his HEA will not materialize.......Hate to be negative, I really do, but I just get bad vibes. I guess that is a true testament to you as to just how invested I have become in Andy's journey.........Great job even tho' I'm not feeling so secure (like Andy).....................:)Mike
  6. Rex, You have captured the humanity of Ryan in this chapter.....from the acceptance of his current daily regimen dealing his his situation ( I didn't say handicap because he id NOT handicapped) to his excitement of the doctor's appointments and finally achieving his goal...to disappointment of additional surgery and more delays.... to actually getting a chance to walk on prosthetic legs. The shower scene demonstrates my point...we have all had that time in our life when it is just too much. Beautifully written; sincere but not melodramatic Great chapter Rex..........:)Mike.
  7. ................and a tear trickled down from my eye too!!!!!!! :)Mike
  8. I like Craig.....he seems to be a man on a mission.....focused and determined; although we know that he has been through so much emotional carnage. He has reclaimed his life and now seems to be helping Jared do the same while creating a foundation for a future for themselves............Great chapter Gary....I gotta remember that bottom line tho'........priceless.......:)Mike
  9. Gran capítulo! Jorge será una bendición para Nick y Sam................:)Mike
  10. OK, I'm in......the stage is set, characters have been introduced........really promising....:)Mike
  11. flamingo136

    Chapter 1

  12. What a lovely way to start my Sunday morning....Loved the giggles,playful jumping and soft kisses.....I could get used to this..........:)Mike
  13. flamingo136

    Daddy Dearest

    My young friend,please know that you are loved.....by many people who may never have the privilege of actually meeting you. By sharing this memory of abuse, you have empowered someone...Know that you have helped someone through their own hellish reality. Thank you seems inadequate but it's all I have to offer.....Together,WE can thrive and be happy despite all the abuse from our so called loved ones :)Mike
  14. Tim,You are a strong young man...I feel blessed having read this chapter.......still reminds me of a similar path taken...........:)Mike
  15. Tim...........This story hits very close to home.........although my time on the streets was filled with all dirty side of humanity like you shared, I , luckily was rescued without too much damage. ,,My heart and mind went back to that dark time while reading; my empathy and compassion and respect for you as a fellow human and brother gives me hope that your story will touch those who need the connection to make changes in their lives and escape the purgatory of many teenage gay streetkids. All my best to you, my young friend...I, recently have discovered your work and "enjoy" your straightforward style of writing....Difficult to read...but I believe it must be read................:)Mike
  16. PPP Perfect, Parker,Perfect..........:)Mike
  17. flamingo136

    Chapter 42

    I have followed this story from the beginning............and I want a wedding..........no more drama...........Now make it happen.....lol......:)Mike
  18. Ok Rex...........That was a lot of intel for us to ponder over for the next few days....wondering what each tidbit means and how it all fits into the puzzle....I am content (NOT) to wait until then for you to reveal more.....Begging for more !!!!!!!!! :)Mike I don't usually beg!
  19. Very powerful writing Parker......Andy has to be one of the strongest characters I've ever enjoyed meeting, you have given such depth to him over the many chapters...he just continues to become evolve into a strong and confident young man. I don't know if I, personally could absorb all the latest intel that was explained by Ambrose and Uncle Allan....it's just overwhelming when I recount the story to myself. You have taken us all on a troubling and exciting journey....although still not over......and I have admittedly not always wanted to continue...but Thank God I did............Hungry for more...much more............. Mike
  20. Craig's response to his twins deceit reminded me of the term carpet-bombing that was used during the Vietnam War; unlike the surgical strikes commonly using during the Gulf War and later. He calmly and methodically neutralized his opponent.....but he should be aware that unless the snakes head is removed, it is still a threat....Even the detached head has been known to be of danger........Enough of that....lol I am so excited to read this chapter....Craig finally taking charge of his life ....and moving forward after Harlan's death....the gutting of Carly was just icing on the cake.....Now go feed your man....he is too thin, but DAMN...........:)Mike
  21. flamingo136

    Chapter 3

    This is getting interesting.....and not just onboard Budweiser.......Great chapter!!!!!! :)Mike
  22. flamingo136

    Chapter 8

    Nephy......Please don't subject Daniel to such heartbreak as this situation with Andy (read ASSHOLE) is certain to create.........Otherwise, enjoyed the banter with Mom and Rayne and Daniel..............:)Mike
  23. flamingo136

    Story

    Hi Rex, This story sounds very familiar to me.......lol. I really liked the way you presented it, almost like a new report in spots........It would be good to see if anything develops with this pair.........:)Mike
  24. Wow...........Just Wow.......One thing I can and will say Parker is that you have kept this story exciting from the very beginning...It has NEVER been dull or boring......exasperating sometimes....difficult to read often.....but never boring !!!!!! Ambrose, huh? Wow Mike
  25. flamingo136

    Chapter 1

    "We need to talk"........UUGGGH.........I hate that...........GREAT INTRO.............:)Mike
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