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    Chapter 11

    I've learned the hard way to never completely trust a proper southern woman. They can appear quite docile and defenseless, but it would be safer to wrestle with a gator!!!!!! Carol is the type of person who is driven by appearance .....to the neighbors,friends and others.....oh and don't forget that she's batshit crazy. Loved the chapter .....hurry hurry for the next. :)mike
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    The River

    My...ah...me Carlos....that was sikkkkk..........Love the chapter, love the story...hell I think I love you.....:)Mike
  3. So beautiful, Gary.....just like the ring.....it is perfect.............:)Mike
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    Chapter 8

    Excellent cliffhanger...excellent !!!!!!!!!!! :)Mike
  5. Hi Gary, I want ot share a quick story with you......At work yesterday a coworker said to me "Good morning, Sunshine"....I responded"Good morning Babe".....we looked at each other as said to each other...CARDS ON THE TABLE !!!!!!! Others looked at us as we both burst out laughing.....so now a casual work associate has become a friend....That's so cool. REVIEW.....beautifully written as always;makes me long for the same....keep up the great work Your friend, Mike
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    Chapter 7

    Not knowing is probably just as bad as getting bad news At least you can address the situation once it's known. My heart goes out for Brad and Sarah ...great chapter tho........Mike
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    Chapter 6

    Great chapter, you have given us all the ingredients to make this story of doubt, love and trust go completely south.......and I expect it will. Looking forward to the next chapter; but I don't think you are through toying with us.............Again, great chapter !!!!!! :)Mike
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    Chapter 5

    Rut Ro.....the plot thickens......great chapter !!!!!! Mike
  9. Maybe, just maybe Candy will come to realize that M&K are decent men and her perception of gays will change. As all straights are not decent, neither are all gays, but M&K are a benchmark of decency for anyone. Let's hope that a more civil relationship has been forged as result of this interaction.....everyone wins Nice read, Gary, as always............. Mike
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    Chapter 4

    ...........Hatin' me some Darrin ............Mike
  11. Great chapter Carlos, Glad to see that Cesar and Brett are acting like real parents with CJ's little adventure...hell evens CJ is acting lie a typical teenager...throughout it all I see the love and respect for each other....Again, thanks, great chapter man..............:)Mike
  12. Hugs, Gary from everyone who will ever have the blessing of reading this letter;to such a beautiful soul...YOU......................... :heart:Mike
  13. Tell me Gary, is Candy's character modeled after anyone you personally know, or just observations of bitches throughout your life? You have created a souless, miserable ...................Great chapter, tho' :)Mike
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    Chapter 3

    That went well....I know that Wyatt was very nervous about this visit.....I just hope Carol is as inviting as see seems to project.........Lovely chapter...... Mike
  15. Gary, I'm glad that you are showing that even gay couples can have a child together. In my own personal life I have biological grandchildren as well as adopted and "step grand kids "(not biological) They are all loved equally This should be the same in a gay relationship ....well done my friend Mike
  16. Hi Carlos, I read this chapter before work early this morning but had to wait until now, while on break, to put my thoughts to paper. I could only remark that CJ is a force to contend with....being raised in the south and attending parochial schools, I can understand his demeanor with dealing with adults and clergy...however, I was never good at holding my temper.....so hurray to CJ for that The differences between Adriano's and Tommy's parents is glaring. And can be seen within some churches. It's funny how people can hear the same message and interpret it so differently On the the next chapter....... Mike
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    Chapter 2

    I'm hating Darrin now. Great chapter, romantic and intense from beginning to end. Mike
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    Human Touch

    Carlos, I knew that this part of the story would be difficult to read;being a survivor of a crash that killed my twin brother, I always tense up at news footage or upon riding through a crash site on the road, This will be devastating to everyone......I can't properly respond just now.....just know that your writing has touched my heart once again............. Mike
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    Chapter 1

    O GOODY........another CM story Great start......can't wait for the next chapter.........Mike
  20. Many people have commented on how CJ's behaviour cycles between mature and immature.He IS 15 after all..he's supposed to behave like thatYou have created the character that is very accurate and believable. I'm touched but not surprised that the group has rallied for their fallen brother and for each other. I can't ait to read about CJ's interaction with the late late visitors.......promises to be epic.....Great chapter, as always..........:0Mike
  21. Carlos, You kick ass my man........throughly loved and lauhed my ass off through this chapter Also, on a side note, I really like the description of Brett's parking his bike. To me, it's little things like that that add an extra depth of detail making everything so real and enjoyable........Welcome, Autumn !!!!!! Mike
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    Dedication

    Carlos, I agree with your opinion of the four great writers that you mentioned..I have laughed and cried, been hopeful and depressed and horney. I would heartily recommend all of them to those who have not had the pleasure of there gifts. If I could, I would also like to recommend Terrence Audette.....he's found on NIfty as well as his own website.....www.mygaystories.com His writing is very touching to me. Your style of writing is empowering.....I feel good about myself when reading your stories......keep up the good work..........You should e included in this listing of influencial gay writers......... Mike
  23. Gary, Firstly, I'm going to apologize for not commenting for the last few chapter.....but in my defense, I have been busy reading ...and enjoying this over the top romantic, sappy, sexy love story. I'm a sucker HEA, and you certainly didn't disappoint!!!!! Everyone wishes to have this type of whirlwind romance; all consuming to the point of distraction.........It was sweet, and sexy.........Great job......... :heart: Mike
  24. This chapter makes my insides smile.....happy dance time........ Mike
  25. Why is there always an Ian? They need to stay in their dark little holes.Ugh :pissed: :pissed: Mike
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