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    Chapter 7b

    Beautiful....simply beautiful....:)Mike
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    Chapter 6

    I can identify with Andy and his struggles......Until he can learn to trust his heart, I feel that he will be in torment......Although I am not a member of the clergy, Andy's turmoil reminds me of issues from my past.....I understand and empathize......Well written Thanks, Mike
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    Chasing Jayce

    Pay back is hell..............Mike
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    Chapter 68

    I am honored to read and witness your story with Daniel.....with utter humbleness, I thank you............Mike
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you Ron......Merry Christmas to you and yours, Mike
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    Vidar

    I have so missed Joel and Lucas.......Thanks for the visit............Mike
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    Chapter 13

    "this little light of mine, I'm gonna let it shine" I remember from sunday school.......seems appropriate to me......So happy and proud for Zac...............................:)Mike
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    Chet

    Great start....very promising, just watch for bad weather ahead.........I'm in !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mike
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    Chapter 33

    Excellent....................Mike
  10. Hi Rex, Ok, so now we've finished LL, after having been fed a marvelous treat on a regular basis.....What do we do now? You have a responsibility to provide more, much more, of your writing......I know that I have become addicted to your style of writing.....It reaches places that I didn't even knew existed within myself.... All kidding aside....Be PROUD of this story.......I am proud to have read it.................:)Mike
  11. Great job as usual Rex......never disappointed !!!!!! Thanks for sharing your gift........:)Mike
  12. Hi Rex, I am enjoying how the focus of the story has been ramped up with the upcoming ceremony.....I was thinking that Barry may have some vettting issues with his previous background and new identity......Although each couple is a role model for others, I agree with Clayton that this whole ceremony should focus on Ryan, his heroism and sacrifice....The fact that he's gay shouldn't be ignored but not glorified either.........Another most excellent chapter, my friend..........Thanks, .............Mike
  13. Gary, Although I'm not a follower of this genre , werewolves, and other sci fi topics, I decided to pick up the story, based on my enjoyment of your other works......I must admit that I have truly connected with the characters and have enjoyed the story so far.....I am touched by Tobyn's dedication to his pact, his duty to do what is right and expected of him......Boy, does that concept hit close to home.....I remember making a conscious decision to do the same thing when I was a young man. Life is not always black and white, and while I did finally accept the fact of my sexuality, I do not regret making those life altering decisions from my youth. I have children and grandchildren that would not have existed had I not made those choices. Times have certainly changed....for the better I believe....and today options exist that did not exist for me. I sometimes wonder just how things would have turned out had I made other choices....but who doesn't look back on their journey and wonder....WHAT IF? Anyway, I'm rambling......just wanted to let you know that again, you have done a remarkable job in creating a story with characters that not only are decent but strong in spirit and conviction..............:)Mike
  14. Rex, You have developed Ryan's character so well that when he is thinking, I can hear his voice ....I feel very connected to him....A truly heroic young man much deserving of this honor. Due to health issues, I was not able to enlist in the military, but have often felt a bond with those who did serve....Thanks for reminding me of how fortunate I am to have all these men and women who have chosen to protect us.....We stand proudly alongside you in humble gratitude for their service and sacrifice.............Beautiful chapter......so happy for Ryan....the trip to DC should be a blast.....can't wait..............:)Mike
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    Epilogue

    Nephy. this was beautiful.....you have filled my heart with happiness for Rayn and Daniel and now little Ashley............Beautiful story, full of love, hope and compassion.......Thank you so much for this gift..........Mike
  16. Rex, What a wonderful way to start my day off from work!!!!!! Full of hope and love....it couldn't have been better, thank you....... Hope you are doing better post surgery, my thoughts, prayers, and positive energy is coming to you...........<3 Mike
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    Run

    UUUUGGGGGGHHHHHH !!!!!!!!! LOVING IT................Mike
  18. Hi Rex, What I love the the most about your stories is how well you develop the characters.....like peeling an onion, a layer at a time. It gives us a peek ,just a peek of what's to come...all the time wondering just what else is there beyond our understanding. I feel compassion for both Ryan and Clayton and hope that once the initial shock wears off that they can realize their partners POV Really great chapter, full of humanity, with all its shortcomings and doubts.................:)Mike
  19. Like Clayton, I too am easily captured by disco's hypnotic beat.....my body seems to involuntarily begin moving to the rhythm ...ya know the rhythm's gonna get ya.....Memories of flashing lights, mirrored balls and being packed on the dance floor are a testament of who we were and who we became as a result of AIDS......I'm still dancing to that beat. Like many others, I consider myself to be lucky......there is no logical reason as to why I made it and so many others died....This thought is always very sobering to me......Thanks for touching that part of my heart...it's still tender at times, but I NEVER want to forget. Rex, have you modeled Clayton after yourself? He seems to be quite the dominant partner...Ryan is indeed a lucky man........... Hope you are feeling better.....Always, Mike
  20. Rex, As always, your writing has the power to transport me to whatever you choose to describe.....whether it is the hell of war that Ryan has remembered, I can smell the acid smoke and cries and the wounded and dying; the incoming bombers low flying with their payload....it is very real. Or the smells and taste of the take sandwiches that Ryan bought for Dave and Bulldog...my mouth is watering just reading about it.......Or the feelings of nervousness concerning Clayton's recent behavior....I'm there with you............Mike
  21. There's never a dull moment with this bunch for sure.....Rex, this was beyond exciting ......in fact, I reread it 3 times to digest all the action ( I raced thru it the first time trying to ensure Barry's condition......don't say lifeless body ....unless it IS a lifeless body) you scared the crap out if me at that point..... Overall, as usual, I loved the chapter........:)Mike
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    Prologue

    "once a cheater… always a cheater." AMEN............Great start...........:)Mike
  23. Spending Christmas with a new love.......I remember it well.......thanks for the memory...........Great chapter Gary............:)Mike
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    Nightmares

    Rex, what a well written chapter.....from the beginning through the cliffy, it held my attention.......beautifully done ........:)Mike
  25. Tears of happiness are blurring my vision as I attempt to express my deepest gratitude to you for sharing Andy and Zander's journey. It is and always will be an inspiration to those of us who have endured and survived abuse as kids.......It's the hope of a better future that seems to evade our thoughts while being in the midst of abuse....Andy found that hope and it reminds us all that hopefully life can be brighter.....Parker, you are a blessing to us all..................:)Mike
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