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  1. Kookie

    Chapter 29

    Very happy to see he story is continuing.
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    The Cajun Asian

    Nice to catch on the boys in New York. Hoping for future adventures in the (near) future
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    Swan Chapter 5

    good chapter.
  4. Kookie

    Swan Chapter 4

    I beg to differ No where do you state that this daydreaming of looking into the possible future when you state: "What I had not told my guardian, was that I was enjoying the time onboard the famous research submarine Aquaria, owned by the private Swiss corporation – Wagner Family Corp, " But it is not worth arguing since you kind of clarified it your response.
  5. Kookie

    Swan Chapter 4

    The last portion of this chapter have me very confused. First stating that suddenly the Wagner family not the Lloyd Corp owns the Aquaria. Second After Xander met with who himself?
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    Surv Chapter 4

    I am surprised Uncle Nat has not made a call to the military authorities so the Europeans can be gathered for questioning or at least followed when they get down from the Mountain
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    GW Chap 4

    thank you for the chapter.
  8. Kookie

    GW Chap 4

    empty.
  9. I am glad to see Granger and Calverts reconciliation. Maybe that will followed by others and result in far different scenario than last time Granger was in England. Unfortunately we have no clue as to who his "guide" into London will be and what surprises maybe waiting for him.
  10. Kookie

    Chapter 13

    Very astute that George received from his father. If things appear normal, the gossip, if there isany will be dismissed by many. However, if I was George I would be looking towards finding the servant with the big mouth. That servant apparently can not trusted and should either be dismissed (that may not be the best) or removed to an area where he is not a problem in the future.
  11. Kookie

    Chapter 10

    My thinking on the Caroline/Treadway matter, is that Caroline outright rejected his advances and he refused to take no for answer. So Caroline had forced used to handle the situation. She isn't telling George because she is worried his reaction will be the hurt Treadway. With Treadway being related to Spencer,Caroline is afraid that wouldhurt George's career. Anyway, that is my take on the situation.
  12. While we wait patiently for Grainger to return, just a few items to ponder. The length of famous or infamous works, The Gettysburg address is 269 words. The Declaration of Independence is 1,337 words. The Holy Bible is 773,000 words. No idea of the version and remember this is compilation of many authors work. However, the tax code is more than 7 million words today. The Bridgemont series while not competing with the government now stretches over 1.18 million words and unlike the tax code can be understood and comprehended. Good work Mark.
  13. Kookie

    Chapter 9

    Well Spencer sure gave George a few interesting tasks to tackle. Let's see whether George's refined manners, coupled with his military command are up to the tasks. I can imagine it will be difficult to advise Nelson to temper his public outrages, but hope tht George will be able to approach as a friend and not a subordinate. Transporting a Scottish peer to the Otterman Empire, I question if George was right man for the job. Undoubtably George can handle the peer, his wife and staff, but can he handle Turkey. The King to visit a ship. This can not be very common. I hope the crew recognizes the honor. Lastly, just give all the students A's and keep writing. Seriously, we understand you have other commitments and trust you will continue writing as time permits.
  14. Kookie

    Chapter 8

    It looks like William is a chip off the old block. He seems at ease at sea for a 6 year old and Caroline got her wish of sailing on one of Georges ships. Know I wonder until the next chapter what special assignment is in store for George and the Valiant.
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    Chapter 7

    Interesting to find out that the Valiant handles bad weather rather well. Could it be that the Valiant can tackle forces larger than himself with the weather cooperating, high seas and storms, as unpleasant as the thought is. I hope the marines can learn to keep their lunch.
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