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podiumdavis

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  1. I knew people would love the Elmer Fudd reference. It's a great one. Chapter #8 will show it's true colors, may it be good or bad. That will be out soon, (i hope). The wait won't be as long for it as it was from 6 to 7. Promise you that.
  2. There's a lot more funnies coming, I can promise you that. Chapter #10 you will like especially. Nicolas is cute, and funny. I love the character. And finally someone with my twisted humor; the whole scene between Sarah and Bill had me rolling when I originally wrote it. Not many people got how funny, yet, serious that scene was.. And you got the Easter egg. Excellent!
  3. It's a very long read. I know this, had I known better, I'd have split the chapter, etc, etc. But what's done is done. Little details? What kind of ones LOL.
  4. Eerie huh? Wait until..... Nevermind..
  5. The look of pleasure, an eye slightly shut, peering blindly. Tongue so moist, so wet, he licked his lips. LOL. Brother love oh yes. Matthew is a main part of the story, just as Kyle and Jacob are, just more in the foreground. I wouldn't place Matthew, or Nicolas, as some sort of backdrop characters; they're more than that.
  6. I'm glad you like it. And hopefully my not so dull, plain, story will keep you interested.. ~CHEERS~
  7. Jacob HAS to look out for his co, this is who he is. His feelings are pretty serious though, but as you say, will they be unfounded? Or will they. The next chapter will answer that for you. Mom's location will show up in Chapter #9. But not in a direct way, more indirect. ~CHEERS~
  8. Thanks James. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. All things shall be answered in time. The wait won't be as long from 6-7. I promise you that. Two weeks tops ~CHEERS~
  9. The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #7: The Mistakes we make (Cont) Time line: Sunday The boys were on the edge of their seats, Matthew especially, who hadn’t shut up since they’d gotten themselves in the car. He kept talking about how he hoped they would spend their day at the camp, how much fun they’d probably have, but most of all, how much he couldn’t wait to see what lay behind the walls. With every block they passed, the more excited Matthew got, and the more high p
  10. Yeah was it Wayne? It's a good guideline though.
  11. Oh Andy, shush you. I've wrote 2 reviews already. You do some more while I beat my keyboard
  12. Thanks to everyone that participated in this. I see I'm not alone with the music, after reading many other authors words. Music for me is the key to emotion, but that's just me. Love that I'm not abnormal either. HA! ~Cheers~
  13. Like Andy's own reservations, the sheer size of the story seems a daunting one, which has left me not reading it at all. Although after this review, I can't say that I'm not intrigued by it. Oh the Possibilities.
  14. No doubt Andy. I thought of it, did it myself, didn't expect anything would come of it; but it did. So cool! I'm happy many chose to be involved.
  15. Wow that's so cool that so much feedback came in. This is exciting
  16. How do I surprise you? And thank you; I'm glad you liked it... I'm the type to evoke emotion, that's me
  17. How do I surprise you? And thank you; I'm glad you liked it... I'm the type to evoke emotion, that's me
  18. Thanks Andy. Can't wait for you to read the next chapter.. Getting itchy LOL.
  19. Ah thanks Trebs. Was my first review.. Wasn't sure if it was any good LOL.. ~CHEERS~
  20. Sarah, yes you’re correct; that's Jacob's mother. The story merely is a ripple. Its impact at first, can seem not so deep, so mystic, but as you get deeper, skin deep, you see how it all reflects on each character, each reader. As time goes on you will see the bonds, that can't be broken, or will they? Hmm. You'll see. I'm glad you enjoy the story, I love writing it. You'll see more of Sarah, along with Bill, Michelle, Thomas, James, Matthew, Nicolas, Mr. Matthews, Amanda, uhm... Did I miss anyone yet? Oh yeah, you don't know some of these names... Hmmmm... I'll feed you that to your mysterious mind. Oh, joy!
  21. Oh so you can see the future now can you? (Unsurprisingly) Ha! Who's Sami brady? Worry of the place they're going? (As you should) The song titles are interesting.. But the question is, did you decode the secret message?
  22. About time you got through that sticky mess. LOL. Yes, lots of info, events. But it was required.. LOL. I wish I split it up now.. But what's done is done . Condoms are good, she's looking out for her son, which makes her even better. Nicolas and Matthew are great.. I think... Wait for more, that's for sure.. The scenes were very intense. Matthew is more innocent than not, lust isn't his fortay, I believe. Cheers!
  23. He's very happy when Kyle is there. So very very complete indeed. Read on and you will find what you seek
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