Someone finally said it. SHUT UP NICOLAS! Or more so MATTHEW!
Character development is key, so true. Sarah's whereabouts will FINALLY be brought to light in Chapter #9. So the wait is a lil bit :\
Thanks Robbie And your right, so many branches. I'm also not sure if Jacob would act the same, boyfriend or not. But I feel it's not in his character to be so foolish in that sense.
Thanks Andy. You and Lisa are my biggest supporters, and friends. I appreciate all the work you two do; I wish I could show you how grateful I am. ~HUGS~
I knew people would love the Elmer Fudd reference. It's a great one. Chapter #8 will show it's true colors, may it be good or bad. That will be out soon, (i hope). The wait won't be as long for it as it was from 6 to 7. Promise you that.
There's a lot more funnies coming, I can promise you that. Chapter #10 you will like especially. Nicolas is cute, and funny. I love the character. And finally someone with my twisted humor; the whole scene between Sarah and Bill had me rolling when I originally wrote it. Not many people got how funny, yet, serious that scene was.. And you got the Easter egg. Excellent!
It's a very long read. I know this, had I known better, I'd have split the chapter, etc, etc. But what's done is done. Little details? What kind of ones LOL.
The look of pleasure, an eye slightly shut, peering blindly. Tongue so moist, so wet, he licked his lips. LOL. Brother love oh yes. Matthew is a main part of the story, just as Kyle and Jacob are, just more in the foreground. I wouldn't place Matthew, or Nicolas, as some sort of backdrop characters; they're more than that.
Jacob HAS to look out for his co, this is who he is. His feelings are pretty serious though, but as you say, will they be unfounded? Or will they. The next chapter will answer that for you.
Mom's location will show up in Chapter #9. But not in a direct way, more indirect.
~CHEERS~
Thanks James. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
All things shall be answered in time. The wait won't be as long from 6-7. I promise you that. Two weeks tops ~CHEERS~
The Journey of Jacob and Kyle
Chapter #7: The Mistakes we make (Cont)
Time line: Sunday
The boys were on the edge of their seats, Matthew especially, who hadn’t shut up since they’d gotten themselves in the car. He kept talking about how he hoped they would spend their day at the camp, how much fun they’d probably have, but most of all, how much he couldn’t wait to see what lay behind the walls.
With every block they passed, the more excited Matthew got, and the more high p
Thanks to everyone that participated in this. I see I'm not alone with the music, after reading many other authors words. Music for me is the key to emotion, but that's just me. Love that I'm not abnormal either. HA! ~Cheers~
Like Andy's own reservations, the sheer size of the story seems a daunting one, which has left me not reading it at all. Although after this review, I can't say that I'm not intrigued by it. Oh the Possibilities.