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    The grim reality of the justice being dealt out, one who's been the tormentor, turned tormented in hell is quite an interesting one. I found it rather intriguing and well written, although a bit short for my liking... (This coming from someone who writes a book per chapter, take it as a grain of salt). I think the prospect for much more is definitely there, and I would encourage you to continue writing, (as I still need to read the next chapters). But my question to you would be, “Is the 12 year old boy his perception? Or was the boy portraying himself in that light to gain his attention?”
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    Prison Of Hope

    podiumdavis commented on Frostina's story chapter in Prison Of Hope

    I was literally blown away from the story, once I got my butt down to read it, I couldn't take my eyes off of it. The scene with Jordy being beaten up was very traumatic for me, (I thought please don't kill him!) The anger that Paul (the alternate ego) showed was very emotionally draining on me. The ending was great, and had I not read some of the other comments I would have never realized the multiple personality. A true work of art. ♥
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    Glad you liked it
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    You mean the third chapter right? The thing's that happened to Kyle comes out in Chapter #4, so the wait won't be too long. The dream's .... read the first block in the chapter. Yes the boy's do get along quite well, not so much bickering and the likes, which is good.
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    I thank you all for sharing. It's such a liberating experience to know, "I'm not the only one." It's good to know that we can share and support one another if need be. ♥
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    So when did you first realize you were different? Being gay, transgendered, lesbian, bisexual. How did you first come to terms with this? Were you one to shun the idea, or did you just know who you were? What age did you finally realize you were who you were? I knew I was bi-sexual by the age of around 12. I kind of shunned the idea as a phase of self exploration. But as I grew into my later years; I came to realize that what I felt was who I was and there was no denying the facts of what I took preference to. I never told my father or mother, so no one basically knows in my family. That’s by person choice, not because I believe they will chastise me, but for my own comfort ability I suppose. Care to share your story?
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    It is truly a sad day. Over the past few years we've lost so many greats. Michael Jackson, Amy Winehouse, and now Whitney. All a powerhouse in their own rights. It's a tragic loss for many fans, myself included. Forgive me if I missed any other great's that we've lost. But I consider these three people the top. We can all hope and pray though that this was not due to drugs. Although her past may say otherwise R.I.P WH
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    The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #3: This Changes Everything Time line: Friday Jacob could feel the bitter cold trying to penetrate his skin like pins and needles. The air surrounding his body felt damp and cool to the touch, which caused his entire body to start shivering uncontrollably. Naturally his body reacted to these cold frigid temperatures by turning every part of his body into goose bumps. Considering that he didn’t have any idea of wher
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    More shall come
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    Pet Peeve: Ignorant drunks that like to be your buddy. I just wanna punch them. LOL.
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    I changed POV because I preferred it that way, or maybe the story will end that way. Also I don’t say anywhere in the story about him watching his weight; so I don’t know if this was assumed or not. And in regards to the weight thing, Jacob guesses his weight, I never definitively suggest his actual weight. And thank you for bringing that to my attention though, I must admit, I’ve never wrestled, nor know real classifications, other than I assumed at that weight, he’d be a light weight class hehe.
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    I'm glad you enjoyed it Chris Your analysis is great of Jacob’s reaction, I aim to try and emulated those emotions, and hopefully I accomplished that Thanks for the read.
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    The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #2: The Best Day Ever (Cont) Time line: Thursday When Jacob and Kyle entered into the house, they stopped suddenly and stood standing immobile at the front door when they heard Jacob’s stupid little brother, Matthew, singing away yet again. “What a dork,” thought Jacob, while listening to Matthew’s high pitch screeching. After listening to the deafening noise for several seconds, which happened to be originat
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    I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
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    Thanks Billy You will indeed learn lots and lots of the boys.
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    The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #1: The Best Day Ever Time line: Thursday Hello, my name is Jacob and let me start by telling you a little bit about myself. I’m currently fourteen years old and in the ninth grade at Naples High, which would make me a freshman. I’m a hundred and thirty-five pounds give or take a pound or two and five feet four inches tall. My muscles aren’t very big mind you, but I have one of those naturally fit body types; but don’t take that to mean I’m we
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    The Journey of Jacob and Kyle is a story of an undying love between the two main characters. This is their journey of finding love, maintaining it, and going through life’s ups and downs together, all the while learning from their life experiences that have been forced in their paths.
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    I love this show!
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    The Western sea board will have a major earthquake, my prediction.
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    This would be a good thing either way. Regardless of the time, society needs to change on the perspective; although we've come so far since the day's of Harvey Milk and the likes. But the stigma still remains, especially in high school.
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    It has to be a hoax, I don't see this ever happening. Mind you I'm no doctor. But it seems implausible.
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