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  1. podiumdavis

    Chapter 17

    I like this comment. You're very insightful and well minded in your reading. You're seeing more between the lines than most. Maybe you've happened to pick up the hints that I've thrown down to be seen by the sleuths. Hero worship would be correct, if i remember correctly, I've used the reference, A knight of Old, a few times to mark Amanda as something special. Good job on that. As for Jacob's Venom, keep reading and find the answers to be held. And in regards to the inaccuracy, it goes all by different takes of a situation by any given character, sometimes they only see what they want to see; that's just how life is. Thanks for the comment
  2. The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #19: What goes up, must come down Time line: Tuesday ************************************************************************** WARNING: If you’re looking for a quick jerk off story then you’re not going to find it here, but if you enjoy stories with deep character development then this story will be for you. My chapters may contain extreme situations that may not be suitable for all audiences that may include violence, and sexual situations.
  3. podiumdavis

    Chapter #14

    trying to release faster.... 20k word chapters get less attention due to length... I will write like this further.... More chapters. with quicker content. But I'm glad you're following Plus your the only review in many months. At least someone is responding..
  4. While I don't play on that realm. I'd be glad to add you on my friends list and pub every once and a while. PM me your tag or not.. Up to you ;D
  5. podiumdavis

    Chapter #16

    I guess I lied here. Chapter 18 ended 'This cold heart'.. But you got it Lisa.. Love you babe.
  6. The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #18: This Cold heart (Cont.) Time line: Monday ************************************************************************** WARNING: If you’re looking for a quick jerk off story then you’re not going to find it here, but if you enjoy stories with deep character development then this story will be for you. My chapters may contain extreme situations that may not be suitable for all audiences that may include violence, and sexual situa
  7. The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #17: This Cold heart (Cont.) Time line: Monday ************************************************************************** WARNING: If you’re looking for a quick jerk off story then you’re not going to find it here, but if you enjoy stories with deep character development then this story will be for you. My chapters may contain extreme situations that may not be suitable for all audiences that may include violence, and sexual
  8. Thanks my friend.. I'm sorry you didn't expect this. But it hold's true merit.
  9. I'm deeply sorry for your loss. I know how it is to lose a parent. It's never easy. :*(
  10. podiumdavis

    Some May Ask

    I tried.. That's all the matters I think. I was just so deeply touched by a video that I felt compelled.. But I agree that an issue will arise if we could somehow choose the gender...:|
  11. A short poem about a transgendered boy. No not me personally, but thoughts provoked by another.
  12. Some may ask why my heart bleeds. Deep beneath this external facade lays a boy that feels lost. He's conflicted and filled with self-hatred. He just wishes he could be sedated. To forget all this pain. Lost in his despair, he feels that this life was never fair. His gender, his identity, did not conform to who he was. The parts that caused him pain he wanted to cut off, just so he could somehow belong. But the labels, the names, set all in this game of put downs. Life isn't fair,
  13. I'm sure many of you know how much I love poetry. But after watching this video this is what came to my mind. I absolutely love slam poetry and the way it expresses ones deepest of pains or desires. I'm not saying this poem above is an epic tale, but it's what my heart spoke from the other side. Hope you liked it.
  14. Oh no! Wow... I'm shocked... May his soul rest in peace.. :*(
  15. Congrats Andy. I couldn't be any happier for you!
  16. podiumdavis

    Tell Me . . .

    This was well, and had me thinking of those deep secrets that we all hold.. Many of my own personal issue's arouse in this. Those secrets we were told never to tell for instance.... *Goosebumps* Anyway. I liked it
  17. Joann is a rock unto her own. She shows strength beyond compare. Many of which is included in my clique, a few un-named ones. It's tough for me to let people in and I'm proud to say she's one of the few.
  18. Apple pie or pumpkin pie?
  19. If you had the chance, in another reality, another place, to become any character in literature, who would it be?
  20. Out of all of your works, what character is the most predominate in your mind?
  21. You seem to be a prompt addict, so what is it that makes you want to do so many of them?
  22. First off, thank you for taking up the prompt. Now off to business. I felt the story was very well played, and while I'm not shakepearian and didn't get all of the quotes you laid out, I felt it was an excellent display of one talent to take a source material and make it their own. The story was very uniform in it's delivery and I was in awe of how well it was written. Bravo my good sir, bravo!
  23. Wow.. I read this and then had to go for a shower. Go figure right? My mind was poetic and all that good stuff. I wish I was here to quote what it was. It was devine.. My question really is, how can these people knowing full well what they're doing not think of the concequences. Like what long term effects could this have? Am I being selfish? I think there's a lot more, but to me I think most of all they aren't thinking, they're just acting on an impulse that has been planted in their brain and that they're so far gone that they couldn't resist those temptations. Are they mentally ill? I don't know, I'm no doctor. But for the most part, MOST of us have a thing called a conscious, or the ability to tell right from wrong. Clearly this isn't something they're capable of. Maybe I 'm a bit biased, being diddled as a child has made me become on the offensive of such things. Therefore, to hell with them.... *Sorry that's the end of my rant*
  24. I don't think anyone took the prompt last week, so without further ado this weeks prompt. Prompt du jour #4 – Creative Tag: Mystery There’s a killer on the loose, and everyone in your community is scared. This is startling to you because you sense that the serial murderer is targeting a select class of citizen. Who is he/she and why are they targeting them?
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