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Sarah, yes you’re correct; that's Jacob's mother. The story merely is a ripple. Its impact at first, can seem not so deep, so mystic, but as you get deeper, skin deep, you see how it all reflects on each character, each reader. As time goes on you will see the bonds, that can't be broken, or will they? Hmm. You'll see. I'm glad you enjoy the story, I love writing it. You'll see more of Sarah, along with Bill, Michelle, Thomas, James, Matthew, Nicolas, Mr. Matthews, Amanda, uhm... Did I miss anyone yet? Oh yeah, you don't know some of these names... Hmmmm... I'll feed you that to your mysterious mind. Oh, joy!

Oh so you can see the future now can you? (Unsurprisingly) Ha! Who's Sami brady? Worry of the place they're going? (As you should) The song titles are interesting.. But the question is, did you decode the secret message?

About time you got through that sticky mess. LOL. Yes, lots of info, events. But it was required.. LOL. I wish I split it up now.. But what's done is done . Condoms are good, she's looking out for her son, which makes her even better. Nicolas and Matthew are great.. I think... Wait for more, that's for sure.. The scenes were very intense. Matthew is more innocent than not, lust isn't his fortay, I believe. Cheers!

He's very happy when Kyle is there. So very very complete indeed. Read on and you will find what you seek

Lot's happening? Not really. Wait until you get deeper into the story.. Especially some of the unreleased as of yet stuff. LOL. And yes, as one voice, they told Kyle NOT to go anywhere. It was good. I know this. Glad you saw it too. Very observant one you are. And finally someone comments on the drawing... This in fact was me, personally, at one point my life.. The picture so vivid, so real, it could kill.

It was hotter than a pig in >

K&J surely did one-up them. The next chapter won't be funny. But there's a classic moment in the following one... You will giggle I know it The nudism.. hmm. Someone disliked this chapter I think and decided to unfollow the story.. *CRIES* But life will go on LOL.

The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #6: The Mistakes we make Time line: Sunday A new dawn was upon the boys as the sun began to rise above the horizon, inching its way into the sky and illuminating everything in its path. It shone through the windows, crawled its way across the floor to reveal a pair of boys, who lay sound asleep, nestled in each other's arms. The light continued traveling over the floor and onto the bed until it shone directly into Matthew's eyes and awoke him fro

Bigot, no doubt. Thanks babe.

I understand the abuse, know full well, but never experienced anything such as this. Of course, since I still stand here. But I know those feelings.. And thank you. I'm glad you liked it.. Hopefully I'll write some more before some other poetry comes out in my stories

Sorry Bud

A boy awakes in a corner He cowers, and feels a rush of pain He’s battered and bruised Lost and confused His body shows the trauma For it came from his papa Deep shades of blue and purple appear upon his skin He can’t remember how he got here There is no comfort Only pain He wants to cry For it may be the only console he’ll ever receive Deep down he’s torn Was he ever supposed to be born? How could his father be so cruel What a fool! A punch to the head, a kick to the

A short poem, dark and sad.

And don't you know it. Best male bonding..

That's great news JO. I hope your enjoying it. But fear not.. Good news, or rather bad news is on the way...

Danke!

Pshaw!

The moral of the story? Know how your actions affect others. Good job!

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Ha! Glad your back. It gets better, then it get's worst. That's life I suppose.. Sarah... GOSH! Slap her for me would ya? ~Cheers~

Thank you. I do my best to evoke emotion, that's kind of my style. Especially with Jacob and Kyle's story, and another story I will have coming here soon Thanks for the review.

Thanks for the review Wayne. But we'll see about other prompts.. I like to pick and choose .

Emotions aren't the only thing I'm good at, in writing I mean; you'll see what I mean soon. And that's right, when do families normally get together; it's rather saddening to think.

Oh you just had to read it that early in the morning did you? LOL. Jerry would be happy I think. Support in a family structure is good. Usually when bad things happens, people come out of the wood work, families come together. But your right, if only we all could love like that.

Matthew’s last look huh? It’s possible. I think the feeling wasn’t more so the house, but more of his mother in that respect. I speak from experience with gut feelings. So again, yes, very plausible. Her pauses were indeed interesting, hesitation maybe? The Orlando boys, Josh, Kinshi, the others? Corrupt? Most definitely, or maybe not. You’re just going to have to wait to find out. Sarah’s whereabouts will be acknowledged within the next chapter, and the fallout of her words. (Emotional scars anyone?) Chapter #6 will show some things, while Chapter #7 will open the can even further. No one has ever read chapter #7, just me. So I’m excited to getting to this point. It’s where things start to unfold, as to what, you’ll soon find out, hopefully. Sarah is an interesting character. I think the most important questions would be: can she be redeemed? Can she get past her own misconceived notions? Is Sarah’s response a front for something more? Is she hiding something? What does she have to lose if her boys are gay? (This might be answered in the next chapter ) Or … why is Bill so accepting? What makes him okay with all of this? Again, like I said in another review. If you loved Bill! You will die for Amanda [Chapter #7].