Dave68

yeah been there done that, sounds good I'm only having one, but then several later and you are being an ass, you know what i mean. good chapter Andy, going to have to try this fiction thing myself. David

Well Andy you know by know i campaigned with you to expand on the original story and was very pleased to see you went back to it, as you know that I often mention you to my readers, and promote your past and present work, and well deserved paraise i may add, I look forward to the Journey you will take us on and beyond, As i have stated and is a fact your work inspired me to try and get my stories in writing and like yourself and Anyeta Sunday hope one day to get published.So getting back to my Fav story Second Shot, I am waiting like all of your reader no doubt waiting on the next instalment. Your Loyal Friend David

Sorry, I realised that after i posted, having a serious blond day, but Packers all the way

As long as our owner does not go mad and sell our best players, Newcastle should do well again this season

Spain can look so ordinary, and yet still do the job, awesome

fedderer was awesome, murray choked yet again

I have tickets for Football at st james park newcastle, looking forward to it

been a member for a few months now, it has inspired me to write my own stuff I have been a member for a few months now love it

Well Kim, still love it, very steamy by the way -

Kim. i just love it, keep them coming sweetie

Well Kim awesome as usual, you pluck at my sences with emotion and like Kimmi (She loves her drama) and sweetie it works, looking forward to Chris remembering things and hopefully some good, Dave

Nice Kim, I love romance and i feel Chris is falling for David all over again, but i think something when they seperated may come back to throw a spanner in the works namely this woman, he was sort of involved with that he hasn't told David about but i like how its developing, and please dont be like Jammi, she likes torturing her readers, Drama we love romance we love, Dave

This is so touching and loving, i feel David getting a touch frustrated but keeping it in check, and Christian fighting the urge not to fail David in anyway, his confusion about his sexuality is no longer an issue with him now, just his feelings for David, He has feelings for him he just dosent quite know what they are, is it Love or Lust, perhaps like some BOTH Love it keep them coming Dave

Well i have only just noticed that this is going to take a while to read, but here goes i do love a good story and by god this site has had me hooked since i joined and i have just finished the first chapter of your story and i will give it a few chapters before i commit to reading the rest but so far.....hmmmmm im still reading ....

Well Don you know i love your stuff and i am now reading this series and 1st chapter yeh you got me again still love beloved though Dave

Oh Wow, well first off i read 'The List' over 3 days and before i read the epilogue i made a mental note to write you and mention a sequal was warented, and was in love with all the character's and then i read the formentioned chapter and saw that their was already a sequal and man... it did not dissapoint bravo I like it when things sort of work out, Now going to have a look at your other stuff Dave

Hi Dom yeh have to agree brilliant story but when do you plan on finishing the follow-up story Hey Stupid youve done 4 chapters then left it at that .i wont even touch it until there is movement as i hate being left hanging and you have not touched it since 2010 and im concerned and do hope you are ok and writing as i know all to well that life happens and things get in the way but as i said i do hope everything is ok Domaholic Dave

Dont think there is any point in reviewing this as it wont be finished as noticed that Dom hasnt updated anything since 2010 so dont think he writes for this site anymore which is a damn shame

Well got to the end and well my friend it had everything in it for me great build up and not relying on sex to push the story along a vulnrable Quinn and a confident Jude with baggage. I kind of get where Quinn came from with his mother feeling dissapointed with her attatude to " Those People" and him feeling he couldnt bring himself to come out to her 'his mother should have been the 1 person he could always be himself with you know the pld "Unconditional Love" thing. anfd it wasnt even a religous thing either as we all know where the Catholic church stands on this(dont get me started on those hipocrits) but back to this though pleased it ended with a possitive we all know life isnt all flowers and chocolates and very happy that his best friend is still his best friend and in my opinion on Brads reaction with the fudgepacker remark that would have hurt me deeper than my mums rejection as the 1 person he depends on for support was his best friend and that would have felt like betrayel to me But with Brad i dont even think it was the Gay thing anyway it was the fact he had shared all his secrets with him ( except the playing with Andrew and getting caught with his dad issue..."so funny") it was the fact he kept this to himself and not shared with his best friend but like really good friends and i have more straight friends than Gay ones and they are amazing to be frank and when i came out 2 years ago they have been so supportive and protective of me if saomeone says anything to me it just makes me so proud of them and i feel that Brad and Merrissa still just see Quinn as just that just Quinn and Ordinary exceptional youn Man His mother will come round and has started to show that and Jude will be there for him for a while as this is Quinns 1st relationship and dont know if it will last though are just an introduction to his true self and might last dont really know as they didnt say those 3 immortal words to each other " I Love You" Appreciated and am a fan Dave

yep pulling at my emotional heartstrings with every tool in your Arsenal and still cant stop reading

well what can i say read 6 chapters last night whilst at work and went home and read 5 more im now dog tired but still cant stop reading this im hooked i need counselling ...just kidding great story

Dude what are you doing to me I cant stop reading this .....Next chapter

well intendid to read a couple of chapters and now cant stop reading this I do like this kind of story i get bored with the hi my names bob im tim fancy hooking up kind of story dont get me wrong a little tittalation is good nothing wrong witha little erotasism but Nifty is good for that but this site is great for stories that have substance and depth ..ok next chapter....p.s come on Quinn wake up dude

Dont panic no long winded diatribe just letting you know still hooked and loving this story

Im a bit suprised there are not more reviews of this and yes I am now hooked on this and dont know why he is panicing ok back when i was his age i knew i was gay and hid it i was the middle child of a very homophobic dad and his brothers were no better but he seem's to be in a very loving family he even knows he has a girlfriend but has no desire to have sex with her I think his friend would have his back and his sister also I didnt come out fully until i was 41 ok my sisters have known for years and my brother just worked it out you know 41 never had a girlfriend duh.. but honest sice all my family and all my friends just shrugged and said so what you are still davy nothings changed my dad is sort of ok with it but not doing cartwheels but hey im happy now so i wish i had come out at his age ...my only regret....