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oh man... you're killing me. I love this story and I love the Brit. Thx for picking it up again. I can't wait for more pfox

oh man.... thanks for the update... This story still plays my emotions like a piano Cheers

oh maaaaann... I'm punching my pillow right now. Corbin is a stupid fuck. I mean come on. Have a little faith. How in the world can you make out with the one you love, haveing someone go down on you you're not even interested in an bedding a third, where there is no spark, within 24 hours? I'm speachless. And mad... Loved the whole game with Dominik and Lee btw =) great Chapter, thank you!!!!. You're playing my emotions like a guitar with this story Can't wait for more!! Have a good day pfox

you know what? I don't believe him. Pete is not the player to fool someone this entire time. I am so sure, that the holding Corbins hand and all the affection he's showing is real. I think hes a total closet case who is confused as fuck and doesn't know any better. This is not the end of the two of them. I so hope, that Corbin won't be his stupid self and runs into someone elses arms, like he usually does. I think he needs to show the Brit that he is in it for real and that it is worth to risk your heart. Pete needs someone to guide him. Corbin can be that someone. Thanks for the Chapter. You made my day pfox

so cute... I love little romantic pieces like this thanks!!!

Corbin did the right thing with Mike. I would have said the exact same thing... I don't think the Brit is toxic for Corbin. He's confused... He wears his heart on his sleeve and can't help himself with Corbin. I love that about him. Lee is stupid to fall for Corbin again. He should know that Corbin is using him one way or another. But maybe he likes that... who knows... Great chapter... can't wait for more as always Thanks pfox

ok... here it comes: I think what Mike did was unfair... He knew what was coming all along and was always clear about not being gay and not ever being able to have a proper relationship with Corbin. To throw such a bomb is huge - live changing for Corbin even. What it does is, that it'll haunt him for a long time... Mike is playing the victim, and I hate that. Why won't he come clear and comes out to set a sign, that he's worth the wait... Everything else would be bullshit... And the Brit too... I mean we all propably know how hard it actually is to come out, but it's so much easier if you have someone holding your hand. And also why is he sending these mixed signals all the time??? If I was straight and had a guy falling for me I really like as a friend, I'd never let him sleep in the same bed as me. If the Brit is unsure of his feelings for Corbin, why not tell him??? BUT - there wouldn't be much of a story left to tell then I was meeting a friend last night and came home around midnight. I had to get up really early this morning. So stupid me, checking for an updated even though I knew I would read the chapter and have a really short night. And it was totally worth it =) So here is what I think is gonna happen soon: The Brit and Corbin will fall into the "best bud" pattern again. They'll meet up to study, have coffee, get drunk together and party. Maybe the Brit will even hook up with a girl here and there, but I am so positive that they'll screw up eventually and start making out or even hook up at some point. And I can't wait for that. Maybe I'm all wrong, but hey...we'll see Thanks for the chapter. As always I enjoyed every second of it. Have a great weekend pfox

So Corbin realized, what the Vmee knew all along (and me too of course ;p) - that's he'll break his heart. With Mike beeing boned, and Pete and Corbin propably going to be on speaking terms again - this whole story can take us up another path entirely. And I sure like that =) The talk between the Brit and Corbin was intense. I could feel the tension going through my etire body. This is rare - you my firend are gifted The cliffhanger of course is again pure agony. I can see you smirking behind your screen leaving us hanging like this again I can't wait to see what happens next. What Corbin will try to do, to prevent the Cadet from being boned. How he'll face Pete again. How he'll handle the whole Lee issue etc etc... I loved that Mister is slowly adjusting to Mike. The cat is a smart tool for you as a writer. It mirrors the emotional stages I go through as a reader. I was slowly getting comfortable with Mike, too. I have read some really good stories on this side, but yours is easily in the top three. I check daily (I don't even check my actual mailbox daily) for updates, eventhough I'm a lazy prick :-) So thank you again for updating again and for putting all this effort into this story. I hope to whatever god is listening, that you won't get tired of this, so we'll get an actual ending. Nothing is worse, then an unfinished masterpiece ;-) Have a great week pfox

holy cow... worst cliffhanger ever. It is crucial to leave me hanging like this. Amazing chapter. I love the twists in every single one. I love that Lee came into the spotlight again. Still think the Brit is the perfect match and that's why he has huge trouble letting go of Corbin. I am so sure they'll end up together eventually. I of couse don't want to be pushy, so I'm gonna say that I will patiently wait for you to update whenever you get the chance, even though it is hard for me to do so ;-) Thanks again for sharing. You sweetened my day with the update. Enjoy your sunday. grateful greetings pfox

I like this story, hope you'll pick it up again at some point It would be interesting to read this in Mark's point of view, too Cheers Pfox

I'm always on the lookout for a good read and I'm happy I found this story. I like the characters. very well developed. I'm also curious as to what Amber was hiding. i bet it is the same reason, why both were supposed to stay home. I love that they sneaked out anyway =) Thanks for sharing. Can't wait for more

I miss the Brit. They are a good match. I'm still certain, they'll come around. I knew Corb would put his game on and I knew he'd use the cadet. He will end up hurting him. Again an amazing chapter. Thanks for putting up with us crazy folks and updating so frequently. I love this piece and can't wait for more. It's good it comes in bit by bit though, otherwise I'd get no sleep at all reading through the night pfox

Pete's obviously hurt. I've been there, I've done that. Still I very much believe that Corbin is using the Vmee to get to Pete. Can't wait for Corbin to put his game on. He's a tactical kinda guy. He will use Mike exactly what he needs him for at the moment. Poor guy, but he said himself, that he's not able to give Corbin what he seeks. I bet Pete and Corbin will end up together. His boys were amazing. A great bunch. Thanks for updating!!

wow... what a chapter. i feel like i am on a rollercoaster full of emotions. I knew Corbin should've ditched Mike. He should have trusted his instincts... I so much can relate to Corbin, its scary =) thanks for the update.

oh man... I would have loved Corbin to ditch the cadet for the Brit. But I know what it's like to fall for one of them straight guys... it nearly always is painful... To have two of them asking for non dates is even worse... Hope the Brit will come around, thanks for updating =) your writing skills are amazing. I feel cheap to not have purchased this somehow, when I have paid so much money for crappy books in the past chears =)

holy fuck... So glad you picked it up again

I'm curious to know what made you give your story this title? Are you actually German?

I reread this once I read somewhere that you're working on this again, so I'm very much looking forward to more No pressure intended still love Mister the cat

a fine story Thanks for sharing

i wish i had the willpower to not read everything all at once, cause as you see now i'm going "cold turkey" waiting for you to update thanks again

this is getting better and better... I'm trying to not to read too fast so I can get the most of it, but you sure make that hard Thank you!!! pfox

well my confusion is gone This is really good and exciting. Love it to not know what's going to happen. Usually I'm not a friend of stories with more then one POV, but it is well done here. Makes it interesting too Thanks for the effort. You have gained a new fan =) pfox

2nd chapter confused me. but i guess thats gonna change with the 4th chapter. we'll see off to a good start. i totally have a craving for colombian food now

I like it so far. Thanks

the cat brings a nice twist to the plot