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  1. pfox25

    Friend Zone

    this is turning into a piece of art... characters are well built. it is a bless to read it. thanks so much for sharing pfox
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    Mister

    such a good story. you're talented. thanks!!! pfox
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    Somebody Status

    liked the first chapter very much... off to a good start =) thanks! pfox
  4. pfox25

    Chapter 27

    So I've read this over the last couple of days and I have to say, that it is a fine written piece of work. Not at all can you tell what'll happen next. Only few stories have that. Very well paced, which sure is an art itself. Thanks for the effort. Can't wait to see where this is going Pfox
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    Twists and Turns

    the writing gets better from chapter to chapter. I hope you didn't ditch this yet. Thanks for sharing =)
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    Over the Precipice

    there aren't enough stories of this kind. Open ending and all... Thanks for sharing. =)
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    Blindsided

    such a good piece of work...
  8. pfox25

    part iii

    I feel for Tristan... dating is hard And fun to read about... cant wait for more Thanks for sharing
  9. pfox25

    Choices

    such a nice story =)
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    part ii

    2nd chapter is hell of a lot of fun as well. Well paced!!! cant wait for more =)
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    part i

    awesome =)... haha. Sooo funny and well written (Avengers assemble - lol). Good thing I subscribed to your stories... would have been a bitch to find this on the side And not about teenagers - so rare to find these days.... I can easily relate to the characters... Good job... This earns a shout out... Thanks for sharing
  12. not finished... hmpf... its really good though...
  13. i told myself to not start this, since it's not finished. But I reread desert dropping and I couldn't resist. So I read those 4 chapters and I hate that there aren't 35 more of those. But since I am no one to judge, having never written a story myself, I'd like to say thanks for those 4 chapters =)
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    Chapter 1

    soo cute
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    Chapter 1

    I'm a dork, cause I actually checked my own profile and was wondering why you were on my favorite authors list. I haven't even read any of your stories, but I must have read a summery of one of them at some point and liked it so I added you, to not forget. But I did... But now I read this and it's really nice and all... so Thanks for writing it. Would love to read it from Jamie's point of view... just saying =)
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    Chapter 1

    they have keys you know?... haha... freakin funny =)... can't wait for more!!
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    Chapter 10

    i'm so sorry to hear about your mum. Thanks for sharing... really like this story so far...
  18. pfox25

    Chapter 1

    off to a good start. I like it so far. Different from what I've been reading, but not bad at all. can't wait to see where this is going. Thanks =)
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    Chapter 26

    cute... i had a hard time getting into it somehow, but in the end it was just beautiful. So thank you so much for writing it it was fun reading it =)
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    Chapter 20

    interesting turn of events with cams mom and stuff. It felt a little rushed at the end, but nothing dramatic. I would have like to read a little more about cam and his dad and them rebuilding their relationship, but we need to leave some room for a sequel Thanks a lot. It was a bliss =)
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    Chapter 7

    feedback after 7 chapters. I really like it. Very well paced. And cute =) Thanks
  22. pfox25

    Chapter 1

    I like the set up. I can tell that I like Cameron. Can't wait to see where this is going. So am gonna continue immediately
  23. pfox25

    Chapter 1

    finally got the chance to start one of your stories. A promising start I bet I'm gonna like Luke and his story =)
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    Chapter 23

    very much liked the ending. sometimes during the story a bit too much crying, but a well written plot. anyhow, thanks for charing. =)
  25. pfox25

    Story

    would have liked it more if they were like 17... but cute anyway, thanks
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