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By the end of this chapter the song Ding dong the witch is dead kept going through my head. It was great that Micah is getting out of there but it stinks that his stepfather and others may have to partially pay the price for the things he found out about. That's the way small towns work though. Those who are influential are usually looked over and messing with them, even if they are in the wrong usually tends to hurt the person who told as much as the person who commited the crime. Great chappy can't wait for the next one.

Yay and update. I had to go back and reread the entire thing just to make sure I remembered everything up to this point. I have a feeling that "Germ" said something about that stupid neighbor who's honestly come off as a useless dick. I just hope that it doesn't make Lucca think he should give up on Sam for that neighbor. Can't wait for more updates. I was starting to worry that this story was going to go into the forever unfinished pile, was so happy to see you continuing on.

I agree with stanolie that it was great that you let her die with respect and as she was. It made the story more believable because in real life miracles like Mira are rare indeed. Great chapter to a great story. Can't wait for more

I liked the story but I agree that it was a bit anti-climactic in the ending. Loved the story and checked the site 2 or 3 times a day looking for updates, just wish the ending had a bit more umph to it.

Loved this chapter. Can't wait to see how the story ends with Michael being made human

I really love how you've worked on this story and the way it slowly ekes out information building the border of the puzzle and the picture is finally starting to become visible and take shape. Keep up the great work.

Woo hoo an update. So glad it's continuing though i'm getting so frustrated with Jeremy being such a whiney little shit lol. I get he's hurt because Matt called out Lucca's name, but I think Sam is the better pick for Lucca, he deserves someone who will love him and truly see him for the beautiful soul he is.

So far this story is amazing and I hope you update soon. Kit is so funny he's definitely his father's son but you can also see a huge par of Tay in his personality. Can't wait for the next update.