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    Chapter 4

    Thank you for reading Foster!
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    Chapter 4

    I imagined the same, Lisa. You remember L, right, we were driving the other day and he got a bit adventurous. I worried, and got the idea of this chapter from that. So, I'm excited it turned out so awesome. Kian is complicated. He has his reasons for being interested in Daven. So, Naomi and the kids, I kind of miss them already, though Daven constantly thinks about them. Don't you just wanna cuddle Aram...hehehe.
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    Chapter 4

    Thank you Jeff, will work on more exciting chapters.
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    Chapter 4

    Thank you so much!! for reading.
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    Chapter 4

    Romance is coming, dancing in to a cafe on the streets of Paris, blooming in a hotel in Amsterdam, growing, growing.... hehehe definitely romance.
  6. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Thank you so much for letting me know.
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    Chapter 4

    And more, and more...gotta whole bunch of chapters, hehehe.
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    Chapter 4

    Weaving away, Jim. Thank you so much.
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    Chapter 4

    The speed chase was fun to write, and at first I kept thinking I can't keep it all in Kian's head...so glad that came out good. Daven is in for a ride and a half.
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    Chapter 5

    Chapter Five Daven cleaned Kian’s wound, concentrating on removing dirt from the raw skin to prevent infection. He used warm cotton balls, at times forced to scrub at stubborn bits. Kian made no sound through the process: no groan, no wince, and no sense of discomfort. Daven stared at the pile of dirty cotton balls on the napkin on the sink. By now, any patient would have cursed him out, or cried out for him to end the torture. That level of control should have disturbed him. Instead, it
  11. Dongsaeng-uh! Missing you very much! Hope your new year is good! Happy Birthday! Always, Noona.
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    Chapter 2

    Yeah...sad part for Daven. I guess it comes down to choices.
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    Chapter 2

    Daven's heart makes me smile. That's all I will say on that. As for Kian, he is hitting a crossroads of sorts.
  14. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you Defiance for reading my new story!
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    Chapter 1

    Kian and Grandpa have issues to deal...to be revealed...mwahahaha! Lolz..
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    Chapter 3

    Daven's gotta do what he needs to...lolz. He had to try and make a stand..hehehe. thanks for reading.
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    Chapter 3

    Thanks Lisa, for reading through! And for catching the little discrepancy...wah..my first thoughts coming to haunt me. Now you know, before Zena and Aram were 7 and 5, they were twins...lolz. I fixed it. No twins in this story. Cheers.
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    Chapter 3

    Thank you so much Cole! That means a lot to me.
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    Chapter 3

    Sorry, Geemeedee...sorted. Fighting with the first draft, which had the men dead at Naomi's, but the second draft has them alive. All square now. Thank you for noting that.
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    Chapter 3

    Jeff!! Always excited to intrigue you. Now I must plot and twist harder...lolz. Thanks for reading.
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    Chapter 3

    There's a whole can waiting to open, but for now, the immediate fire is put out. Kian and Daven need to find trust between them, really hard to do considering... Thanks Puppi.
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    Chapter 3

    Kian is a hoot!
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    Chapter 3

    Yay! Thanks Wesley.
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    Chapter 4

    Chapter 4 Daven wanted to hate Kian. He really did. The man had pointed a gun at him, and pulled the trigger without a flinch. So, why did he now smile so handsomely at Naomi, and listen to her with such attention. “Your house is beautiful,” Kian told Naomi. “You must have spent a lot of time on it.” Naomi’s gaze brightened, looking around the kitchen with pride. “I wanted to make it as comfortable as I could, but you still have to have style even in comfort.” “You got style,” Kian
  25. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Thank you Wesley! I hope to keep you hooked.
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