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Kian and Grandpa have issues to deal...to be revealed...mwahahaha! Lolz..
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Daven's gotta do what he needs to...lolz. He had to try and make a stand..hehehe. thanks for reading.
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Thanks Lisa, for reading through! And for catching the little discrepancy...wah..my first thoughts coming to haunt me. Now you know, before Zena and Aram were 7 and 5, they were twins...lolz. I fixed it. No twins in this story. Cheers.
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Thank you so much Cole! That means a lot to me.
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Sorry, Geemeedee...sorted. Fighting with the first draft, which had the men dead at Naomi's, but the second draft has them alive. All square now. Thank you for noting that.
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Jeff!! Always excited to intrigue you. Now I must plot and twist harder...lolz. Thanks for reading.
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There's a whole can waiting to open, but for now, the immediate fire is put out. Kian and Daven need to find trust between them, really hard to do considering... Thanks Puppi.
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Yay! Thanks Wesley.
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Chapter 4 Daven wanted to hate Kian. He really did. The man had pointed a gun at him, and pulled the trigger without a flinch. So, why did he now smile so handsomely at Naomi, and listen to her with such attention. “Your house is beautiful,” Kian told Naomi. “You must have spent a lot of time on it.” Naomi’s gaze brightened, looking around the kitchen with pride. “I wanted to make it as comfortable as I could, but you still have to have style even in comfort.” “You got style,” Kian
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Thank you Wesley! I hope to keep you hooked.
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Thank you Jeff, families do tend to make things tight, but you're right, little kids should feel safe at all times. Isn't it! I got a kick outta that one too...
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Daven's a good man, trying to do the right thing. It might get him into some trouble. As for Kian, he's reaching for something...
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Chapter Three Daven stepped back fast. His eyes filled with panic. Kian frowned. Perhaps he should have been more gentle in his introduction. Still, it was always good to keep the truth in the open. Daven was an assignment to him. His mark. Given to him by the deadliest organization in existence. Their relationship had to be clear. “I’m calling the cops,” Daven said, starting to head back to the house. “That would be a mistake.” “Two people are dead in the mall. You kille
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Chapter 10 “Where’s the Prince? Where is he? Where is he?” Sando shouted, his mouth covered with a cloth to ward off sand. Frantic, he moved from one horse to another, searching. The sand settled as abruptly as it appeared. Sando stood in the middle of a circle with the black guard and Lenoth, Midori’s man, on horses around him. “He’s gone,” Lenoth said. “Find him!” Sando screamed. Looking at the head of the black guard, he scowled. “We are not losing him now. You know
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Hi Wesle, thank you so much for reading this.
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Now I have to work harder, twists and turns, keep it interesting...hmmm... Thank you too, Jeff.
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Thank you so much! Excited to get back to writing too. Yay!
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Kian! He's on a quest, that's what. Thanks Puppi!
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Two “Wake up! Wake up!” Un-fucking-believable. Daven groaned into his pillow as two pairs of little hands rapped a relentless beat on his back. He turned his head to the left and opened one eye. He caught a glimpse of a brown-skinned little girl, her hair in long braids, peering at him. Zena caught him looking and she giggled, reaching for her brother, Aram, who knelt on Daven’s right side. Daven buried his face into his pillow again, listening to Zena and Aram whisper to each ot
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One Sixth Autumn Tones of orange, yellow and green colored the trees growing on the hills surrounding the valley. The air cool, calling for a warm wool scarf around the neck, a warm coat, perhaps thick socks, but the weather wasn’t there yet. Kian stared at his bleeding right index finger, his hands were numb from the cold. His upper arms burned, his shoulders ached, he wished he had on warmer clothes. “Faster.” Kian winced at the command. Biting his bottom lip, Kian glanced
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Kian spills his strawberry milkshake on Daven at a Mall Food Court. Daven is caught between irritation and fear when Kian follows him to the men's bathroom. In mere minutes, Dr. Daven Noland meets Kian Raja, an Assassin with a warped sense of humor, and a valid contract with Daven's name.
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Author Promo Author Promo: Lilansui
lilansui commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Lisa!!!! Thank you! And for mentioning My Jae, I tend to miss him a lot, and end up writing short little stories for him. Cole, Thank you too...I think you've sent me into heaven with excitement with this comment. If anyone needs me, I'll be there. :) Thank you Drew! The mention of the Crown Prince makes me want to go and update that right now with the speed of lightning. I can't wait to read other author features like these. There are so many amazing stories on this site! The backstories to the creative side would be so exciting to read about! I hope more authors get doing this! -
Author Promo Author Promo: Lilansui
lilansui commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Thanks Renee! What a way to end the day... it's already tomorrow for me...lolz! @Valkyrie, youre so right about the content. After I finished it, I was like, find a happy place....lolz. @Puppilull - Can't wait to see what you think of a haunted love. Love your thoughts. -
Lolz, thank you for this very passionate comment. I wanted to come back with a strong argument for the way I've written it, but..this is right. Perhaps Shin and Miki should have had a transition to get them back together. All I can say is...the heart never lies. Thanks for reading!
