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Life is imperfect, I once broke up with someone, a terrible, messy break up and ran into him in the supermarket hours later. What a crazy moment, you just wanna run, but you can't...sigh. Anyway, it was good for Soubi to meet Rin again, this way he can grow a shield against him.
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Oohh...wondering if the chores got done here, I think I should work on honing this cliff note skill...
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True, change is the hardest concept to sell...sometimes it can take years.
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We can call Ryo's family my view of the complexities that surround the conservative families around me. Saving Face is so important, that not hurting each other takes second place.
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Kaito is the best! He is the best friend everyone needs.
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Hahaha, this story was interesting to develop as my first thought was to write a struggle between Ryo and Rin for Soubi, but in the end it turned out different. How great to look back now. Soubi is those people who love too much, with even the inches of their hair....
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The blinking cursor on the screen was his enemy. It was almost eleven o’clock at night and he’d managed a meager one thousand words, Soubi grimaced and abandoned his laptop. Leaving it on the coffee table, he went to the kitchen. Soubi browsed the fridge and pulled out a package of rice balls he’d left there two days ago after the interview with Saki. When he opened the package, he gagged at the putrid action. He might have bought them earlier. Soubi aimed the package at the garbag
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What more is there to explain
lilansui commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in What more is there to explain
Intriguing plot, I'm quite curious about Xavier and Kyle's backstory. I think it's a perfect set up for angst, the wonderfully painful kind that keeps you reading and makes the obvious attraction Jasper has to Xavier quite exciting. Can't wait to read more. -
Left at the altar, that is painful. I feel for Alex because being left alone on a day you were ready to commit to someone you love is truly heartbreaking. Embry is brave for going after he wants, and Conner is one of those fickle people isn't he? Don't know whether to like him or be wary of him....great start!
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All of yours, music, calm, and my desk, but for me, writing also depends on the type of story and what is happening in my life at a given time. That last part is very frustrating sometimes because it can mean struggling through a story if things are not so great, which can turn into a nightmare. Or coasting through a story if I'm in the right mindset, which is amazing. I wonder if that happens to anyone else.
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Any mention of Ryo and Soubi always gets me smiling. Dan and Jae are also special, the story just keeps going on in my head. I think I imagine them the best. Jae and Dan are ...exactly as you describe, thank you for appreciating these characters. I'm glad to keep writing, thank you for reading, Onim!
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I will too. Kian propelled this story forward for me, and I will miss writing for him. Thanks Wesley, for getting here with me. Should I write a side-story with a wedding and a kid...hahaha...that would be fun. They can skydive to their honeymooon....lolz. Onim!! Thank you for all the loves!!, I love that you love this story. I promise to think up a new one soon. Thank you Geemeedee for reading this story of mine. Thanks Jeffrey, for reading and loving Kian and Daven. I'm excited for those two dealing with normal issues, like breakfast and kids, simply living. Thank you for always reading, Puppi.
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Getting back to normalcy was hard to write, lolz, I kept wanting to have Kian jump out of the building in some stunt. Lolz. But, his goal was much more beautiful than mine, so I went with where Kian and Daven led. Thanks for always reading Jeffrey! The funny part about both these two characters, is that deep down, I think they both wanted the home and hearth, it just was always out of reach. For Daven,because of grief, and caring too much when he was out there, for Kian, it was just denied him. While it might seem insane for them to try, I thought they'd take to it quite easily, just with their own brand to it. Puppi, thanks so much for reading and commenting.
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Chapter Fifteen Life truly came at you in twists and turns. Had someone told him he would be living on a ten-acre organic plant farm in Hana, Hawaii, Daven would have called him or her crazy. In the span of six months, he and Kian had purchased the property, and revived the flower business that came with the land. They’d renovated the two-story home, making more than enough room for Naomi and the kids. Kian had taken to the flower business like a fish to water. The greenhouse seem
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On a rainy morning, two days later, Kian woke to child whispers over his head. He kept his eyes closed, listening to a fascinating conversation. “Look, his eyes look like Aunt Anika’s kitty,” a little boy’s voice said. “He doesn’t have fur,” a girl’s voice countered. “But his hair is soft like Aunt Anika’s cat,” the boy argued. “He’s not a cat, silly,” she said. Small fingers touched his hair, and Kian stole a glance under his eyelashes to see Zena take her brother’s ha
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Raja Securities caved under the world’s scrutiny. The glossy cover constructed by Seiko Raja to gain investment and a steady run of security jobs cracked the moment the law turned a critical eye. A raid at the Tokyo Raja Securities offices yielded enough evidence to get the top management arrested. Investors, realizing the impact association with the company would have, pulled out. The great collapse took minutes. Or from the moment, Kian left the Operations Center in the company of
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Our Sacred, your tears are precious, so don't cry too much. Ren and Ryan were a very cute couple, I wanted to keep writing them, but the deadline was staring me in the face...hehehe...I always feel like I might not make it in time. So glad this story came out so well. Are you writing, Dongsaeng? I hope so. Don't miss any meals...okay?
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Thank you Scottie, for this exquisite comment. I love it when I get the picture painted back in such a vivid way from a reader. I have this moment of 'ah' I did it, I got it out there...so thank you for your rambling. I understand what you mean on unrequited love, I think it is the most difficult type of love anyone can give, the most beautiful and difficult I should say...I send you a virtual hug. You have made my month, and possibly the next few with this comment, Thank you for reading! Sui.
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Well, as this story comes to an end, I discover that Daven is not someone to sit back and let other people save what he considers his, so...he makes surprising decisions.. Aye, you're lucky, the story is actually complete as I write this, so expect the last two chapters to come very fast this week. Thank you so much for reading!
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“Daven.” For a moment, Daven thought he was back home, and Naomi was waking him. Two firm shakes on his shoulders, dragged him out of the blissful comfort of sleep. Rubbing his eyes, he shifted on the bed and sat up when he found Lina perched on his right side. “What are you doing here?” “Glad you’re finally awake. He must have given you a sleeping pill.” Daven stared at her, then glanced down at his wrinkled suit and fear slammed through him. “Kian.” He sat up,
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Happy Birthday!! Many Wishes to you!
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Chapter 11 “Claiming me?” Kian stared at Daven and felt a chuckle bubble out. “Your innocence level is too high for me." “Scale the damn wall, because I’m serious.” Kian folded his arms against his chest. “Okay,” Kian said. “Think two steps ahead. Where do you see us in the next two weeks? Hmm…do you see me in your perfect home in Oakland, making breakfast, running errands, and going out shopping to the mall?” “That sounds right,” Daven said, with a nod. “I e
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Nephy, ***Squeal*** I'm a fan of yours, so this is AMAZING! Thank you so much for reading my story! You have made my day, absolutely. Thanks!
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This is the highest gift ever. Thank you Valkyrie.
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Oh Lisa, thank you for this. I think that Ren's situation is not an easy one to express. A fact I was conscious of as I tried to get him into a relationship with Ryan. I kept thinking, I doubt he'd jump into a fling after six months, considering the twins, and Henry's betrayal. What a conundrum that was on a deadline...lolz. But I'm glad it turned out okay. Yes, back to The Assassin. Part of the problem was I kept getting inspiration to write Kian, while Ren and Ryan are stuck in limbo, sigh...fully back on the Assassin now. Thanks for reading.
