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This story is always so liberating to write. I break all the rules here, so glad you love it still. I should dedicate a few weeks to this now and see where His Royal Highness and Sando take me. Poor Sando, he just can't get a break from the Prince...
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Reviews are always fun to read regardless of how long. Adrian is a very skilled troublemaker. I never got around to sharing a picture of him, or what I thought he should look like, lolz.
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Adrian is a bad egg, as Hill says in this story, he was Alexi's catnip. It's great going back to this, I feel like I'm on a journey back because of you. Thank you!
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Thank you so much for reading A Healing Heart! Finally figured out how to get my review notifications, and so replying to yours now. Thank you for all the reviews and reading my stories.
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Funnest story to write, simply a moment in their lives.
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Yes, a lot about tea in this one. Tea is such a part of my life, I wondered what a story would look like if I tried, and came up with The Precious Teahouse.
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Thank you Sweetlion.
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Chapter 11 The Palace Courts, Lexin City Almira clutched a small gold coin in her left palm, feeling the texture, the perfect round shape. She closed her fingers tight around the coin, the action hidden by the rich white silk brocade embroidered with red dragons. Her right hand gripped the smooth carved dragonhead on the arm of her throne. How many times had she sat here listening to the court ministers bicker? Decades it seemed. Good and bad memories weighed on her shoulders; she
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I am Slayed!!!! lau Aigoo!! That is quite a disgusting sandwich, the kids would definitely throw it away. This is why I need beta readers. lolz. Originally, I meant this sandwich to be ham, honey mustard and tomato, but it was early in the morning, and someone close was having a tiff about jam with me. Guess I just typed it out and didn't think about it after. Don't fight and write. lolz. 4
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story review Featured Story: A Healing Heart
lilansui commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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That's a real pleasure knowing the chores took a backseat for this story. I would definitely help you with the dishes, and sorting papers, mowing the lawn though...that one you're on your own.... I'm glad you you enjoyed this story of mine. A big hug to you. They say being away makes the heart grow fonder, or something like this, but you're right, separation is hard. Ryo and Soubi are strong. As for Tohaku, I struggled with including more on him, but in the end it felt like his story would take up a whole book...struggles...so I left it as is. Thank you for reading. Thank you for the encouragement. I hope to write more soon.
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These native issues are sometimes really hard to express. Hmm...Ryo's obligation actually stems from the fact that Tohaku, his brother, asked him to take care of Sakura and his child. This kind of promise is hard to break, so he will go through everything he can to protect this promise. Such a good man...lolz, no wonder Soubi is crazy about him...hahaha
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Up and down, seems like stuff is always happening.
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This was an easy chapter, just them living life. I love these slice of life types of scenes by the way. Just everyday life..
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Life is imperfect, I once broke up with someone, a terrible, messy break up and ran into him in the supermarket hours later. What a crazy moment, you just wanna run, but you can't...sigh. Anyway, it was good for Soubi to meet Rin again, this way he can grow a shield against him.
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Oohh...wondering if the chores got done here, I think I should work on honing this cliff note skill...
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True, change is the hardest concept to sell...sometimes it can take years.
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We can call Ryo's family my view of the complexities that surround the conservative families around me. Saving Face is so important, that not hurting each other takes second place.
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Kaito is the best! He is the best friend everyone needs.
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Hahaha, this story was interesting to develop as my first thought was to write a struggle between Ryo and Rin for Soubi, but in the end it turned out different. How great to look back now. Soubi is those people who love too much, with even the inches of their hair....
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The blinking cursor on the screen was his enemy. It was almost eleven o’clock at night and he’d managed a meager one thousand words, Soubi grimaced and abandoned his laptop. Leaving it on the coffee table, he went to the kitchen. Soubi browsed the fridge and pulled out a package of rice balls he’d left there two days ago after the interview with Saki. When he opened the package, he gagged at the putrid action. He might have bought them earlier. Soubi aimed the package at the garbag
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What more is there to explain
lilansui commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in What more is there to explain
Intriguing plot, I'm quite curious about Xavier and Kyle's backstory. I think it's a perfect set up for angst, the wonderfully painful kind that keeps you reading and makes the obvious attraction Jasper has to Xavier quite exciting. Can't wait to read more. -
Left at the altar, that is painful. I feel for Alex because being left alone on a day you were ready to commit to someone you love is truly heartbreaking. Embry is brave for going after he wants, and Conner is one of those fickle people isn't he? Don't know whether to like him or be wary of him....great start!
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Any mention of Ryo and Soubi always gets me smiling. Dan and Jae are also special, the story just keeps going on in my head. I think I imagine them the best. Jae and Dan are ...exactly as you describe, thank you for appreciating these characters. I'm glad to keep writing, thank you for reading, Onim!
