Nasuada

This is really intriguing. I can't wait to read about what happens next.

What an insecure little jerk! I can't even fathom how Reagan would think Noah would want that jerk back when he has some one who treats him sooo much better than Derek ever did! And if he thinks he's something more to Derek than he was while he was still with Noah he's sooo wrong!

Yeah Noah!!! At the end of last chapter I was thinking there's NO WAY Eli would believe that Noah kissed that jerk willingly!!! I'm really glad he did!!

Fucking asshole!!! He knew Eli was coming!! Ahhh!!! You seriously need to throw us a bone here and post the next chapter soon!!!!

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Oooh Noah's got sass. You tell that dick boy!! Awesome! Just sayin.

What a fucking hypocritical asshole!!! Derek needs to get his ass kicked! And Eli is just the man to do it too. How does Derek even figure he has any rights as to who Noah goes out with anyways?!! I mean does he think that since he doesn't want Noah that no one else should be able to have him either! I say again what a total ass!!! I hope Eli seriously puts that jerk in his place. He needs to be nocked off his high horse. What kind of jerk does this kinda shit!!! Cheat on your significant other of 20 years because he's getting too old. Sell the house you said he could stay in. Then show up and get pissed because some one else is pleasuring your ex. Then try and pay the person to "go away". Is Noah just not allowed to actually be happy? REALLY!!!

This was a really good story. All those horrible people and the awful things they did to those people. How does some one just think that that's ok?! Anyways, even after all the shit he went thru and is still going thru Silver sounds like a really wonderful person. I didn't review before because I wanted to read the whole first. I went through a wide range of emotions in this story. I cried a lot sometimes they were good tears though. It was a very enjoyable read over all. My husband always looks at me weird when he's like what are you reading as I'm grabbing for the tissue box. But that's really what makes a good story... Being connected to the characters. Feeling their emotions.

I'm alittle late readying this chapter because I didn't notice the notification. Till today but oh well. I've read it now and omg I totally didn't expect him to have a tumor. I mean I figured there might be something wrong with him but holy hell. What a time for everyone to have abandoned him. I'm glad that Alex and Jess are going to go see him. Can't wait till the next one comes out! Awesome, thanks!

Ok this is promising to me a really good story. I'm intrigued to find out what happens next. Thanks for recommending I check it out!

☺Yeah I missed the last 2 chapters too. I'm not sure how that happened a side from the fact that I usually only check my notifications for Dust & Ash updates but that's ok I'm caught up now! And may I say this is so great. Luke is young and happy with his 2 dads they have a home now and now he even has a friend his age. Life's looking up for them right now... Here's hoping it stays that way. I really like the way this is written. I'm kinda a scifi fantasy geek when it comes to books and stuff so yeah... Great job can't wait for more! Nasuada Aka: Aletta

Ok if that's the end I'm mad! It was a good story but wtf?! What happens? Does he actually die? Does Sam? I mean it was an enjoyable read and I was on the edge of my seat then.... Wtf?!

Ok I'm new to this story and things were good and it was getting really exciting then... WTF! Holy cliffhanger! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I'm really looking forward to it. Thanks for a good read.

So I totally love this story! And tho the shorter version gives some idea what happens I want to hear about Jonas' story... The continuation of this one! What happens when he goes back to work after his date?! You can't just leave us like this!!! Please continue!

Or his uncle Besh... Remember when Peri and Devin were talking about it on the compad...

Awesome! As always ways and holy f***ing shit! He's pregnant again!?!? I think you should do a story about peri now... Kinda like Coming Home. That would be cool

I was getting worried when a new chapter did come out this weekend... I was worried something happened... Thanks for the update, so that I know to expect it soon. I'll be watching for it! Awesome!

I agree with all comments made... It was good and I really liked the way everything went. But I feel like it ended to soon. How does Jason help Stone... Does everything turn out well for all?

I totally agree!!! No joke every week I'm like a new chapter should be coming out soon!!!

Ahhhhh!!!! What happens!?!?!?!? Ps I really enjoyed this chapter...

Awesome new chapter! I know it's cliche but I can't wait to see what happens next!

Awesome I can't wait!!!

I have really enjoyed this. I can't wait to see what's I store for Jake and Donovan. Please post a new chapter soon!!