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Yes. It will keep getting more interesting. Many surprises are yet to come so keep reading. Thanks a lot for the review.
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I love drama which depicts in my story. I hope you like it. Daryl will get what he deserves but it will take time. A lot more to come so keep writing. Thanks a lot for the review.
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Zune will be better but it will take some time. Along with Ed and Jake, Zune will recover with time. About Daryl, I promise he will get what he deserve but not anytime soon.Thanks a lot for the revie
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Edward and Zune had to go through a lot more along with Jake. Keep reading. There's a lot more to come. Thank you very much for the review.
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This twist will build up the base for coming twists. Thank you for the review.
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Carol's fierce behavior is her biggest quality. She's actually amazing. Thanks for the review.
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Crushed Dreams and Broken Hearts
sacredlove commented on sacredlove's story chapter in Crushed Dreams and Broken Hearts
Yes, you are right. Zune deserved it but things are going to change soon. Thanks for the review. -
I hope your opinion about Zune and Kev will be changed in coming chapters. Thanks for the review.
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I agree with you. Zune is wrong but he's also a human being, he's not perfect, he can make mistakes though Kev didn't deserve this. Things will get more complicated from here. Thanks for the review.
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Well things will turn worse for Kev in coming chapters. Thank you for the review.
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Thanks a lot for your review. I'm glad you are enjoying story so far. There's a lot remaining to be happen in Zune, Edward and Kev's lives so stay tuned.
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Chapter 19: Damaged Jake Two Weeks Later Zune hadn’t slept since the day he had been discharged from the hospital and came to Matt’s house. He was constantly gazing at some non-existent thing in front of him. Carol and I were sitting on either side of his bed, staring at him intently but he didn’t even notice us; we were invisible to him. It was breaking our hearts into millions of pieces to see him like that and not be able to do anything for him. I gave him a sleeping pill prescribed
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I'm happy Toshi told Jason everything about his past. Now there's no secrets between them but now what? Is Toshi is going to leave again? I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. Get well soon and continue with this story, Sui. I really miss you and your amazing characters.
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“I imagine a net would work better than a hook and worm. If I was a fish, I'd surely know I was being cheated." This dialogue made me laugh. The whole conversation on the fishing trip without any net was great. It was nice to see them knowing each other, laughing together, fishing together. I really like Jason. He really cares about Toshiro exactly what Toshiro needs right now. I'm sure there's more drama is coming in there way. Amazing work with the dialogues in this chapter. Onto the next chapter.
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Yay! Toshiro and Jason met again. It is getting better and better. Kaito seems to be a typical, ruthless, bollywood villain to me. But I actually liked the way he talks, his personality appeals to me in a strange way. For me he's the most powerful character in this story so far. Sean seems nice too. Let's see what's in store for 'Jashiro' in coming chapters. Moving onto the next chapter.
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Something tells me Toshiro and Jason are going to meet again and this time will stay together for a bit longer. I think Toshiro was not entirely wrong leaving the place though I was disappointed when he left. Jason was surely going to miss him. Another wonderful chapter! Onto the next chapter.
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Intriguing! There's already a visible chemistry between Toshiro and Jason. I love love stories and I guess this will also be a romantic one. Hopping to the next chapter! Great work!
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Jaeshun is so full of crap. He had no decency or shame for that matter. I love Dan more and more with each passing chapter. He's an angel. Let's see how Dan and Jae are going to deal with being apart from each other. I'm sure their they will get through this. And, of course that love making scene was HOT! It was really amazing. As usual very nice chapter!
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Happy Birthday:)
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
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Another great chapter! I was waiting for this update since ages but I must say it was worth the wait. Corbin's frustration is understandable with all the drama with Pete, Mike, Lee and now this article. He needs comfort and someone there for him. I am sure things will be better for him in coming chapter. Corbin is the most interesting and different yet complex character I have ever read. I hope I'll read more of him soon so please update. Thanks for the great chapter. Looking forward for more.
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A very happy birthday:)
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At this moment I don't think Nine will come back or anything but you never know. About Daryl, I promise he'll get what he deserves but I can't promise when. Thanks a lot for your constant support and reviews btw next chapter is posted. Keep reading:)
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Hey Lisa, thank you so much for your review. Angel's character was supposed to end this way and believe me it was very difficult for me. About how Edward found Zune and your other doubts...next chapter has all the answers which is posted now. So let me know what do you think about it. Thanks again for everything and keep reading:)
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Aww...thank you so much for such an amazing review Sui. You are right it would take a long time for Zune to get back to his old self, few people will be with him and some will be against him but I assure you Edward will be with Zune. Next chapter is posted. Let me know what do you think about it. Keep reading:)
