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Happy belated birthday!!

Happy Birthday!!

Yes Lisa, Stephen is back with his cousin. Michelle and Carol would continue to 'love' each other in coming chapters, lol. Well, reactions of Ed and Kev on Stephen's comeback would be interesting to see. I will start working on it soon. Thank you so much Lisa for the review and letting me know what you think about the chapter. It really means a lot:)

Happy Birthday, Andy:)

Happy Birthday, Lisa I hope you have a great day and year ahead. Enjoy and celebrate this special day. and and for always there for me. You are just amazing, Girl!! Take care and Keep Smiling SacredLove.

Chapter 22: True Love, Conflicted Emotions, and Inevitable Tragedy. Zune Carol’s car was racing smoothly down the highway. The early morning sunshine felt pleasant on my face. I hugged myself and inhaled deeply to savor this peaceful moment. “We really needed this.” I looked behind me at Jake, who was beaming in the backseat. “You guys should thank me for planning this trip,” Carol boasted, slightly accelerating the speed of her vehicle. “Yeah. A trip to…nowhere,” I asserted, closing my

Dimitri's business confuses me. Is it true that he's a russian gang leader or he told Talin the truth? I am sure something is there about Dimitri that Talin don't know but he need to know that ASAP. Romantic scene between Talin and Dimitri and the ending 'bed scene' was cute...really cute. Suspense with romance...this story has an amazing combination in it. Waiting for the next chapter, please update soon.

As far as I remember this story is the base for your another 'crown prince yoshi', but still as a separate story, I loved it! I have come across a very few lesbian stories here. I have no idea how I missed this story. Amazing lead couple. Battle scene was good. The scene between Naria and Telia was heartbreaking. Telia somehow reminded me of 'Lady Berth' from 'Game of Thrones' TV series. I Wish you could continue this story as a love story of Telia and Naria as lead couple. Anyway, I am babbling now, lol. Very nice short story. Loved it. Keep writing Sui because I am addicted to it:)

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I am glad you continued. The story of Alan's past was really sad. He had a choice to pursue his dreams, to live his life with Jack but he couldn't and knowing about his circumstances it's understandable. I am happy that now his son would not have to go through this family tradition. This conversation between Martin and Alen, I hope, us the beginning of Alen's new dream which, this time, he could follow and make true. Amazing chapter and waiting for the next one:)

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Happy Birthday:)

Happy Birthday!

Thank you for your great reviews, Sammiam. It really means a lot. And your praising words made my day. Carol is awesome, Isn't she? I truly love her. About Matt, I don't think there is any way he could redeem himself or is there? Well, we have to see that. Many more surprises are yet to come so stay tuned:)

Honestly, I was quite nervous and anxious in anticipation about what you think about these serious chapters but I guess I can breathe now, LOL. This story is completed from start to finish in my mind. From the very beginning I knew where this story will go. I know from the start this story seems just like a normal love-triangle but I'm glad you think it is more than just that. Zune's situation is complex and about Nine...I guess you would have known his fate by now. Nine, Rachael, Casey, Jamie and Angel, these characters were introduced to show the life could be in a brothel. Thank you very much for your review:)

This will keep getting interesting:)

Again you're right. Kev is not the same person he was a few years ago. He and Edward had came a long way ahead of what they were. Zune's reaction towards Kev was nothing but burgeoning anger and shock.He was accusing him on behalf of Stephen. I'm glad I'm able to surprise you; that's the motive, lol. Yes, Kev deliberately made Zune wait to hook up with Joey; he was in full revenge mode. Right now, none of them is ready for anything. They need time and full honesty towards each other. But the question remains the same: Are they good for each other? Only time will tell. And yes, CAROL ROCKS!! I love her. Thank you for your insightful reviews.

You're right, this thing could be the fondest memory for Zune and Edward but it's not. Zune doesn't like Edward; it was a mistake for him, a blunder but you can't say the same about Edward. Nothing is going on with Kev except that he's madly in love with Zune though next chapter (Which you had already read by now) is all about his anger. Thank you for the review.

so finally things begin to work out between Haje and Vincent. Vincent is good for Haje unlike that cooper guy. Vincent is right about not trusting him. Haje's pain of losing Shin is not going away soon but I am glad he's not alone;Vincent is with him. Jaxton was mysterious. It was hard to tell whether he knows anything about the death of Shin and Virgil or not. Things are getting more interesting so don't make us wait long and update soon. Will wait for the next chapter.

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First of all thanks a lot for the review and letting me know what you feel about the story so far. Your frustration towards Zune is understandable. You are right Zune is just a kid and a human that's the reason he can’t be perfect even if he wanted to be. That’s what I wanted to show through this character. No one can be perfect even if he wanted to be; everyone has flaws and Zune is no exception. He is making and will continue to make some stupid decisions in the coming chapters and he have to pay for them big time. Zune is not telling anyone about Edward because he know no one will approve of their ‘friendship’ and also, the thrill Edward brings to his life is probably stopping him from doing so. His new habit of hiding truth from everyone will bring drastic results in the later chapters. Zune is going to admit the truth but it’ll be damn late till then. From the very beginning I showed Edward as a bully, an abusive guy but in previous chapters ‘The Portrait’ and ‘Friends? Friends’, I tried to show the other side of him, the real him though it doesn’t change the fact that he’s not a saint either. And if you think Kev is a saint and had committed no mistakes then you’ll be surprised to know about him in coming chapters. Any of these three characters is not perfect. Edward’s mother Becca knew about his son’s tendencies that's why she also knew that this is not the actual Edward and Zune is a hope to her. Somehow she’s sure that Edward won’t hurt Zune because the effect Zune had on Edward had no one had in a very long time, not since Stephen (Edward’s best friend). Zune’s mom Jenny is quite impulsive and she’ll regret her decision (in coming chapters) about Matt. You’re right Zune should let out his anger on Matt and you’ll see some of it in the next chapter. You would be able to find well-deserved bitterness and anger in Zune for Matt. Once again thank you for your views on the story so far. I really appreciate it. Take Care.

I would definitely want you to continue the story of Martin and Roman. I am sure things are gonna more interesting. I will wait for the update:)

I don't know why but Dimitri reminds me of Ryo Asada. I liked kat and Lucas. The conversation part between Dimitri and Talin was great and that kiss was damn sexy, lol. I think Dimitri is not the only one with secrets...Talin seems to have some secrets too. Amazing chapter, Sui. Keep them coming.

Yay!!! Another new romantic story from Sui. I am very excited as the characters seems intriguing and story seems refreshing. I definitely liked Dimitri. Talin is cute and Lori was nice too. I am sure many surprises are waiting for us in coming chapters so keep them coming. And that cliffhanger was spot on. Can't wait for the next chapter so keep writing.

Thanks a lot Lilansui for your review. Yes, Daryl's truth is in front of everyone but things won't be easy for Kev now. Let's see how he apologizes to Zune and how Edward asks for Jake's forgiveness. Things would go messy for everyone in coming chapters so keep reading. Thanks once again for your words, Lilansui. Take Care.