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Chapter 18: Long Road Ahead Jake I was anxiously waiting for Ron, leaning against the wall parallel to the front door, folding my hands against my chest. A fire was inside of me. I wanted to get out of here as soon as possible but not before confronting him. After waiting forever, the front door unlocked and opened. Ron came inside holding his office bag in one hand and his coat in another. He nervously smiled at me and then looked away. He slumped onto the couch with a heavy sigh. I re
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Thank you so much for your review, GJ. Keep reading:)
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Well, I know how much you liked Nine and I'm so sorry about him but that's the way it was supposed to happen. Thanks a lot for review. Next chapter will be up soon...hopefully. Keep reading:)
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Thanks, Gregg for your review.About what will happen to Zune and Daryl, you'll have to wait for next chapter. Keep reading:)
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Thank you for your review, Terry. Yes, finally Zune escaped. About him found by Edward, there will be surely explanations in coming chapter. Keep reading:)
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Thank you very much for your review, Jo Ann. Keep reading.
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Last surprise of the night
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Thank you, Joann for your review. Well, things are not easy for him in coming chapters. Keep reading:) -
After reading other reviews I came to know that you wrote this song on your own and believe that song was amazing....suited perfectly to the situation. I really like connversations between Dan and Jae. Dan is very intelligent and caring. He actually treats three of them as a mother. Jae is way more mature than before. I'm curious to know what happens with the arrival of Harry. Another wonderful chapter...waiting for more and when are you planning to update 'Dragon's kiss'. I really miss Vincent and Haje. keep up the good work.
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CONGRATULATIONS to all winners!
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Chapter 17: The Escape Zune I closed my eyes as I was not able to face whatever was going to happen. I was shivering with cold and fear, fear of losing Angie. Every moment I shared with Angie replayed in my mind - the laughs, the cries, the fights, the talks, the silence, everything. Tears were still streaming down my face. “This is…this is not happening,” I falsely consoled myself in between my sobs. And then I heard someone pull the trigger. My eyes snapped open. A fading smoke was v
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Well, it made me feel cuddled even when I'm alone in my bed...so thanks for that:)
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And they lived happily ever after. First of all thanks a lot for sharing this amazing romantic story with us, Sui. It was a great journey filled with faith and love. Like 'Kiss me to Springtime', this story will also have a very special place in my heart. I'll always love Joshexi and surely going to miss them. The end was perfect with Josh, Alexi and Shane together. A family, a home, it was just amazing. A great job, Sui. It is one of my favorite stories and will always be. Once again, thanks. Take care:)
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I think Joshua should accept Allegra's offer and Alexi seriously need to cool down a bit. I mean he's over-thinking about Allegra's offer. I'm sure Allegra and Philip are doing what is best for everyone.Well, as last chapter is up I hope everything has been sorted out. I loved the beginning of this chapter. The way Joshua and Alexi met. The way Josh was stepping towards Alexi in a dreamy way. The way they made love. It was soooo romantic. I loved it but my favorite scene was the airport scene. It was really breaking my heart to see them getting apart. I read that scene thrice, it was that good. I loved loved loved this chapter and now moving on to the last chapter of this amazing story. Great work, Sui.
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I found this story very emotional and thought provoking. I felt myself connected to the narrator in some unknown way. I was able to feel his feelings, it was that good. The end with his( I would prefer him a he) picture in wedding dress in that tray was actually heart-breaking. Perfect ending. Really liked this story. Great work. Keep writing!
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After reading your review, now I'm on cloud 'NINE' (I definitely know how much you like him, haha). Thanks a lot for such beautiful words. I'm not even sure whether I deserve those amazing words. Thank you. Thank you so much. To know what will happen about Nine, Zune and Angie, wait for the next posting and I promise it won't take as long time as it took me to post the last chapter. Take Care.
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Hey Rajat, thanks a lot for your review. I know it was a sad chapter but there will be happy chapters too but not anytime soon. Take Care and Happy new Year.
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Lisa, you are such a sweetheart, girl. Thank you so much for the review. It was really good. Casey, Jamie,and Rachael were in the chapter to show the life in that brothel and their death will leave a long lasting impact on Zune/Swan. About Nine and Angie, well you have to wait for the next chapter. Once again Lisa thank a lot for everything. Take Care.
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Chapter 16: Scarred Souls Zune For the next two days I was in my bed. Lauren visited to check on me from time to time. Most of the time, I found Brown Eyes…Nine standing in the doorframe, staring me with a remorseful look on his face but he never came inside or said anything. Angel was on my side whenever she had no clients. She took very good care of me. Throughout these two days she kept trying to make me smile, to make me say something, but to no avail; I wouldn’t open my mouth. Aft
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I loved that love making scene between Jae and Dan, that was smoking HOT!! There was so much passion, romance and lust in that scene. Totally perfect. I loved Jae's sister and equally hated her boyfriend or say ex-boyfriend. He so not deserve her. Andre and Junghee were great as usual. Jaeshun is still an asshole. I hope he doesn't show his face again to jeopardize Dan and Jae's relationship. I think Jae should visit his mother soon because Jaeshun visiting his mother sounds not so good to me. I so not trust Jaeshun's intentions. Great work, Sui. Will wait for the next chapter:)
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Hey Smoothy. First of all, sorry for replying so late and thanks a lot for your beautiful words. Your review really made my day. I'm so glad you liked my story so much. It really means a lot to me. Next chapter is with Lisa, my amazing proof-reader. Hopefully next chapter will be up within a week. Once again thanks for the review, Smoothy. I hope you'll keep reading and reviewing. Take Care:)
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A sweet chapter dipped in chocolaty romance...just loved it. So glad that finally Dan and Jae made love; that scene was actually amazing. Their kisses, touches and little moments together were highlights of the chapter. I so love seeing them together. I hope they always remain together. I was happy not to see Jaeshun in this chapter. I really like Dan. He's patient, funny, romantic, caring...all the ingredients of a perfect boyfriend. Like your all heroes, he's also a gem. Great work Sui...looking for more romance. Take care:)
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Happy Birthday!
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY, LISA!!!! I hope you have an amazing day. Have loads of fun and keep smiling. Love and chocolates:)
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
