you guys actually never gave conflicting advice., what zandra missed you caught. as for the betas i just recently added phantom and he has done a tremendous job with fixing some of the plot holes that are there
1.) Jamie didn't think about being straight or gay. He just knew that he hadn't had any desire for either male or female.
2.)There are a few but you never know what is going to come up in the sequel
3)When I first started the story he was a girl
4) that's a myth
5) Jackson is well off, his dad has a couple of business plus he worked for his dad's companies from the time he was 15 and had been saving up so that he would have the means to take care of his mate.
There have been several things that I have actually gone back and changed so that things made more sense. Overall I would probably change the section where Jackson is kidnapped and make some changes there
Chapter 7
Waking early I just watched Tim as he slept peacefully without a care in the world. I wanted to show him that I was not going to let Mom cause a rift between us. I know that her inability to accept him as my mate hurts him even though he won’t admit it.
I just can’t understand how she can be so rude and ugly to him. I’ll have to ask Dad and see if he knows what’s going on with her. This isn’t the same mom that we had while growing up. She was loving and compassionate to everyone, not