I just finished reading this - An amazing story, truly deserving of being published (if I may dare say, it is gay fictions own epic saga in the tradition of Lord of the Rings) I came to love the characters, I cried along side them and felt like I was part of the story, watching event unfold myself - you've managed to make this world so real. I love how you've mixed science fiction, fantasy and good old human romance and emotions so well. It isn't happy ever after story either; characters die and not everybody finds true love. In some ways that makes it even easier to relate to the people in this story and their struggles.
I started out reading this expecting it to be a short tale of normal length (I began by reading your small version which is broken up into chapters, before discovering the full story was already posted) and I was surprised and delighted to find it was such an epic tale. Kudos to you, it must have taken you an age to write this masterpiece.