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    Chapter 5. “What the . . . where’s the . . . where did it go?” Viktor asks me. “It healed,” I shrug. I’m going to get a perverse sense of amusement out of this conversation, I can feel it. “In the seven minutes it took us to get from there to here it healed completely?” he says, clearly not sure if he should believe, despite what he can see with his own eyes. “No,” I say slowly, like I’m talking to a child, “in the ten seconds it took me to get my hand out of her mouth and grab her hands it
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    Chapter 4

    Lypiphaera commented on Lypiphaera's story chapter in Chapter 4

    It's so good to hear that you're enjoying it:)
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    Chapter 4

    Lypiphaera commented on Lypiphaera's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Haha I know, I like him too even if he does do some horrible stuff:)
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    Chapter 4. I keep a stash of weapons and body armour under my bed in a specially designed suitcase. I grab my favourite gun from it and take it with me to the shower. I shower just long enough to rinse off the blood the vampire missed when he was feeding and then dress, loading myself with weapons as I go. I can’t hide much under my clothes, but I manage to fit two guns to my ankles, throwing knives around my waist and on my wrists, and a dirk that fits into a sheath that runs down my spine. I
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    Chapter 3

    Lypiphaera commented on Lypiphaera's story chapter in Chapter 3

    A revenant is a corpse that rises to terrorize the dead - Mark refers to the vampire as one because at that point the vampire was just that - a mindless corpse that would terrorize the living until it was either put down, or in this case consumed enough blood to return it to its vampiric state.There's a lot Mark doesn't know about vampires - he's never bothered to research anything other than how to kill them. I'm glad you're enjoying it:)
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    Chapter 3. My breath caught in my throat and I darted over to the vampire. He looked awful. His cheeks and eyes were sunken and hollow, his lips were pale and his whole face looked pinched. I reached out and my hand hovered over his face. I wanted to touch him. There was an IV attached to him, as well as a heart monitor and some other gadgets. I drop my hand and look over at the doctor. “You need to take all of this stuff off of him. He needs to come home with me,” I say and Dr. Pierson looks
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    Chapter 2. “Oh come on Miri! Open up!” I’m at my best friend’s place. She won’t open the door for me, probably because she can still smell faint traces of blood on me. Damn her and her sensitive nose. It’s been three days since that night, and even though I’ve showered every time I got up and every time I went to bed Miri will still be able to smell the blood on me. That’s because she’s a werehorse. And there’s nothing that makes a horse more nervous than blood. Miri eventually opens the door
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    Mark is a depressed bartender who moonlights as an assassin. He takes a job from the wrong people and ends up finding something that might make his life worth living, if he can hold on to it.
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    Chapter 1. I come awake slowly. For awhile I just lay in my bed, staring at the wall. It's nearly 7.30 in the evening, and I need to get up and go to work. I do eventually, although I end up being late and pissing my boss off. I work in a club, and I spend the whole night serving preposterously drunk kids delicious beverages with ridiculous names. I get home as the sun is rising, and I'm too depressed to bother staying up at all. I go to sleep hoping that when I wake my other job will provide m
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    My favourite would have to be Emmett Honeycutt, from US Queer as Folk.
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    I like to have music that I can sing along to...sometimes though I'll get so focused on what I'm writing that I don't actually hear anything around me.
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    lol this is hilarious:)
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    That's amazing. I would probably never use it, but it still boggles my mind that this kind of thing exists these days.
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    So...I want to know who rescued Puck, or did he do it himself? How did he get on to the planet? What's up with his skin changing colour? Will Bobby be ok? Will Valdorn, Taloric and Kismet become a trio? Are the Hanovers human? I'm sure there are a bunch of other things that need to be resolved as well, but these are the main questions I was left with when I finished the story.
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    I love Glory and his shenanigans. I also really enjoy the way you've written this story, how the story is told through Glory's thought processes, which are quite often distracted and interrupted, or just not coherent. The lack of description about what's going on makes for really good imagining Do you have any idea of when you'll release Aurix?
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    This was a great story, had me laughing out loud at some points:)
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