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Hmm Dale doesn't know what Bay left behind?? Not sure it's a good thing to have him go back in the closet. Will have to wait and see what happens. Zoltan sounds interesting hehe.

I think I could get to like the way Jackie thinks just glad she isn't my sister lol. Nice opening chapter looking forward to more.

I didn't think there could have been a more heartbreaking chapter left to tell, but you proved me wrong. I don't think I would want to be in there shoes. David and Jeremy have loved each other and been together for so long. While Jeremy had come to accept that David had died and was slowly learning to move on, while David knew he was still alive but dying watched his one and only love starting to move past him.. Then for Jeremy to realize David was still alive. I understand the reasoning behind David telling Jeremy and Sammy but my god the pain for all three. It won't be any better for Brad either. This story has run the gamut and pulled on heartstrings, guess it's not done yet huh? Btw if they can cure Downs Syndrome and Aids even Parkinsons why can't they cure the disease David has?

Creepy, I would have said poor Mason but by using a mirror enchantment he only got a version of what he had planned on doing to Julius. not sure what to think about that.

Whoa nice father, so I'm guessing even at five years old Bay isn't allowed any happy times. Sheesh really move a kid to a new school in kindergarten cause of a comment from his sister who wanted to cause a raucous. Bleh

I am so looking forward to reading the rest of this story. Just from this chapter alone it proves tl be a funny and very insightful story. Looking forward to the rest of the story hehe.

Really! I've read cliffhanger but that is more like a sheer drop with no ground in site. You are so mean. But it really was a good chapter brought up a lot of good points. And as much as I hated to admit it but they were getting a bit complacent with only being worried about whether it would only be Noah getting custody. All I can say it better be good news at the end of this trial after making us wait.

Kiorl is such a contradiction. He can be such a hard ass demon that no one wants to mess with as he showed with the three humans last chapter. Then you see the soft side like with Prince Nassau in this chapter and even with Jahke. He seems to be torn between wanting to be a loner and desperately wanting someone of his own who cares for him. I hope he eventually figures out what he wants. There is someone to suit everyone,you just have to find him.

What a beautiful story. I'm sorry it's done but you intimated a second story coming soon so I look forward to that. It's funny really but I noticed with story being Gay wasn't that complicated but rather the age difference was. hen you love someone it shouldn't really matter what sex, race, religion or age has to do with it. You don't really have a choice of who you love, but the choice comes when you find that person that you, over and cant do without how you handle it. In this case the guys stuck with it yeah there's 20 or so years between then but they made it work for them. They hit a rough patch where it was iffy but it's amazing what a little communication can do. I really liked this story and I hope to be able to visit with them again to see how they are doing.

Hmmm wonder what is so unique about him that everyone wants to touch or get close to him. If Chance has a girlfriend why is he seeing with in another guys dorm. Looks like things might just be heating up at the Celestial Academy.

Hmmm remind me not to be near Kiorl when he is bored. Could be a touch detrimental to my body lol.

Wow I was starting to think Klaus was unkillable lol. But leave it to Carlos. That snapshot of Mira with that pure white kitten would have been beautiful to see. You weave a story of darkness, death and desolation then up pops scenario of light and goodness to give us a breath of fresh air so that we can continue onto the path come what may.looking forward to Shay busting Hartley's ass and beating them all.

Wow what a sad chapter. By the end of this story I think Shay will feel everyone of his 214 years. The maturity it took for him to be the one to pull the trigger to save Konstantin some heartache. This chapter more than any other shows just how strong that Shay is..which is almost as sad as Lily dying. I guess it just goes to show that Shay might have fell asleep a mature 14 year old but woke up and has grown into a strong young man. Goodnight sweet Lily.

Things were going to smoothly you knew there was going to be a blow up somewhere. Might have been better in a less public place. I still think michael isn't as straight as he portrays you know that saying he doth protest too much lol. He didn't care that much that Asher was Gay but flipped when he thought he would be thought gay by association.. Nice to see he hasn't lost his stupid side of his personality lol.

Perfect ending to a beautiful story. River is a cutie has so many traits of both dad's its hard to beleive he is adopted and not biological.

Alan is about what I thought of him. A little mixed up, bit of a bully. But he still has a heart and a soft side. Matt calls himself a hypocrite but I don't think so he has his standards and even with the girls he's upfront right at the start. The two of then Alan and Matt will prolly be good for each other, at least until they. Other get their heads screwed on right lol.

I almost feel sorry for Kiorl. He seems to be used more than needed. He has a softer side that the few other glimpses of him we had seen before didn't show.

And lot of information in this chapter about the who's who of the academy. But I do wonder if his head was pounding because of information overload or sensory overload cause of too much constant chattering hehe. And finally to Chance, what is keeping him coming back must be a reason........

You are so good at just leaking the information out just a bit at a time. And cliffhanger hours excellent at them. This one hinges all on a.........button.

Immortal huh? He wont age at 14. At least Mira won't age either hehe. I feel sorry for Mr. Miles Hartley.........NOT!! Great chapter awesome story.

Thank you,

why???? I'm sure you have a good reason but for now I will agree to disagree with you. It's your story, your muse I don't have to like it but I will read on. I'm really hoping Mira recouperative powers kick in and Shay is correct and he comeback to him.

Jeez for every little close time the boys get you amp it up with danger. Im surprised the Konstantin was so easily sucked into this, he always seemed a bit wary especially when it came to shay. Now how are they going to get out of this.

Who knew silverware could be so deadly. Now how are they going to get away and where is Konstantin??

That was a chapter and a half with everything that was included in it. I like the relationship that is growing between the boys. Mira us talking more and is actually laughing now. Konstantin is surprising me with his outlook and acceptance of everything gets gas been told. I pity those men with the rifles if they try to get between Shay and Mira, hopefully Konstantin comes back to help.