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As if Nick didn't have enough to deal with now he has to deal with a rape by Craig. Zoe needs to know and pitch the creep out.

Would never have guessed Maxie was such a romantic, think it is throwing Jesse a bit. Love the chapter, totally different than the previous ones. Nice to see Maxie running with Jesse seems to be paying off.

Wow cliffhanger on the first chapter. So sad that Haje had to lose his brother but a twin as well. Very emotional chapter, was in tears ever since the accident.looking forward to reading this story..very intriguing.

Hmmm I knew Sarah had a problem but I never would have thought it was greed. I like the new relationship with Steves parents its amazing how such a little tyke can be an icebreaker hehe. I feel bad for Tom hopefully no more repercussions come from the breakup

Pasha is between a rock and a hard place stay with Uzzy body and hope for a breakthrough or trust that Gabriel will help, and we all seen how trusting in Gabriel was soooo useful. Yes Pasha might have to go with Gabriel but I wouldn't trust him as far as I could throw him. Something is definitely fishy but it will be interesting to see what happens next.

Very nice chapter!! But will it really be that easy for them to come out, even with the mothers they didn't seem that worried about the kiss but the being out without anyone knowing. Sounds a bit like the calm before the storm. Something seems to have settled in Jesse's mind in that he may still see Maxie dead but he is now swing the true face of his rapist. Can't wait for next chapter.

Everyone got a bit of a switch up in this chapter, a lot of eyes opened. I'm a little surprised at Alan not so much what he said cause boys/enemies anything goes, but the fact that he really didn't realize what line he crossed even after everyone pointed it out. Yeah he is hurting but only vicious bullies go that far, never really got that. I've from Alan he was more a follower than anything else. But I guess when you see something you love drifting away you will grab or do anything to prevent it. We will have to see what happens next Dave still has to deal with his father Alan might agree to disagree and stay in the background but I don't think the same goes for his father. Wonder what common denominator the two fathers had that turned them and there families into bitter enemies?

I like Blake's final thought " at least Ethan will make his life interesting". Yes his brother and Peter were accepted as a couple but it wasn't exactly an easy battle either. What's a walk across campus. Fight at least they are waiting til tomorrow to carry the signs right lol.

Looking back at the previous chapters and then this chapter I understand why he did what he did. I also like the way the last paragraph of this chapter seems to separate his previous life and his run into the hotel tonight with a new life that started from this moment. It shows some maturity actually admitting that he will do stuff for three reasons, 1) he doesn't know any better, naively. 2) he was proud of the decision he made and wouldn't change them if he could 3) with 20/20 hindsight wished he could have made better decisions but in the end once done was no going back. I think it might be a rollercoaster ride but am looking forward to see what his new life will be like.

Well I think the surprise went a bit flat. Nick prolly was right in one way his mum might of been thinking of his birthday, but crap what a god awful present to give a kid. Craig was a surprise guess he may not be the prick he acted like before but the jury is still in debate about it lol. Dave was definitely a stand up guy while nick was still at his aunts as well as when he got home. Just hope he really does realize the importance of those three little words he said after the fallout of the birthday is done and past. But again we will see. Great chapter sad, shocking but very warm at the end of it.

Surprisingly enough considering how many decades it has been since my grammar lessons in school I followed and remembered all the rules, til of course you hit the last paragraph. And for some odd reason Canadian schools just don't deal with the Welsh language, french, Spanish yes welsh no lol. But even if I hadn't remembered my English lessons the way you explained it was clear and concise and easily understood.

I really hope those two get help for Jesse, they won't be able to get Jesse thru without help. I hope Maxie's grandmother can help smooth this over. Now that the rape is out in full between the two of them, being blocked from seeing each other will stamp out any progress at all Jesse has made

And lot happening in that chapter. Adrian showing up, possibility of Josh being able to see Shane, and finally Alexi's stagefright rearing its ugly head. Then the reminder that summer will come to an end. Three weeks to sort so much out hopefully it's enough time. I hope summer never ends.

That dinner sounded delicious. Everything seems so quite why do I feel like another shakeup is about to happen?

Do think it's ironic that the "playboy" is the one that doesn't want to go past kisses at the moment. Understand more after he explains to Nick. Sorta sucks for nick but prolly work out. As long as Dave stays committed to Nick.

Omg its so sad how much both guys will lose simply because Gavin's parents were to scared to take a chance. Yes I can see there point according to the literature there mistake was allowing the testing in the first place. This way sure there was a big chance of complications or even death by donating a kidney but there was still was a larger chance that Having would still have lived thru kt and they would have there son alive now. This way all they got was a son that basically committed suicide to help his friend. It's a pity that his parents didn't know there son all that well.

I'm glad the time with his mum wasn't to hard on Nick. He has accepted the way it is with his mum but I noticed that he hasn't really forgave her yet. Slowly getting a bit more of a peek into Dave's family life, not really all that great. Great so far..

I feel bad for Mel glad that there wasn't a bit of a blow up when Nick realized where he knew her from but still fell bad for her since she loves Nick. I don't know if I would go as far as Dave and say Nick is a flaming Gay lol. Great story so far.

Nice peek into Michael and some background on Asher. I like the way you are giving us just tease into what the hidden aspects of the guys are. Makes you just want to read on and see what else you discover. The conversation with a protective Ziggy was funny.

So what us Nick going to feel like when be finds out that his best friend online is Daves cousin. Something tells me that won't go over well. Alan might end up being a problem since he might also have a thing for Dave.

Good chapter only thing I'm confused about is I thought Jesse and his mum were coming to dinner Saturday night but when Maxie and grandmother were talking she said he was coming that night for supper. Unless they go to school on Saturday or they are coming two nights in a row I am a bit confused. Really enjoying this story has a lot of little twist and turns keeps you guessing what is going to happen.

Oh that was so not nice. Why would you kill off a mate after only a couple of days of finding each other, and to top it off leave a mate behind that can't even die. That is truly horrific. I really enjoyed the story up til the last chapter

LOL sorry for lack of reviews but have been enjoying the story. I know you prolly meant the story to be horrific and gory but I've been but ive actually found it very funny. I love part in the elevator though I am confused how ark could cum in his pants while viktor is a fully ducking him. But semantics aside I love the whole kill the guys then have earthy sex in the elevator. But I think the best is when mark whines when he blows his car up. Awesome!!

So if I read right the parents knew he tried suicide by not why. That the other ly person who knows about the rape is him the rapist and now Maxie. That's a heavy load for one boy to carry hopefully Maxie can help jess talk and comes to terms with it. He's already made a headstart by getting Jes to admit it out loud. Great story I like the way that you have the boys feeling their way thru a friendship. I really like the grandmother.

Great chapter. I'm happy that Brad and Jaime kept a friendly relationship after the divorce. Monday morning show and tell should be interesting hehe.