Daithi
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Beautiful story. Sorry to see it ended. Look forward to your next story
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Really he keeps count. Lmao
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Good chapter, still not enamored of Messenger but I'm sure be will grow on me. Hehe
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Jesse might have bad memories or whatever but he is a jerk. Maxie never deserved anything from that Jesse dished out.
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Noooooooooo there are no more chapters and everything is finally falling into place. Please tell me that you will be adding chapters soon. You have so many irons in the fire I want to see what happens.
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Slowly things are unraveling and everything is slotting into place
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Kai has enough love in that room that if love were drugs he would be so high gear wouldn't need anesthesia. I loved the bounce out of bed wight into Alex's lap. The snow is just the icing on the cake for Kai but I hope it doesn't cause problems for Alex's mom and dad. Next chapter please!!!
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I definitely don't want to be Riley bet he thinks twice about disobeying Coach huh? Bit of a cliffhanger can't wait to read the next next chapter.
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Ugh I don't know if I like Vonlan or not. He is working for Monarch which ucnt good, he's mean as a rattlesnake but can be soft at times. He loves Kandric and can be easy on Conth . With the. It's and peices Conth is finding you get an idea why he is the way he is. Grrrr don't know which way to go lol.
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LOL keeps me on my toes figuring out who is good and who is evil. Then you have the good that are disguised as evil. Talk about layer writer,it's awesome, over this story!!!!!
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Haha poor Jesse, at least he is making friends. Great story so far!
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He may be young and he may be small but get is quite deadly is he not? Great chapter
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Great story,. Considering that one is highly guild trained while the other isn't both Aster and Kandric seem to think a lot alike. Interesting to see what else is ahead for the two boys.
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Great story and the perfect ending he's it was no wedding bell ending but it also was your typically twenty something story. I really enjoyed the story.
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Wow David is going to have to come clean and soon right now his relationship might be salvageable but not for much longer. And personally I really don't get how Rick and David really figured they could do this for three months. I noticed there hasn't been an update recently I hope you are going to continue the story soon. I'm really enjoying it.
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Chapter 19 – Can’t You Do Anything Right?
Daithi commented on EmDee's story chapter in Chapter 19 – Can’t You Do Anything Right?
Wow. Awkward. What I want to know is how no one else can tell David is Dave. Makeup and clothes can not make that much of a difference. Um Tyler is pretty much staring at the full package and a little bit of makeup shouldn't make a difference. The voice us the same afterall as well as the personality. My wonder is what's up with Dean is it the fact that Tyler limes David instead of humor is he really that shallow that David deserves to be fired over clothes. -
Chapter 02 – It’s Like a Zoo in Here
Daithi commented on EmDee's story chapter in Chapter 02 – It’s Like a Zoo in Here
Okay that was hilarious and she has to be bad if a four year old picked up on it. That and the fact that she never paused the whole time they talked about her. -
Hehe happenstance or what. I guess first impressions aren't always the best and Jesse might be gorgeous but rude as he'll. Should be interesting to see how this mix of oil and water goes...great chapter
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Daywalkers huh? I'm starting to get hooked hehe. Can't wait to see next chapter.
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Zai is growing on me I'm hoping Tobias actually chosen to stay with him now. The Prince isn't too bad either I like the fact that he gave Tobias a choice of anything he wanted. I really hope he stays with Zai...yeah I know quite a turn around from the first chapter hehe. Can't wait to see what happens that causes Tobias to use the feather.
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Truthfully not sure what to think of Michael. yes he obviously has a drinking problem since the first few chapters had him drunk as a skunk and rude to boot, but when told to can the drinking at dinner he agreed with no arguments. He's oblivious to all the tells of Asher being Gay and he is actually got a nice personality when sober. All I'm feeling very sitting concerning Michael at the moment. Will have to see what happens in the next few chapters. But I do appreciate the was you are giving us insights into both guys characters.
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Interesting first chapter. Looking forward to see what happens next.
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Toby seems to have a strong mind, even if he does throw spoons at other demons. Cause truthfully if I went thru what he did the last two days, and then wake up in he'll and decide to cook a meal. I would be freaked out and drooling down my shirt lol. Enjoying this for all the arrogance and mean temperedness Zai does seem to care about Toby making sure he is safe and cared for.
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Jeez no wonder he doesn't date with Amy and Alex no guy stands a chance. Hopefully Ryan has a good sense of humour and is willing to take a lot of guff to keep Zach lol.
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I don't think either Tobias or Zai know what they want. Wonder what the next chapter will bring
