Daithi
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The boys are still busy as ever, at least it just with school work so far. But I imagine that will all change soon.
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Very descriptive without tonnes of words. In just that little bit you gave such a clear picture of the world Mark now lives in. No cell phones but they have landlines.....But omg almost no coffee that's it shoot me dead now. I loved the gargoyle. Only problem I see with story us...there isn't enough..It was just a taste, a teaser I want more please!!
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Very smooth tie up for all the summer happenings so that things can cleanly lead into the school year. I love how Harry is getting his recent years on people without using magic. Interesting too how everything just seems go for,is together. For example an impromptu vacation to the beach in France leads to meeting his cousins fiancee family. Looking forward to next chapter.
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I like the way you ended this it sorta wrapped everything up. nd I agree with Myr Ron does seem to be a bit of a stalker. Considering he us suppose to be Harry best friend he does seem to be a bit short on trust. If the next book continues from this point it should be just as attention grabbing as this one was.
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I agree with Joann that was hot a bit different than what I have read of yours before but still hot. I will even forgive it being a twilight fanfiction hehe looking forward to next part.
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Too only have one death from such a small group against so many was truly a great features. I'm sorry Neville died but he died believing in what he was doing. He died a hero and he saved lives. This night cost more than one death it also was the death of any chance of Harry having a youth, as was very apparent to Ron. I'm sorry Hermoine lost Neville but hopefully Ron man's up and will be there for her when she is ready.
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Poor Harry so much is changing, and most of it hidden so that not everyone understands. Albus was right in a way again the start of the story, at 16 he is to young to be an adult. Harry can and will handle it, sad part is he shouldn't have to. And neither should Draco.
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Oops guess that wasn't a good. Things but it was funny as all get out hehe.
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I have to admit I have never read the books but have seen a few of the movies so I know of the characters. So im not completely lost lol. So far it been interesting.
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I like the first chapter, gives you a bit into each of the characters. There were some spelling errors and missing spaces between words but other than that it was a good read. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Yeah. This isn't going to go well. December is bouncing cause he got a date and the "date" meanwhile is doing an ex. Yeah I'm sure they will work it out but sparks if not a full firestorm is gonna rage first. Next chapter should be interesting.
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Oh boy hmmm three boys and Brice is in the middle. After finding out what happened with Kevin at his old school Brice must be going nuts knowing he has feeling for two different guys at the same time. I agree with Rebel sparks are going to fly til they work things out. Will have to wait and see what happens.
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Sarah should be shot, what the heck screwed her thinking putting all the on a lttleboys shoulders. I liked the graveyard scene it was so believable with Steves input of him telling Zach he would be his according angel that was perfect. Dick is sorta being a sick but I can sorta see the reasoning this weekend is going to be uncomfortable for everyone. But I think the icebreaker will be Zach.......i hope. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how Stevens mom handles everything.
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Haha for some reason couldn't access this chapter all I seen was the complete. Devon has sure changed but it some just the packaging he still seems the same underneath just a bit lost. I think the ranch us going to bring everything back into perspective again for him. I'm so glad there is another book cause I'm so not ready to be done with these boys yet. Zak,so work is not complete now he has two matchmaking job in the works hehe.
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I think Mann has the right idea. If it was one person down on him then yeah, but everyone one at once seems a little too much. Add in recurring headaches, and obviously something isn't quite right. Will be interesting to see what the next chapter brings.
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How can the story be done. They are still in the middle if stuff lol. Devon hadn't showed up, the trouble the required the extra security hasn't really cleared up. Jesse and Dylan story hasn't really finished. You can't stop now....unless there is another book. It can't be complete!!!
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LOL Mr. Henry seems like a smart gentleman why he keeps Reggie is anyone's guess. Good chapter gives a bit more insight into Blake a bit.....maybe.
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I remember watching all her movies and watched her in the Mickey Mouse Club. I also remember when she announced she had Ms and was the face for the disease long before it was fashionable for actors/actresses to do so. She always kept the cheery girl next door aura even past her youth. She will be missed.
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Somehow i think west is heading for a fall. Subterfuge never works out in the long run
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Funny story. Great ending but Adam should have made Michael wait a night. I'm sure dessert. Would have been even more awesome after a nights delay.
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k MMaybe that is better than death But really Scott. Bleh
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Sucks that the Boys will be separated but omg!!! Awesome points for the princesses death that was perfect. I guess you Can come out from under the bed now. but no more killing cute guys off ya hear me!!!
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Please tell me scott isn't going to embarrassing him again wasn't once enough. Kinda cheeky have a ghost become a green eyed monster. Cool
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Our are so evil KC. I gotta admit I like it. Just make sure the police beleive the evidence before youhave Princess do anymore pyscho killing. story so far is great!!
