Daithi
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Um is it just me or does this guy have a problem keeping his feet on the ground. I like the fact that this story is so unpredictable, I never sure what is going to happen. Btw I love the opening sentence " mummified in confusion". Awesome!!
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So if the abuse didn't kill him or all that running with broken ribs and bleeding didn't do it then being wrapped in a strangers arms and falling off a high rise oughta did it eh? Good story
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This is a good story, I want to see how this ends. Can Brody bring Zack out so that he can get help. Please continue with the chapters I can't wait to see how it all works out.
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Good story, but I have to admit it was a weird ending. Yes it was in the chat style similar to the start but seemed different not having more us there and everything not really finished. But it was still a very good story
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Two things 1) perfect ending to the story, I am glad it didn't change 2) you are an awesome writer but more chapters and more stories hehe. I read you stories, they suckered me write in then boom they are all done. I can't wait for the next story!!!
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Oops someone has perfect timing hehe
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Oh this is going go be fun!! Something tells me I'm going to have sore ribs from all the laughing lol
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More please. Love the story can't wait for the next chapter
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You are an awesome writer, one chapter I went from tears and rolling on the floor with laughter over the suit shopping, to tears of pain and sorrow. Such a short chapter but soon much emotion.
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Poor kid five against one hehe, he didn't stand a chance!!
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Hahaha awesome chapter
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Ooo nice ending to the chapter!!
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Mmm make up sex, isn't that what fights are for. Love the story, going to be up all night reading again hehe
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Love the story..... But way to short. Part ll is going to be hilarious is part l is anything to go by.
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Love the humor in this story can't put it down.
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Awesome....didn't think I would say this but I feel just a little bit sorry for David. True he deserves the treatment from the kids at school but no one deserves that kind of treatment from your father. On that note somebody really needs to take Dr. Mcgowen down a peg or two as well as that teacher .
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i loved it, I knew there had to be another person in tylers death and everytime I thought I figured it out you would point out fact how it couldn't be that person. I can't wait til you bring out the rest of the story to find out who it was.
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Tension and suspended can't wait to see what happens next
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Thank you for a beautiful story, though I do admit to being sorry it has finished. I was sorry to see the end appear and can't wait for the sequel. I admit would have liked to have seen more action at the end but after thinking about it and reviewing the previous chapters this story ended exactly as it needed to. Excellent story will be impatiently waiting for a follow up
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Wow... The preceding chapters hinted that Dalen had something up his sleeve but this went even beyond what I thought would happen. It is a sad thing going to know that there are no Heralds left in Haven but the fact that everyone got out safe is a much better outcome. I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters.
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I'm really not surprised to hear about Dalen's mother. I am looking forward to seeing in the following chapters how Dalen proceeds to uncover the plot, I think Dalen's is truly going to need Lackley beside him to be able to withstand everything he is going to have to face. Something tells me a Companion isn't far away in Prince Dalen's 's future either. Can't wait for the next chapter
