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Confounded: Part I - 23. Chapter 23

CHAPTER 23 --==Taylan's POV==--

Later that evening, Kit came...well, ‘home', really, and he was completely wild. It was funny, actually, because we hadn't expected him, today. It wasn't ‘his' weekend, yet.

Mitchell and I were eating, quite casually dressed, as we'd spent a, shall we say, very satisfying afternoon in bed. I wore a pair of shorts, commando style, and Mitchell wore a velvet pair of lounge pants, also having foregone underwear. At least I wore a t-shirt, be it tucked up at the moment, while Mitchell was bare from the waist up; and we were having a fun time with dessert. Oops! Custard dripped down my left nipple and he licked it off, barely, when we heard to service entrance door slam shut. Just in time I pulled my shirt down when Kit came barreling into the kitchen.

"Dad!"

Mitchell had just enough time to remove a smear underneath his ear, and set the bowl on the table; the next moment he, Kit and his chair flew over backwards when Kit grabbed him around the neck a bit too enthusiastically.

"Kit! What... Oh shit!"

Unwittingly I spilled, and sprayed, custard over the table, just as Sienna stepped into the kitchen.

"Kit! Behave yourself. Calm down!" she yelled, rather severely, but with a smirk.

He eyes traveled to Mitchell, on the floor, and her hand shot to her mouth as she looked away. OOPS! His pants had ridden down and his whole business was showing.

"It seems we had great timing," she laughed, when he quickly corrected the little mishap.

"Oh, just super," I said dryly, winking at her.

"Sorry. We just couldn't hold him any longer. When Mitch called, to tell him the good news, well; he'd have run all the way here if we hadn't stopped him."

"It's okay," I said, snickering, "that was to be expected, I guess."

She nodded, and watched while father and son rolled over the floor, a tangle of limbs.

"Well, they've finally got what they want, thanks to you," she smiled. "Are you sure? You have no idea what you're getting yourself into."
At that, two pair of eyes looked up at me, very happily, from the floor.

"Well...can you say no to that?" I nodded at the two. "I can't. But...are you sure?"

"Oh, absolutely. This is what they both want and I've had Kit with me for years; now it's Mitchell's turn."

She sent Mitchell a warm smile. He hadn't been able to keep his eyes dry during that romp on the floor. Or during our romp, for that matter.

That's the problem with these softly types; they always surprise you with that crap. The beauty of it, though, is that you pretty much know instantly what they feel and think. Which, at the moment, was about as happy as two snails in a mudslide.

"You'll have to start making arrangements real soon, then. New school, all his things have to be brought here. Subscriptions need to be changed, he needs a new dentist, doctor, the whole nine yards. Like I said; you have no idea what you're getting yourself into."

"Tay's going to quit his job, so he's got all the time in the world," it sounded from the floor.

"Heel. Lay down. Good boy," I growled, when he grinned up at me. "Hmm, this could actually work."
Sienna shook her head.

"You're nuts."

I winked at her; then I flew, rather inelegantly, from my chair because that boyfriend of mine pulled me off of it, adding me to the tangle of limbs. Then, when Kit dove on top of me with a war-cry, I began to seriously doubt that last statement of mine...

(Soon to be continued with *C*O*N*F*O*U*N*D*E*D* Part II, in which Taylan and Mitchell continue raising Kit in their own unique way, and where we'll explore Kit's (love) life.)

© 2005-Present Androgene.

The End. \o/
andr0gene 2005-Present; All Rights Reserved
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Eagerly looking forward to part 2. Totally enjoyed part one (wouldn't mind longer chapter :) - which would allow us a little more time with the guys.

 

Thanks for the story, so enjoyable and witty.

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AHHHHH Another great story; I simply love the way you write, and the sex scene... steammy ; )... well, I'll carry on reading this wonderfull story.....

Your biggest fan; Antonio from Chile.

PS: My boss is not mad at my anymore : )

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On 09/30/2011 05:03 AM, ANORDOFHALL said:
AHHHHH Another great story; I simply love the way you write, and the sex scene... steammy ; )... well, I'll carry on reading this wonderfull story.....

Your biggest fan; Antonio from Chile.

PS: My boss is not mad at my anymore : )

Phew, that's a relief; for a minute there, I thought I'd have to stop writing. ;p

 

Glad you enjoy the drivel I write.

 

A.

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Love the story..... But way to short. Part ll is going to be hilarious is part l is anything to go by. :2thumbs:

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That was great! Very enjoyable! I liked the quick read even though I normally enjoy getting into something longer and more meaty (excuse the pun!). It took a while to get to the meaty bits - 18 chapters of the 23! Wow! But must say I was way ready for it by then - very worked up! Thanks for the entertaining read. It was also teary! Just like Mitch! Hell! But you made all the characters so likeable. Really nice! Thanks.

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All in, it was an amusing romp, Andr0gene. Could use more work, as you admitted, and something to keep in mind: I and probably others read on an iPad in the Safari browser which, on websites that allow dynamic content, let's me read as if on a Kindle. I can adjust text size for poor, tired eyes but It negates use of colored text such as that used in the story to differentiate the back and forth between the two main characters. Anyway, it is something to think about if you decide to work on this again or use the affect in another story.

 

After the above remarks, make no mistake, I did enjoy reading your story. Cheers!

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No matter how many times I read this story I'm always smiling happily at the end, knowing that all three guys got what they deserved and longed for. Taylan will be good for both Gilmore men, and I think he'll never regret letting Mitchell woo him.

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I absolutely love your style of writing. It pulls me in. When you can actually see the characters in your head then you know that the author is a damn great writer.

Thank you and please keep on writing.

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A really enjoyable light-hearted read. Thank you very much! The tone was just right throughout the story :wub:

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On 11/18/2015 07:38 PM, Graeme said:

A really enjoyable light-hearted read. Thank you very much! The tone was just right throughout the story :wub:

Thank you. :D

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I'm looking forward to part 2, as other readers stated this was a fun romp.  I can't help but hope that the relationship gets more even.

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