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Chapter 6 - There's Nothing Wrong With Us
Stephen ODonohue commented on kuragari129's story chapter in Chapter 6 - There's Nothing Wrong With Us
Hi Kuragari Good read but couldn't read the font and so had to go to Nifty (which has it's own problems). Much better in normal printed font. Stephen -
Excellent as always Cole... however, would it be possible for you to mark these stories as a continuation. I keep finding these and read a ways in before I recognize the characters (yeah, it's true Cole... not all your readers are smart). Stephen
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Excellent... sadly I read 'Barbed Wire Heart' first (which I loved, but sadly there was no indication that it was a sequel, or a continuation for the characters). This made BWH somewhat more complex than necessary and destroyed some of the tension built into 'Button'. For future readers sake Matthew, maybe it would be a good idea to list the stories in order. Stephen
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Luc... that was absolutely bloody fantastic. I just had to read it in one sitting. I loved it (and I almost never read sci-fi). I will certainly read any other work you have written, starting as soon as I've finished this review. Thank you so much for the enjoyment Luc. Stephen P.S. I will try to remember to go back and 'like' the last 12 odd chapters as I had used up my daily allowance of 'likes' ( short chapters). Once again, thank you Luc.
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More please Valkyrie. Stephen
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This story gets better each time it I read it. Thank you Dom. Stephen.
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Second time I've read 'In The Fish Bowl'... as brilliant as the first read. Stephen
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As always Nephylim... excellent! Thank for the continuing enjoyment. I always look forward to your next story. Stephen.
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Ta Krista... thoroughly enjoyable, almost made me miss growing up in the country town I lived in as a kid... ALMOST. Stephen
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Good fun... very enjoyable read. Thank you Tristan. Stephen.
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Thank you Nephylim, I'd thought I had read all your work... but obviously I hadn't. Absolutely brilliant.
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Oooyyy James.... you bastard. I liked Toowoomba! Go blow up one of your own cities.
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Sweet
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Excellent Renee... thank you. Stephen.
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Ahhh, my apologies Krista. It was 'The Authors Haunt' and I confused chapter 'completed'... with 'complete'. I'm still hooked though (and I do blame you for that). Stephen.
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A great story Krista, but sadly a story 'in process'. I never read 'in process' stories ever since I was caught out by CJ and Circumnavigation... but I started reading this on Awesome Dude and it said it was 4 chapters and complete! Imagine my surprise at the end of chapter 4. I googled you and the story and found the continuation here on GA... and I was hooked. Please tell me Krista that you don't intend to write 1,000,000 words. It is such a good read, but I'm old and only have 20-30 years left. Stephen.
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Fun(I don't usually read short or flash fiction... I might have to rethink). Ta lots James, you left me smiling. Stephen
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Great story Andy. Thank you. Stephen
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Ta Sasha. A real pleasure to read a story that is uplifting from start to finish (I'm just about 'angst'd out ' from my recent reading). A great story to recharge on the positives of the lives in 'happy-ever-after-land'(re:Lisa in a previous post), before I return once again to reality. Stephen
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Thanks Carl... a lot of fun. Like Lisa, I was a bit perturbed about the lack of concern from Jeremy and his father and then very relieved when I found out Mr Tubbs was a cat (and then guilty that I was relieved that someone had killed a cat). All in all, I'm exhausted from all this emotion... I think I'll go and have a nice lie down! Stephen
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C'mon Dark... one line. 'The airline cancelled his flight... and he returned to Jays' arms'. One miserable line... you can do it. Stephen.
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The Fall of Rumpleberry
Stephen ODonohue commented on Revel's story chapter in The Fall of Rumpleberry
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This Time Will Be Different
Stephen ODonohue commented on Bardeara's story chapter in This Time Will Be Different
I always enjoy the anticipation of the twist you often put in your stories Bardeara. I love your work... but alas I think this was the last I had not read. More please! Stephen -
As always Bardeara... excellent. Stephen
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Bardeara, another moving and compelling story. You need to add 'tags' to your stories, so that more people can find and enjoy your work. You truely are a very good writer. I am enjoying reading your work immensely. Stephen
