This whole the promise of a great story. Already I am loving it. As in the story I read this show the power of your use of English which I dearly love. And I can't wait to see what happens, I have always loved Sci-Fi so I will wait no longer on I read!
They were Kung Fu dancing woot!
This was just a perfect wow chapter so very enjoyable! There is hope for Charlie and Brad, I can't wait to see where this may lead. Great description and dialogue in the fight scene can't have been easy to write! Hope those two Buggers enjoy spending time in Guido's cell with the 2000-pound boy popper! So much has happened I look forward to the next chapter!