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Albert1434

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  1. How true that!
  2. Albert1434

    Chapter 1

    I think this is a good start to this story! I am hoping that Michael and Charlie lives will improve I sure time will tell
  3. Albert1434

    Chapter 13

    This was a great and enjoyable chapter I am glad things are going with Sam as he learns about his own body!
  4. Albert1434

    Chapter 12

    This chapter was very hard to read so I will limit my comment! I enjoy your written as always
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    Chapter 11

    Wow what a piece of work Sam just love that kid. The holidays were just rock as is this chapter!
  6. We had two ROTTWEILER Brutus and Satan
  7. We had dog's
  8. True that
  9. And I would put up one over animal and that would be sheep total losers
  10. You don't see to many peacocks on a ranch
  11. There is only one thing dumber then chickens and that is a turkey!
  12. I loved eating them fitting revenge!
  13. My Dad did and you think chickens stink pigs are unbelievable!@
  14. I also cared for my mothers chicken coop I hated it gave me headaches from the dust!
  15. Well Gary gold was one reason but not the only one the bastard wanted revenge, for the two that Jubal and Lucas killed!
  16. This story is so damn beautifully written it takes my breath away! A very believable dialogue which makes this story come alive I just hope that Lucas will recover soon for Jubal's sake, it sure is taking a toll on his soul. He is doing everything he can for the man he loves, caring for everything that Lucas loves. I just don't understand why Reid needs to hear the story of the shoot out again, does he believe somehow isn't true? I just love this story in many way one of your best!
  17. Welcome to global warming fun huh!
  18. Albert1434

    Chapter 10

    What more perfect Christmas there has never been! I sure this is an echo of your Christmas celebration with your family. I am just in love with this chapter! There are many very wonderful chapters in the story so far but this one could be the best so far!
  19. Well today its very cold 21f/-6c☹️
  20. Albert1434

    Chapter 9

    This story just drives me mad for the perfection of it, so much perfect texture, and lovely description that I am very much enjoying! Your use of English in powerful ways just makes this a genuinely great story, makes for a amazing chapter. The building of the cabin was a delight. Thanks for sharing your hard work!
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