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Confidential conversations II
Suvitar commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confidential conversations II
I like how you are revealing more and more about Russ and Evan's past, slowly a bit by bit. Having such a great relationship, the twin bond, must have helped especially Russ while he was ill. But it must have made him miserable when Evan left for college, being left alone. Now it seems like they will be close again from now on. They clearly need each other in their life and luckily their boyfriends are very supportive and understanding. Lovely story so far -
Another great chapter Russ and Evan have such a wonderful relationship, and they feel comfortable sharing practically every aspect of their lives. They are very lucky to have that and even their boyfriends get along with each other.
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Confidential Conversations I
Suvitar commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Confidential Conversations I
Trying to catch up with the story I see I have few chapters to read. The twins are so funny and great together, looking forward reading what'll they do next and the boyfriends are good, too. -
As a reader and reviewer I'm always happy when an author responds to my comments. Sometimes "thank you" is enough and sometimes it's nice to have more than one sentence. It's a two-way street, if I leave a very short comment, an author won't leave a long respond. And I must confess that I stop leaving reviews if I notice that an author never responds to them. And I always check if there's a respond because I want to know what an author has said.
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That was an unexpected ending Threesomes aren't my thing, not even in stories, but I wish them all a happy life, together or not
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Sorry to say, but I wasn't entirely happy about this story . Nothing wrong with your writing or the story as such, but I always hate it when two different stories (or chapters) have the exact same scenes and the conversations are the same, word for word. I find it boring and annoying. There´s one more story to read and I do want to find out what happens next
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Should I Keep Doing Massive Reviews Of Stories And Movies On My Blog?
Suvitar replied to W_L's topic in The Lounge
Yes, please! I know I keep forgetting to check the blogs but I love reading reviews and getting ideas what to read next. -
I hate spiders Reece was lucky to have his knight there to kill it and they have another date
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Awwwww that was so sweet
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Lovely story Looking forward reading more and finding out what'll happen next
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Only werewolf story I've ever read is Sasha Distan's A Wolf and his man. I liked it.
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And there I was, thinking this was a beginning of a beautiful romance I'm sure they'll have a lovely friendship...and perhaps that turns into something else.... Seth needs a best friend, that's clear. He needs someone who can make him feel more comfortable about himself. Logan seems like a very nice friend to have.
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Perfect ending to a wonderful story I've really enjoyed it. Your writing is good and characters great And I really appreciate that you have read my reviews and responded to those, I've read them.
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Brilliant chapter and my heartbeat was almost back to normal. That didn't last long I really, really hope you didn't kill anyone off
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Everything went according to the plan. They were so lucky Simms is a sick person and deserves everything he's getting.
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First time that I wasn't happy to read about the band, I want to know Silas and his friends are ok. Silas isn't answering Brady's phone calls, and no one thought to save Ian's number from those first few calls or find it in their phones?
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This was a tough chapter to read and my heart is still beating much fast On to the next one
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Of course Silas wasn´t phoning the police, he knew what needed to be done and he was the guy to do it. Just hoping he won´t get hurt The letters he wrote were so good. Really enjoying this story
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I'm so glad I don't have to wait for a new chapter I have a bad feeling about this, too. Hopefully Brady and rest of the band get there in time.
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You are revealing Silas' past in small bits It's good to know more about what happened in the past two years, he really was lucky to survive it all. The scene at the church was scary. I bet they'll all have nightmares about the pastor and what's-her-name.
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They need to be careful. Don´t want to see anyone getting hurt, just Simms getting arrested for murder
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Happy and giggly Silas flirting with Brady That´s wonderful!
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Such a relief that Chelsea is ok and seems to be feeling better about everything. Probably not the best time to tell her that they suspect her father of killing someone Silas still feels the need to keep his private life private. Too bad he wasn´t happy about the song. The song is beautiful and Silas surely will like it and understand that it was written out of caring. No one was trying to exploit his life.
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Playing a detective in a possible rape and murder case can be very dangerous, but I trust Silas will be safe since he´s the main character and hopefully no one else gets hurt either. If Pastor Simms raped and murdered Daniel because he was gay, what did he do to to Chelsea when he found out she´s a lesbian. Scary thought I hope Chelsea will be fine, but at least now she´ll get professional help. Too bad Silas didn´t get a chance to phone Jack
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I was surprised that Emma turned up, but realised I shouldn´t have been. If anyone from the family wanted to know how Silas was, it´d be Emma. It´ll be nice for Emma to meet both her brothers. I love that band. They are very protective of Silas, even they only knew him for few weeks.
