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    Chapter 7

    Adam's good for Jason. He provides distraction and something else to do than what his parents want him to do. And Jason needs to be more independent and hopefully happier, too. And he needs someone who'll phone him. It was so sad in the previous chapter when it came clear that no-one but his parents would call him
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    Chapter 6

    Another great chapter I keep wondering, why does Jason care so much what his parents think of his haircut or about anything else in his life. His parents clearly don't like him or care about him, only care about how things look to others. Jason is a grown man, in his mid-20s and still living at home with his parents. He needs to change more than a haircut At least now he has a new haircut and new friends.
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    Chapter 5

    Poor Adam! No wonder he knew how Jason felt. Washing away the number, that wasn't nice of Jason but surely he has a photographic memory and he'll remember Adam's phone number forever or he'll just ask Adam's sister to tell it
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    Chapter 4

    Adam is so sweet, a bit pushy, but perhaps that's what Jason needs from a boyfriend. Someone who takes care of him, listens to him and supports him when he needs it. And he certainly could use few hugs and cuddles
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    Chapter 3

    Adam seems like a great guy and could be a good friend or something more I got an impression that Jason doesn't have friends, or at least they haven't been mentioned, and after what happened he needs a friend, especially since he doesn't get any support from his parents.
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    Chapter 2

    Not a loving, little family at all and no hugs to welcome Jason home No wonder he left or at least tried to leave, too bad that ended badly. He needs a therapist but someone who isn't influenced by his mother.
  7. Happy Birthday!
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    Chapter 1

    Very intriguing chapter. Seven weeks is a long time to be in a hospital and unconscious. Jason's mum seems very bossy and not really listening to what her son wants to do. It'll be interesting to find out why Jason left home and how he will welcomed back.
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    Prologue

    Interesting start and it sounded very painful. I prefer happy endings, so I hope there won't be a funeral at the end
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    Chapter 6

    Poor Dave, what a ghastly boyfriend he had but now he has Reece and they seem happy together Josh keeps getting better and better, really like him, too.
  11. I was reading on my phone and couldn't leave comments, so here's what I think of the story so far Nelson and Eric are so sweet together, hopefully that'll last Rob is a very supportive and protective brother Jasper is a great friend And both sets of parents are brilliant, and understanding and loving These short prompts of yours are fabulous to read
  12. Catching up with Nelson and Eric They are such a sweet and adorable couple I love the way you manage to say so much in short chapters. This was nice, Nelson and Eric had to face something very ugly but they have supportive friends and and of course Rob, the wonderful big brother
  13. Happy Birthday!
  14. I went to a gospel concert yesterday. Pekka Simojoki is one of the most productive and renowned Christian songwriters in Finland.
  15. At least they both found it funny
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    Chapter 1

    Such a sad story with a happy ending. It gives hope that there really are good people around, people who want to help and give security to someone who is scared and alone. Perhaps you'll write more about their life together one day
  17. Creepy and scary I'm with some others, not sure I'd want to know "what" Jason is
  18. Congratulations! That's great news
  19. Any excuse to travel to the UK I haven't seen Arrow yet, probably not really my sort of series but I look into it one day.
  20. John Barrowman rocks in everything he does I've flown three times to England to see him in a concert and every time it's been worth it
  21. Welcome to GA, Richard. I'm sure you'll find what you are looking for.
  22. I have bought some TV series, all BBC (one ITV) I think. Very British list Downton Abbey Call the Midwife Torchwood Jeeves and Wooster Sherlock Last Tango in Halifax Vicar of Dibley North & South Bleak House The Ice House Brideshead Revisited Murder most English Pride and Prejudice The Mrs Bradley Mysteries Wives and Daughters The Paradise Keeping Up Appearances
  23. Another wonderful chapter! You have created an amazing family. Mother who loves her children and only wants to see them happy and content with their lives. Twins who have a very special connection. Father who only cares about the appearances. Sister who loves her brothers and accepts them as they are. Evan and Russ have great boyfriends, who love, support and protect them. It'll be interesting to find out how the father copes with losing his entire family. Or will he see the error of his ways and beg for forgiveness. Probably not and he'll end up being miserable, bitter and lonely Looking forward reading more
  24. Happy Birthday!
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    Chapter 5

    Lovely chapter! The cousins are great and treat Reece and Dave well. But why on earth didn't any of the cousins speak up during all those family dinners when the elders treated Reece so badly? :/That probably would have ended into a family feud but still....Reece is worth it But at least now they are defending Reece.
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