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Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (III)
Suvitar commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (III)
They are so cute together and it's nice that they feel they can talk to each other about everything -
Great story! Plenty of excitement and scary things happening, but also love and romance
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So glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter
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So many things happening at the same time Hopefully there'll be a happy ending
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Very complicated situation Wonder who'll still be alive after everything is over? Or how do you define "over"
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One drunken night and few careless words, and Raphael lost his beloved twin brother It must have been hard to live with that. But why didn't he try to kill Vlad for it? Talin is very calm about dying. He needs to look for the antidote
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Irina Petrova aka Vlad is a truly horrible person Poor Talin
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What an evil plot you are weaving here
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More people will die before this is all over, if it's even possible to finish all this fighting and killing. And it seems like there are more bad guys than good guys
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Very intense chapter Can't be easy for Talin to live all that again and this time have Dimitri in danger.
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Such a sad chapter There was photo showing how Dimitri's father had shot someone....was that Gabriel?
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Whatever that Brotherhood is, it's scary and seems to be capable of doing horrible things. Too bad Dimitri is involved
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It's time for Dimitri to tell Talin the truth about what is going on in his life.....and I'd be interested to hear it too
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The Brotherhood and Vlad sound so scary and crazy I've been thinking, perhaps Dimitri is some kind of secret government agent. I hope he's not a common criminal
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Fabulous chapter and even more unanswered questions
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“I gotta brush my teeth.” The sentence made me giggle and even more when Talin came out of a shower Not sure what to think about Dimitri He seems nice but his business seems very dubious, I'd like him to be a good guy and not end up breaking Talin's heart with criminal things.
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Talin and Dimitri have been talking about each other to others but haven't had a proper conversation with each other before. Looking forward seeing how their relationship develops now that they are actually talking Great characters with some mysteries in their pasts. Very intriguing so far
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This is wonderful I've been waiting for you to finish the story, so I can start reading. After the first chapter I know that my plans for the weekend will probably change because I'll read and read
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Happy Birthday!
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Beautiful wedding and a perfect ending to this fabulous story It wasn't always easy to read but I enjoyed it.
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Eddie is so sweet looking after Wyatt. They will make a wonderful family
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That's settled then - Bryan loves Wyatt and Wyatt loves Bryan And they both want Eddie to live with them
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Loved the ending - Bryan is feeling better enough to play a matchmaker
