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  1. I´m worried what´ll Vince do if Matt says that he doesn´t want anything to do with him. I feel that the longer Vince stays alone in the woods the more desperate he´ll be and he might end up suicidal.
  2. I hate it when I run out of likes in a middle of a story and I do like this story Loved Shane, he´s a great friend to Matt. Loved Warren´s response to finding out his brother is gay. It was really great to bring Vince back to the story and let him tell how he´s doing.
  3. Poor Rhys and his reputation. The scene at the lawyers was hilarious. Shane is a lovely character, hopefully he´ll be able to help.
  4. Really intense chapter. Love the way you keep adding the tension, already biting my fingers here Just hope they´ll find Vince and everything will be fine again. I´m glad Vince´s parents don´t mind him being gay, perhaps the whole town is more tolerant than Vince thinks it is.
  5. Poor Vince! He must have felt terrible when Rhys told everyone he´s gay. I hope Vince is ok, probably hasn´t done anything to himself if he packed a bag to take with him. At least there´s a chance to get him back home safely. Wonderful story
  6. I burst out laughing at the last sentence, absolutely hilarious
  7. That was a dramatic elopement, hopefully the wedding will be a much calmer event.
  8. They are a great bunch of friends Some of your childhood friends stay as friends throughout the adult years and some disappear at some point. That can´t be helped. Sorry that was a bit
  9. It´s like reading a detective story....who did it? And I´m totally enjoying it
  10. Poor Matt! Even if he turns out to be straight, meeting all those girls must have been a scary experience and finding one of them in his tent
  11. All these characters have been there from the beginning but I like the way you are introducing them and giving more information about their lives, slowly and gradually, so that even I can keep up who´s who and what their families are like. They seem rather a complex bunch of people, and yet very likable people.
  12. This really is a brilliant story. Aunt Cynthia is a great character and I love how she told the younger people about the Tree and all that had happened before. Rhys´ dad has a strange way of telling his son that he loves him, but he did tell him. Wonderful chapter
  13. Great beginning, looks like a very interesting story
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    Chapter 10

    Lovely chapter I like how they are taking things slowly and not rushing into anything, and are giving Luke´s friends a chance to get used to them. Hopefully the party will be fun
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    Chapter 74

    Brilliant chapter Looks like George will have to enjoy staying at home for awhile but there seems to be quite a few people who are happy to keep him there.
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    Chapter 1

    Nice story and I´m so glad he went into the train and not under it.
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    Chapter 1

    That was such a sad story...starting my day in tears now
  18. There´s this bottle of lemon juice....last time I used it was to clean something and make it smell better, and that was some years ago. Must say I was surprised to see it should have been used before 2005, didn´t realise it was that old
  19. Ok. Thanks for the info. Perhaps he finishes it some day and re-posts it.
  20. I like these introductions if they can be called that. Anyway, I usually find something I haven´t found or read before. I thought I´ll check An English Teen, but couldn´t find it.
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    Confrontations

    Hopefully Parker leaves Josh alone after that and won´t bring all the bullies with him next time going after him. Great story so far
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    What It's Like

    Josh´s life seems even more sad through Jacob´s experiences at school. Can´t even start to imagine what´d it be like to live a life where everybody either ignores you or tries to hurt you.
  23. First day went well, even with the unexpected visit to the farm. Wonder how long they can keep it up. It was fun reading
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    Preparations

    They seem to have though everything. I suppose next chapter will show if they really have and if they get away with swapping places for a day. But at least they are having fun planning it all.
  25. I´m glad Josh decided to tell the truth about being gay to Jacob and I´m glad he still wanted to be Josh´s brother. Swapping lives can be very tempting when you´re 15 but it´ll probably go all wrong. I´m sure it´ll fun reading about it.
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