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    KSM

    donaldbirwin commented on JayT's story chapter in KSM

    I try hard not to judge those who decide to let their life end. It is not easy for us who remain to deal with such a self-centered decision. We so want to be a part of the decision, to have our say in the matter. I do know this that grief is a fickle companion. Sometimes, like the fog, it creeps in on little cat paws and can be almost comforting. At other times, it is like a hard punch to the gut, sucking the wind right out of you and knocking you to your knees. I know this too, it wouldn't hurt so much if we didn't care so much for the ones we love. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
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    By all means continue. You've introduced a good mix of main characters. Let us see what you do with them.
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    Mated

    donaldbirwin commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Mated

    I loved your story! You have created some great characters and then allowed them to develop and change across the chapters. Kudos for a job well done and wonderful, engrossing writing. I will miss Graham but will looking forward to your next efforts.
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    I am greatly enjoying your story. Robbie is an engaging character; I'm always anxiously awaiting your next chapter. This may seem a bit odd since I am 71 but my husband has a theory that everyone is 14 when they come out. Since I only came out in 2008 at age 62 that makes me only in my early 20s at this point! LOL I do enjoy your writing style and your development of characters.
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    Chapter 22

    donaldbirwin commented on KD_stories's story chapter in Chapter 22

    I really like your story. Ryder is a wonderfully complex character, tough and unassailable on the football field, fragile and vulnerable as an emerging gay teen. I am looking forward to the future chapters.
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    My Daniel

    donaldbirwin commented on R. Eric's story chapter in My Daniel

    My sincere condolences. Your stories speak to me and I feel as though as I must have known your Daniel through the characters in your stories. Thank you for sharing him with us. May your memories of lives well-shared sustain you in your grieving.
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