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Epilogue: Normal Families?
donaldbirwin commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Epilogue: Normal Families?
Thank you for developing such delightful characters! When I don't want a story to end, it is a sure sign to me that I have become invested in the people you have created. You have piqued my curiosity to the point that I find myself speculating about the future lives of Owain, Colin and their families. Please do consider a sequel in the future. Thank you for a great read!- 21 comments
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What a perfect ending to a beautifully told story!
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What a delightful opening chapter, ripe with so many possibilities. Looking forward to your telling of this story.
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I am a fan of your writing and this story did not disappoint. Brian's inner dialogue was wonderfully written. I also liked the pace of the plot development, The bracelet was a clever device and the ending was superb. Yes, I LIKED your story!!!
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Epilogue - Make Me a Beaumont
donaldbirwin commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Epilogue - Make Me a Beaumont
I am sad that we have come to this point in Greg and Nate's story. Like in all stories where I become invested in the characters, I want your story to continue for a long time. Yet, you chose a meaningful point to find closure. This story was challenging to me, parts were difficult to read, and the romantic in me kept saying, "No, no, no!" Thank you for writing such a compelling story with such complex characters. The poetry reference was exquisite, both in your choice and in your execution of its use in the title and across the story. I will be watching for your next story! -
The length is of no consequence for me. However, I'm dying a slow death of sadness. I'm so invested in these two characters that my heart is breaking for them. As a writer, you have done your job well! Is that last word, "Noah", a glimmer of hope for the next installment of their lives?
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Selfless love is a thing of beauty, as is your endearing story! Thanks for the great read. I'm not like any of your characters, yet I identified with each of them. Thank you!
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Well. I'm thoroughly hooked after just one chapter! But, I was primed from reading other stories of yours. I enjoy your writing and your ability to bring your characters to life. I hit "follow" before I started reading the chapter.
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Just as they had receded into memory you brought these wonderful characters back to life. Thank you! Thank you! What a delightful early Christmas present.
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Thank you for a wonderful story! I am so not ready to be done with this cast of characters. So, I am glad to hear that you are not either. I look forward to the future with anticipation!
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I have been enjoying your development of this story and these characters. It's been a good read. This chapter, however, was a great read! I don't care to imagine what ended up on the editing floor as you rewrote because the end result is wonderful. You nailed it with Jordan. The chapter, for me, is all about Jordan and he leaps off the page as real, vulnerable, and believable. Thank you for your extra effort; it was worth it. I'm looking forward to following their developing relationship.
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I agree with Obican--beautifully executed. I read the intro blurb and thought, "Well maybe yes, maybe no, we'll see." I'm hooked--intriguing, memorable characters, including the staff.
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Chapter 11 Missing Pieces
donaldbirwin commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11 Missing Pieces
I have so thoroughly enjoyed your story and the character that you developed in Drake. I have been so exasperated with Drake throughout much of the story, but I think that was your intention and it worked. That exasperation made the ending so much more delicious. It is always sad when a story that I like reading comes to an end but that sadness is balanced with an ending that leaves me happy and content with where the characters are with their lives. Thank you for sharing your talent for story-telling with us your readers! -
Thank you! I was seriously going through withdrawal--checking frequently to see if a new chapter was posted. Thanks to you, I'm fully invested in these characters and their lives.
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I love it when an author draws me in and I become invested in the characters. Thanks for a great read! I look forward to reading more of your writing.
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Caregiving is a demanding and tiring experience, both physically and mentally. Take care of yourself so that you can take care of your mother. You may find that taking time to write, even for a short time each day, will help you deal with the stress of your situation. Know in your heart that you have the support of your readers as you work through this difficult time.
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Thank you so much for this story. I have greatly enjoyed these characters. I believe that it is a mark of a successful writer that even when the reader doesn't identify with a character, the reader still develops real empathy for the person portrayed. You certainly achieved that outcome for me with the characters in Paper Walls. I will miss them but I will eagerly await your next story!
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What a delightful story--well-conceived, well paced, well written. Thank you for giving the joy of reading your story!
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I am very content with "happily ever after," especially for these two delightful characters! I eagerly looked forward to each new chapter/adventure in part simply because there was so little angst. Thanks for a wonderful story. I will look forward to your next endeavor.
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I'm adding my kudos for a wonderful ending. I previously had fell in love with each of these characters and their engaging stories. This story was a great way to have them meet and interact. However, the part I liked best is this closing where you captured that moment that so many have experienced where one becomes aware that you are at a transition point where you can't and won't be able to go "home" again and where the pathway to the future that you have been so eagerly pursuing seems less alluring than the safety of what you have in that moment. Your words portrayed that bittersweet moment so well. Thank you!
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I wasn't prepared for the jolt that I felt when I read your note that the next chapter is the final chapter. You have developed two wonderful characters in Jayden and Troy. I feel that they have so much story left to tell. Perhaps you are considering a sequel??? A romantic can hope, can't he?
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Will there be a continuation of this wonderful series featuring Elliot and Ian. Just asking for a hopeful friend!!!
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Your words and pacing in this chapter were wonderful! Life is messy and I love the way you have captured that idea with these two delightful characters and their love story. I'm sure my eyes must light up (I know my insides do) when I see that you've posted another chapter.
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I am greatly enjoying your story. My friends would say that I was never lacking in self-confidence, but I certainly recognize the inner dialogue going on in Geoff's mind. I think that you have his inner voice down perfectly. And, wouldn't we all like to be Tony!
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Thank you! I greatly enjoyed your story. I will miss my Reggie fix. I admire your wonderful grasp of dialogue within the context of journaling. It was a delightful read!
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