Miles Long
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What the hell has Ron gone and done now? Hermione will kill him if anything happens to her son. Good cliff hanger, thanks.
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Lovely vignette with Arthur which counters the gruesome business with the Worm. Looking forward to the immediate gratification of the next chapter, thanks
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I'm so unsure who to trust that I can't even be sure of Harry any more . My continued thanks for your work.
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Draco's out of town at the same time Voldemort gets a mysterious visitor...hmmm...excellent job keeping us wondering, thanks.
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Diego and Luka will make a nice pair. My fingers are crossed for Jesse. Thanks for another update on the guys.
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Seems like the British wizarding community is quick to put all their eggs in Harry's basket. It concerns me that Draco was so cavalier about the spell...I want to believe but you keep leaving little hints. However it works out its a great twist, thanks.
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Elaborate wedding peppered with the humorous twist of housing Voldemort in the dungeon. Nice job, thanks.
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Again Ron betrays Harry and lives up to the nickname Draco gave him. Enthralling, thanks.
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What's this now? A truce? Hmmm...really unique twist on the story... . Another fascinating chapter, thanks.
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Convenient and sweet solution to finding mothers for the Malfotter children. Poor Ron, disowned and a lousy lay...thanks again.
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The use of the news to further the story is brilliant. Thank as always for the work.
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Ron has done it now, I don't see him ever getting back into Harry's inner circle. Thanks for the good work.
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Oliver Wood is up to no good and why is Ron so willing to believe the worst about Harry? Compelling story, thanks.
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I can definitely see the muggle world wanting to capitalize off the wizarding worlds advancements. The complexity of your universe is amazing, thanks.
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Sometimes fate throws us a twist to keep us on our toes, playing the part of fate tonight is dkstories . Thought provoking chapter, thanks.
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Their lives feel like mine with the crazy over commitments . Cute scene with Harry spying on Draco, thanks for the chapter.
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Seamless start to the second half of the HP alterverse. Shape and Lupin? Too funny. Thanks.
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Ron sneakiness is almost as disquieting as Draco's personal transformation. Only in Draco's case it is a welcome development versus a heart breaking one. Good chapter wrapping up the main lines but leaving us enough to want more, thanks.
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Albums being brought down by a muggle? The brutal irony offers little consolation. Superb twist, thanks.
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Harry needs more than a PA, he needs an entire office to manage the affairs in play . Nice work, thanks.
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Hermoine pregnant is a nice way to perpetuate Neville's legacy. Thanks for another fine chapter.
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Harry's become a very different character, it's a unique twist turning him into a snake. Thanks for the good work.
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Draco must be loving the political machinations behind this. As usual another excellent chapter, thanks.
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Neville's most definitely became the hero he longed to be, his family would be proud. Another thrilling chapter, thanks.
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So it was more manipulation on Ron's part than outright betrayal, but still would it kill Harry and Ron to have a rational conversation ? Okay enough armchair psychology, wonderful story, thanks.
