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Are We More Than Just Friends?
Miles Long commented on totallyy's story chapter in Are We More Than Just Friends?
That gut wrenching feeling when one realizes that euphoric feeling of connection is not reciprocated is captured perfectly in this piece. Excellent job, thanks. -
Lisa and Joel, ugh, you're only making things worse. Rhys Lagoon sounds like a nice place to visit. Looking forward to more, lucky for me there's no wait. Thanks.
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I think Shane may be just as taken with Trevor. Nice idea to have them work together. Fascinating detail, thanks for all the work.
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Really Joel and Lisa, Bridget buys Trevor's piece of crap car for six grand and it doesn't raise any kind of red flags with you at all, really? Give back your ascot Joel and turn in your purple dress Lisa your the worst detectives EVER! Thanks for keeping the story so interesting and focused.
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Beautiful or not, I'm with Trevor about the sharks or as Shane says shaahks. Nice break from all the crapstorm surrounding Trevor, thanks.
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Thanksgiving dinner, that's incredibly thoughtful of the Blakes to go to all the trouble. Lots of reminders of home and mom with all the food. Good thing he has Shane to share it with. Great job, thanks.
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The Great Australian Blight
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in The Great Australian Blight
Tenacious reporting, Trevor's luck seems to be now a dangerous mix of miraculously lucky and perilously unlucky and yet he still gets distracted by a nice backside of a cute boy. Thanks for the work. -
Kline is a determined little bugger isn't he? Many compliments to the writer and his team for their fine work.
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Clever plan, Trevor's a good problem solver. Kudos to the author.
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Lisa and Joel are so naïve and think way too highly of their instincts which to date are equally as bad as Trevor's gaydar. If they keep at it you should dress Lisa in a purple dress, give Joel an ascot and trade the Camero in for van with Mystery Machine painted on both sides. Thanks for the work.
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Trevor really is adorable with the walking into things while boy watching. Super good story, thanks.
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Shane's a good guy. Trev has found a real friend. Loving how the drama ebbs and flows, thanks as always.
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Shane's a little hot headed and a lot lonely, reminds me of our hero... . Really good story, thanks.
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There's only so much crap even a fictional character can take, so I'm not surprised Trev has finally broken down. Lesser characters wouldn't have even made it this far to even break down in tears. Excellent work, thanks.
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Stranger in a Strange Land
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in Stranger in a Strange Land
No doubt Bridget will soon find out about Trev's miraculous survival . Great job introducing the new characters, thanks. -
Trevor's safe but the drama isn't over yet, is it? Poor guy! Thanks for this elaborate and engrossing story.
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People, land, safety at last. I'm not sure how much more my nerves could take . Fantastic tale, thanks.
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One could get carpal tunnel from all the hand wringing this story inspires. It's completely worth it . Thanks for your work.
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If it's not one calamity it's another. Giant trees, massive storms and rogue waves, oh my. Thrilling story, thanks.
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Trevor is one brave kid. I'm crossing my fingers that his luck turns around. It's relieving to find that Gonzales is doubtful of the evidence mounting against Dirk and Jim. The work kicks ass, thanks.
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With the stakes as high as they are sometimes the riskiest course reaps the biggest rewards. Really wonderful detail. Thanks. PS I love the idea of the reception first, it reminds me of my own wedding.
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Crushing blow missing Reunion. I felt like crying. I really appreciate the intensity that makes the Jim, Dirk, Frank situation feel like comic relief. Excellent work, thanks.
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I love Frank, he provides a bit of tension relief to the nerve wracking ordeal Trevor is experiencing. The intrigue is clawing at me, thanks for the good work.
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It's agonizing to have such a solid foundation and methodology and be stymied by an incorrect input or assumption. Trevor may be clueless to a lot of things but he had a solid analytical mind and is clutch in a crisis. Thanks for the rich detail, the wonk in me is doing a happy dance.
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Trevor's ingenuity and will to survive is completely believable and a testament to the fine craft of the author. I whooped (quietly) with Trevor. Thank you for the top notch writing.
