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Cole Matthews

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  1. Those are excellent questions and you're right about making it an experiment. Jake has to do something, he knows that. I think he's the kind of guy who needs a plan of sorts. Thanks for your thoughts. Lots to come!
  2. That's absolutely right. Jake is recognizing his problem. This is only the beginning, and he is worried. Thanks for the insights. You're right on the nose!
  3. When people are having issues, they often feel alone. In fact, Jake's drinking was so bad, his world had shrank and now it's beginning to open up again. Your observations are spot-on. Thanks for the wonderful comments.
  4. Health issues, mental and physical, are the second biggest reason couples part. The first biggest reason is money. So, the fact Eddie was Jake's go-to guy is telling. Thanks for your story. These memories really inform understandings of events.
  5. You are right on all accounts. Panic attacks can build and they can even become a health issue. In Jake's case, he's worried about his sobriety and a little about his sanity. Yeah, there are friends and they will come into play along with more family. Thanks for the awesome comments.
  6. Jake has a circle of friends. Many times after a breakup, the friends gravitate towards one of the couple, especially when one of them is a bit of a mess. Jake has a support system, however, he hasn't been using it lately. That will become even more apparent. Thanks for some thoughtful remarks and insights.
  7. Thanks Gary! Yeah, panic attacks are debilitating and it's good to have some support during a time like that. Eddie still cares for Jake and vice versa. You'll get to know him better. Thanks for the insightful comments. I appreciate it.
  8. Day 6 No wonder I’m gay. God, sometimes I really hate women. Okay, not really. There are two women in my life right now who are being total bitches. They both managed to drive me so batty I almost slipped up tonight. It took all my will power not to walk into Gallivant’s, climb onto a bar stool, order a gin martini and tell Vic to keep them coming. I can almost taste the piney gin and the touch of dry vermouth coupled with the salty, crunch of the olive with the oily feel on my
  9. That is so true. Most of the time, we are sad not because we crossed the line but because we hadn't. We can let fear keep us from our next adventure. Phillip needs it badly.
  10. Thanks Gary. There are points in every person’s life and at different points when things are challenging. I think we help each other by showing how we deal with it. We can cry, be sad, and then breathe deeply and step forward. I agree. Thanks for the awesome review.
  11. Sully is a blood thirsty demon, but I think he may have endearing qualities, you know, down deep. Thanks for the awesome review.
  12. You Betcha! By Cole Matthews Protagonist – John, the architect from Minnesota Goal – Wild and free Obstacle – The bartender from Seattle Action – Learns to foresee the future “John, you have never done a crazy thing in your life,” the lovely blonde bartender said, setting down his gin and tonic, light on the gin. “What makes you think you’d like something like that?” John cleared his throat, annoyed and clearly frustrated with Belinda’s reaction to his
  13. Thanks for the review. I thought Sully was rather classic in his vampire-ness, very Bram Stoker, and not Twilight at all. I do like the idea of a vampire drinking in the emotions of the victim along with the blood. I believe such supernatural creatures would feast on the feelings along with the sustenance. I like the idea of a vampire sensing the mood and even reading the past in his victims from afar. I love Lestat as well. I appreciate the comment. Thanks!!!!
  14. Hahaha!!! Yeah, I don't think servants of vampires get pension plans. Generally their retirement is rather bloody and sudden. Thanks for the lovely review. We have one more day of prompting so I hope you stick around.
  15. Good morning, and thanks for the review. The last things we are feeling are doom and gloom. We randomly picked a prompt about a vampire, which given the nature of the creature is rather ominous. So, that's the way I went with it. I'm on team Nosferatu!!! Hahaha!!! I appreciate the concern, but last night I baked cookies, we played Scrabble, and watched another lovely Eighties movie. We are mostly laughing and giggling!! One more to come.
  16. Thanks for the review. I'm not sure I see melancholy in the story. I certainly don't need a boost. I'm having a blast!!! Perhaps the nature of the prompt is a bit negative, however, I believe vampires don't usually part ways with servants in a congenial way. I wanted this vampire to be as ferocious as Nosferatu, and that's the image I had in my head. Don't fear!!! I'm not in a sad place at all. More fun today with our final antics!!!
  17. The Taste of Emotion With a new outlook on life, a 400-year-old vampire becomes obsessed with a neighbor. Girard opened the lid, taking note of the heavy draperies lining the chamber. Not a single ray of light could find its way inside, becoming a danger to his master. The shadows from flickering torches set into sconces on the walls gave the room an ominous feel. Please, he thought, like this night was different than other nights. It was the same, always, just
  18. Thank you so much. I think I did pretty well. There is a melancholy which seeps into the basement of our minds and lies in wait for when we 'go there.' That is a good characterization of the situation. Writing helps me process this usually. Perhaps it was time for me to do so. I appreciate the thoughtful insight! Thanks!!!
  19. Thank you for sharing. Perhaps some of my instinct in this prompt was from a residual fear or an understanding extended family and immediate family are relationships that need nurturing to remain connected. My parents are alive and my grandma is still kicking at 98 years old, but there is always that wonder. My niece and nephews are older and less likely to attend events. Phillip may have been my subconscious worry. Your references are interesting, because they certainly tell a tale of their own. After writing it, Valkyrie and I both considered what was happening next after Phillip walked across the imaginary line. What interaction would Phillip have with his neighbors? We will see if that comes to fruition.
  20. Thanks. I didn't have time to plan it, so once again, I wonder where this came from. We're having a wonderful time, so where did the melancholy come from. It's interesting to consider. I really appreciate the kinds words.
  21. The Senses of a Heart By Cole Matthews Moldy oranges Phillip opened the fridge and peered inside. His mind was racing as he looked for a snack. The containers of leftovers, spaghetti, pot roast, and a bag of English muffins weren’t promising. They also threatened his new diet, which he was trying now to lose about twenty pounds and a couple of inches from his waist. He crouched down, knees creaking, and slid open the fruit drawer, breathing deeply. A couple of wrinkled
  22. It's overcast and rainy here as well. There's some reading to do this weekend. Yeah!!!!
  23. I agree, wholeheartedly. However, reading all you people's comments has opened up some ideas about today's upcoming prompt session with Valkyrie. We'll see what you've got the wheels in my mind to churn out. We are having a blast with this trip. Talking out writing with your peers is really an exercise for the mind!!! Thanks for the encouraging comment!!!
  24. I'm going to pose a couple of question in reference to your comment. I agree with your sentiment, of course, but consider this. What if you're married to someone of the opposite sex and your desire for another of the same sex creeps up on you? Perhaps it wasn't something you felt strongly, but it comes upon you like a thief in the night, stealing your heart? What do you do? Your comment has engaged my mind in another contemplation today. Expect more prompts today!!! Thank you!
  25. So true. We have been discussing the nature of love and so perhaps that's what came through. Or else, Randy and I have been binge watching Weeds and the ideas came through from that. I don't know. Love is a mustard seed which can sprout in whatever place, but when plant, may not germinate. I appreciate your comment. Thanks!!!
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