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Cole Matthews

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  1. You are so right. That’s the challenge with kids like Clay. Teens with issues and no place to go are screwed. In this story, a guy is compelled to help. That’s where it starts. I hope you enjoy the story and the challenges we face doing good things. Really interesting comments. Thank you!
  2. Barbed Wire Heart had Rush meeting Ben. Ben and Rush brought Clay to Boy River and the discomfort was part of that story. It became more difficult with Morton’s Fork, when Rush made and kept his promise. The next step is a family coming together. Families have history and challenges. This is the start and Jake is part of it. Thanks for some wonderful questions! 😘
  3. Discovery – Chapter 1 Ben Miller banged the side of the computer, not to get the Outlook program working, but to punish it for letting another one of his goddamned ex’s emails through. He’d blocked Romer’s various pleas for at least a month now. He’d even stopped the teenager’s as well. Didn’t matter. Romer somehow managed to cheat the blocking software and Clay was too much of a child of the Internet for Ben’s efforts to do much good. The teen, Clay, routinely sent emails that drove him bon
  4. Jake's story will continue with the next part called Discovery. Something terrible happened to him. His loved ones are going to want answers. There will be many questions as well, but ultimately, we'll know the truth. Thanks for your comment. I hope you enjoy the next part.
  5. Haha!! Let's hope Hannibal isn't in this story. Yikes!
  6. That's partly what I wanted to do. I wanted a victim who's an actual character with history, feelings, hopes and some bad habits. I hope you'll enjoy finding out what happened to him. Thanks for your comment. Let's figure this out!
  7. Hahaha!!! The blog is important, as is getting to know our victim. I'm glad you're as excited as I am. Thanks for your support!!!
  8. Yes, things are changing quite quickly. We will meet up with some old friends in the next chapter. The next part is called Discovery. Thanks for the comment.
  9. Jake's story is the real story, because his writing will be part of the investigation. Keep that in mind, his blog posts are an important piece of evidence. Thanks for commenting and being a part of this. I appreciate it.
  10. Yes it did. I'm so glad to see you're on board for this story. It's going to be fun. Thanks!!
  11. Cole Matthews

    Prologue

    We will see! I'm a crafty one.
  12. Cole Matthews

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    We'll see what killed him and what the situation is. At this point, the media is reporting it as an accident. I hate to say too much, but I hope you enjoy the ride! It will be bumpy and have interesting sights. That's all I'll say!
  13. Cole Matthews

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    Well, you don't have to figure it out. i hope you just enjoy the ride. This will be more of a novel with a mystery inside than a whodunit. I hope to intrigue and entertain you. Thanks for reading and thanks for being you. I enjoy you very much.
  14. Cole Matthews

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    I'm glad you're excited too. I hope to put many of the lessons I've learned over the past couple years about writing into this story. So far, it seems to be working really well. Thanks for being on board!
  15. Cole Matthews

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    So do I. I'm having a blast with this story. The concept is something I thought up when I was in my twenties and now the story seems to have come to fruition. I hope you love it!! Thanks so much.
  16. Cole Matthews

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    Thanks for the thoughtful review. You had be chuckling with the 'pondered the concept of justice' comment. There is probably no way to achieve perfect justice, because once something is lost or taken, it can't be restored again without injury. Such is the case in this story. I'm hoping Jake's family's tribulations serve as an example of trying to find peace, because I think that's a key part of the equation.
  17. In Loving Memory of Jacob Ogden – born July 22, 1983, died September 17, 2017 Jacob R. Odgen, 34, of Minneapolis, died in his sleep of accidental causes on September 17th, 2017. Jake was born July 22, 1983, at Abbott Northwestern Hospital in Minneapolis. He worked as a waiter, and was returning to his research studies at the University of Minnesota in clinical psychology. He is survived by his mother, Winifred Ogden, Minneapolis, and father Darren Ogden, Forest Lake; his sister
  18. Happy Halloween my friend!!!
  19. The prologue will be posted tonight. This is the first chapter, so to speak. I’ll end Sobriety with the last segment as well. Next week we begin the next part of So Weeps with “Discovery.” Thanks Lisa! 😘
  20. Don't be scared. Jake never hurt anyone physically. He knows what he did. He regrets things, but it's not really his fault. He's a good guy. Thanks for the wonderful comments. We will see more tomorrow.
  21. Jake is having issues. He's not drunk, but he definitely put himself into a problematic situation. You are right about something, Jake isn't in a good place in the end. Your instincts are absolutely right. Thanks,
  22. Jake has it rough. You are right. We will see more tomorrow. I can't wait to see what you think. Thank you, Cole
  23. I love you guys!!!!
  24. Interesting. There isn't anyone really 'evil' in this story. But, I like where this is going.
  25. Gaslight is a wonderful movie and story. There may be elements within this tale reflecting those ideas. However, I'm not a fan of 'gaslighting' . Thanks for some awesome insights!
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