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    Chapter 1

    Cole Matthews commented on CarlHoliday's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I love Halloween and this story about the old man was precious. It was the kind of dream kids have about that time in their lives. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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    Chapter 1

    Cole Matthews commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Chapter 1

    What a delightful tale and full of interesting creatures. I liked the brownie and crow's interactions. There's pumpkin carving and even angels. Very nice!
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    Chapter 1

    Cole Matthews commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Very spooky and a tale of horrific fortunes, that were finally allowed to rest in peace. There appeared to be a purpose to his mom's revulsion to Halloween. A monster did unspeakable things on that holiday many times. Perhaps her dislike of it made the narrator become obsessed and end up releasing their souls. That;'s an interesting twist now isn't it?
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    Chapter 1

    Cole Matthews commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter 1

    It was a good story, with high school kids doing immature things, and it felt real. I liked how each individual had some traits that made them different. The story line was interesting, and there was even some nuanced tensions due to irritation between the individuals. There were personality quirks and differences in opinion. Those added to the overall grittiness and made the climax, the Halloween trick, all the more natural. Great job!!!
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    Chapter 1

    Cole Matthews commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Hilarious and so cute! I’m still chuckling 😎
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    This is a delightful story with well-rounded characters and a consuming plot. Linden is very complete even without much detail. The reader can easily see him. The narrator, Woody, is equally as complete and the use of first person works in this scenario. I would have liked more of Sam Hain, the holiday, and little bits more of Drake, is it Mandrake per chance? But, I could smell the smoke, feel the heat and the pain of the carving of the flesh/wood. I enjoyed letting my imagination fill in the blanks. There are a few grammar issues, but nothing to detract from the story. Great Job!!!
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    Day 7 Eddie called me. He wanted to talk, and even though I’m still horrified at my overreaction during the panic attack, I agreed to meet him. He sounded kind of odd, like something was wrong. We did date for over a year so I do have some experience with how he reacts to things. I can tell by his tone, his inflection, and even his silences, how he feels. He’s the one I let get away, I never should have. I guess we live and learn, if we survive it, that is. Before I tell y
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    I love this comment, and question. Consider their relationship? What is going on? After all, we are looking at Jake flailing about. Lots of interesting stuff going on. Jake's reflections are his own. We are seeing his words, not objective reporting. The blog will matter later. Thanks for your ideas!!!
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    Let's take your last comment first, because it's interesting. Jake probably has irked Nats with his sobriety. Also, did his issues impact her? Is she an alcoholic? We don't know. Second paragraph asks if Jake is manipulative? I think he has to be. Nats is dealing with it, but she chose him as a friend as well. There is some co-dependency going on, perhaps. Then, there is Jake's mother and her issues. I won't comment right now. Who handed down what issues? Thanks for some wonderful ideas. Cole.
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    Very true. Great insights. Jake is reacting to how his mother and his best friend are seeing him. All the characters in this story have problems, and we are seeing the first of them. Lots to come. Thanks for the comments.
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    Ding, ding, ding!!!! Things are exactly as they seem, however, there is also more to the story. Yeah!! He needs to make decisions and so do others. You are so right! Thanks for the comments.
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    Oh, you are insightful. Nats is hurt, obviously. Jake is occupied by his own problems. That being said, there are now things in motion. Jake's blog is his interpretation of the events in his life. Remember that. It matters more than you know now.
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    Nats is reacting as a person can at times reacts. There is lots going on. Of course, her statements are hurtful and quite rude. Lots more coming up. Thanks for an awesome review!
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    Jake has been too accepting of his mother's bad behavior. She doesn't see it as using him, I'm guessing. Nats is another story. Thanks for your comments. Maybe she needs a break.
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    Remember, this is Jake's response to interactions with other loved ones in his life. His blog contains his viewpoints. That being said, you are right about both his mother and Nats. They love him, and yet, they have problems with him. As usual Al, you are dissecting things and seeing my ideas wink through the haze. This is only the first section of three. I'm just saying. Thanks!
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    Happy Birthday!!!
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    Yes!!! And sometimes there is some spiciness hidden in the mix!!! Yes, we had a great time and all you commenters and readers made it even better. Thank you!!!
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    Yes, sometimes we can get a surprise about the inner workings of person. I know I'm usually surprised as well. Thanks so much for the insightful comment.
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    Hahahaha!!!!!!
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    John probably has more to show us. I'll let you know when he's ready to come out a play!!!! Thanks for the wonderful comments.
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    John's a bit milktoast, but then you never know what lies beneath the layer of vanilla frosting... Thanks for an awesome review that made me giggle.
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    I do think this will turn into a 1550 Loring Lane story. I've got it all planned out. Thanks for a fantastic weekend of fun and frolicking!!!
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    Thanks Gary!!! Just in time for Halloween and all the ghoulies who are creeping around ready to GET US!!!! I appreciate the comment.
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    Yeah, not many, that's for sure!!!
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    Two days is hard, but it's even worse on day three and four. Jake has to figure out how to stop hiding from himself, you are absolutely right. That's precisely what he's doing, but he's a pretty smart cookie. Thanks for the great insights!
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